Research Position Paper Final- Aime Lonsdorf

Are Americans really obese?

We have all heard it: America is obese. We are an obese nation; this notion can be attributed to Surgeon General David Satcher. Satcher identified the problem of America having the largest international body mass index (BMI) in 2001. In 2001, many medical professionals believed that a person’s obesity can be calculated through their BMI, a system that calculates the ratio of a person’s height and weight (Surgeon General). However, this is no longer the case. The acceptance of the BMI system is faltering because it is heavily flawed. It is gender and age specific in children under 15, it uses the same criteria across the board for all men and women, and the system cannot differentiate between fat and muscle. For over a decade, medical professionals passed these flaws off as minor because there was no better alternative system. But, realizing that a flawed system cannot keep being incorporated into American medical history, scientists are striving to find other methods that will accurately measure obesity. Since the BMI system is clearly not effective, many people are beginning to wonder whether or not Americans are in fact as overweight as the BMI system said they were in 2001.

The Surgeon General and his team defined America’s obesity by the BMI system which measures the amount of fat, the flabby tissue that gives a person their out of shape appearance, a person has in comparison to their height and weight; “BMI is calculated as weight in pounds divided by the square of the height in inches, multiplied by 703. Alternatively, BMI can be calculated as weight in kilograms divided by the square of the hight in meters (The Lancet).” Although the system is faulty in some areas, medical professionals deem it an accurate method of measurement primarily based upon the fact that there is no other system of obesity measurement that has been universally accepted. A BMI over 25 is considered to be overweight, signaling that a person has more fat than he or she is supposed to have. When the Surgeon General made his announcement in 2001, Americans were considered to be overweight with a cumulative BMI of approximately 41.5.

But, the BMI system has various limitations that were not taken into account during the Surgeon General’s announcement. These limitations prevent doctors from accurately providing an exact obesity rating. In adolescents, obesity is defined as age and gender specific or, as anyone ranking above the 95th percentile range in the CDC BMI-for-age-growth charts. These charts easily identifies a child’s BMI by comparing their height and weight growth yearly. A child’s percentile ranking is relative to the ranking of other growing adolescents in the same age and gender grouping. These charts not only help assess growing children who are overweight, but also underweight. Each child is measured with these charts by their doctors during their yearly physical.

Research has proven that although the BMI measurements claim to measure body fat, it does not do so as directly as people think. For example, the system can overestimate the amount of fat in a person(s) who is muscular and underestimate the amount of a person(s) who have lost muscle mass, such as the elderly. It does not make any difference to the BMI system whether you are a 21 year-old olympic athlete or a 75 year-old, immobile man (BMI Not Accurate). Prime examples of the BMI system mistakenly classifying people are basketball star Kobe Bryant and actor Brad Pitt, none of whom appear to be overweight. Arnold Schwarzenegger, a body builder, was categorized into the highest level of obesity due to the amount of muscle mass he retains (Devlin). With clearly faulty classifications such as these, how can we trust the system?

The blatantly defective evidence that disproves the BMI system leads to the question of whether or not America really was the most obese nation in 2001 as previously stated by the Surgeon General and if it is still on the track towards chronic obesity. According to a 2004 study conducted by The American Journal of Clinical Nutrition, calculating a persons’ waist circumference (WC) as opposed to their BMI is a better predictor of obesity risk and illnesses that come with being overweight than the BMI system. LiveStrong.com article Alternatives to BMI confirms this theory by stating that measuring the natural waist can give an almost accurate indication of the amount of abdominal fat a person contains. Women with WC of 35 inches or more and men with a WC of 40 inches or more are considered to be risk factors (Holley, Casey). People who are in the “risky range” are more likely to develop side effects of obesity such as diabetes and heart failure. The WC is as simple as measuring a person’s belt size; to make it more accurate, doctors factor in other elements of a patient’s medical history. This enables them to find out what diseases each individual person is capable of developing. WC is more effective than the BMI because it calculates a person on an individual scale, not the wide ranged scale that is used for the BMI. Although these studies are not yet widely approved by national medical professionals, they are quickly on their way to being approved and providing a better method of calculating how obese a person is.

Regardless of the actuality of the Surgeon General’s announcement in 2001, Americans have begun to work towards becoming less obese. Government programs have tried to make sure the US does not remain the world’s fattest nation. The government has involved itself by helping maintain and lower obesity levels in Americans. There has been an increase in the amount of private intervention being put out by privately owned companies and non-profit organizations. This is commonly known as government intervention, or actions taken by the government in order to affect the decisions made by individuals on either economic or social matters.

However, due to the fact that people highly value their privacy and ability to make their own decisions, government intervention into the personal lives of the public is constantly being questioned. Many people do not like government officials telling them what is good for them, how to enforce good eating habits to their children, and even telling school systems what can or cannot be served for lunch. The government has already involved itself into the lives of Americans; they have done this so much and so well that people hardly notice it anymore. For example the federal government constantly intervenes in the lives of Americans by installing traffic lights, setting curfew laws, and creating school curriculums. But, when the Surgeon General made his announcement about obesity, many people rejected early attempts of regulating the nations obesity levels. Weight, is a personal issue and for a while, a great deal of people felt that it was too personal for government intervention they do not want to be told that they are too fat by someone who is not a doctor. However, over time, people have become more aware and accustomed to the obesity epidemic, primarily to both government and private intervention.

One major issue with the government trying to reduce and maintain the current levels of obesity in America is the fact that their intervention would have to surpass the economic states of some areas of the countries. People residing in low-income areas tend to maintain higher obesity levels due to the simple fact that eating healthy is expensive. In most low-income places, a 12 pack of Cosmic Brownies is equivalent to the price of about two packages of grapes. So, naturally, to save money, people tend to eat more fattening foods.  In places such as this, there is also less money being given to school districts where there are less healthy alternatives for students to eat during lunch and snack time. The government, along with many private companies and non-profit organizations have been pushing for more natural grown foods in schools, such as fruits and vegetables, and healthier options to be provided for students, pretzels as opposed to cookies. Many companies have been donating money to get healthier options for students to eat and providing money for these options to become more accessible and affordable. Leading Medical Journal, The Lancet, states the government should be responsible for making healthy foods cheaper and affordable stating that they should be easily accessible at both private and public schools along with public universities. So, a possibility to increase health the over all health in the general public would be to produce cheaper produce and for the government to fund more home-grown produce, such as establishing new farms and giving money to already existing ones. If fresh produce is more affordable, there is a possibility that they will become more desirable and regularly consumed. An issue with this would be that this idea would be opposing foreign trade and would be slightly more costly.

One of the toughest forms of intervention is trying to influence the private sphere of people. The private sphere is a space known only to the person who possesses it; it contains their thoughts, desires and knowledge. Republicans feel that there should be little to no government involvement into this realm while Democrats feel that there should be a great deal of intervention. But with an issue such as obesity, something needs to be done. Bureaucrats cannot sit down with every family during every meal to make sure good eating habits are being enforced and proper exercise routines are being followed.  One possible way of doing this, according Kersh and Monroe, is to create an even stronger sense of social disapproval. The idea is to alter the current social atmosphere and have fast food chains, and other fattening foods, be thought of as highly unacceptable and even detrimental to the overall health of a person. Supersize Me, a documentary study about McDonald’s and other fast corporations, has already given out a simple form of social disapproval: fast food makes you fat. Since the documentary was released, there has been a dramatic chance in the way the fast food industry was run.

Almost immediately after the documentary was released, it became a common belief that eating at restaurants such as McDonald’s and Taco Bell were one of the key factors that played a role in American obesity. Contrary to this popular and often substantive belief, not all fast food restaurants are as detrimental to a person’s weight as previously believed. McDonald’s is a prime example of this. Ever since the movie Super Size Me was released in 2004, exposing the dangers of a “super sized (Super Size Me),” or extra-large, meal, McDonald’s has moved away from its long, publicly given title of the most unhealthy fast food establishment. While the movie helped change a great deal about McDonald’s and numerous other fast food establishments, they did not do all the work that has ranked McDonald’s 8th out of the top ten healthiest fast food establishments, according to a consensus produced by Health Magazine (Health Mag.). Other fast food chains such as Wendy’s or Taco Bell do not even make the cut. The magazine sent out a team of researchers to survey 100 fast food places, and scored them on factors such as the use of healthy fats and sodium counts, the availability of nutritional facts (which was previously hard to find in fast food chains), and the use of organic and natural produce. The article states that the once thought of as unhealthy restaurant is paving the way for other fast food industries in the currently “heart- and waist-friendly (Health Mag.)” society. One of the establishment’s most popular new techniques that has been incorporated into other establishments is the option to have a side of fruit with every happy meal instead of french fries. And, if you must have the fries, their french fries are baked in CDA approved heart-healthy canola oil. Also, the chain offers low-calorie options such as snack wraps which consist of a mere 260 calories (Health Mag.).

So, they suggest that another positive form of influence to public behavior can be achieved through medical-science which means allowing people to know facts about being overweight and what it means to be physically fit. According to the two, the facts do not have to be entirely accurate; the idea is to convey the true message that being overweight is not good and will soon be socially unacceptable. Also, people should be able to get help outside of the gym, according to the authors, who want there to be group meetings similar to meetings set up for drug addicts. The demon user/ industry effect is to influence Americans to feel like people who eat poorly and industries that promote poor health habits are “demons,” or inherently bad. Surprisingly, it is easier than it seems to put a demonic spin on negative foods. In 2009, leading expert in childhood obesity Robert Lusting’s lecture, “Sugar: the Bitter Truth,” got over 800 thousand views on YouTube with a viewer growth rate of approximately 50 thousand views a month. The hour and a half long speech persuasively lists sugar as a toxin and a poison and often refers to it as evil. Toxic sugar is not only the common white household substance, scientifically known as sucrose, but also high-fructose corn syrup, which Lusting calls the “most demonizing addictive known to man (Taubes, Gary).” Not only does sugar provide consumers with empty calories, calories that provide no nutritional value, but can cause numerous health issues such as obesity, hypertension and diabetes. However, this is not to say that people should not be eating positive sugars: the sugars that come from fruits, vegetables and whole grains that provide antioxidants, energy and often enzymes that encourage a natural boost in metabolism, leading to weight loss. Foods that contain toxic sugars, such as anything processed, from a fast food restaurant, and many desserts should be avoided. Since Americans have acknowledged their growing obesity problem, there has been a rapid increase in the over all health of the American Public and a decline in the nations average BMI.

However, most of the sugars that were attacked by Lusting in his lecture are incorporated into fast foods and other processed goods. Yet, it is not useful to place all the blame of weight gain onto one food. While Lusting suggests and enforces the idea of cutting out sugar entirely, the Dietitians Association of Australia does not recommend this at all. In their medical journal entry Sugar: not so toxic,  they state that when it comes to sugar, men and women should try to eat it in moderation and limit their intake of foods high in added sugar and low in nutritional value such as soda and candy (DAA). If you have not seen the commercials proclaiming the goodness of high fructose corn syrup, then you should. Aside from their comical attributes, they are not wrong. What was conventionally known to be bad for your body, and toxic, according to Lusting, is far from it. Promoted by the Corn Refiners Association (CRA), the attempts to get high fructose corn syrup out of the toxic range are surprisingly being supported by the American Medical Association which recently announced that corn syrup does not contribute to obesity (McLaughlin, Lisa).

According to a study conducted by one of the top medical journals, The Lancet, as a follow-up to the study produced by the Surgeon General in 2001, when modern international BMIs are compared, America is not even in the top 10 fattest nations. America has lost its perviously held number one spot to the small nation of Nauru. Over the last decade or so, the push for government intervention and personal motivation to get fit, and healthy has paid off. While American men are rated 10th on the international BMI scale, American women are ranked 36th with a BMI of 28.7. This is proof that, obesity can be sustained and maintained at its current levels and even prevented for the future. The truth is, it is very hard to influence the public and personal sphere of America. But, if it is reached, it is possible that obesity can be maintained at its current levels and even possibly decreased and one day stopped.

Although many aspects of American society are getting healthier: McDonald’s has become a considerably healthy establishment, the last fifteen years or so has seen a spike in the organic and natural foods industry and, in part due to First Lady Michelle Obama’s “get fit” programs, it has become increasingly more important for Americans to exercise and consume healthier foods and yet, in 2011, obesity rates increased in 16 states and the rates did not decline in any state (F as in Fat). According to F as in Fat: How obesity threatens America’s future 2011, a report from Trusts for Americans Health (TFAH) and the Robert Wood Johnson Foundation (RWJF), 12 states  now have obesity rates above 30 percent; merely four years ago, only one state had a percent ranking that high. Shocked by these statistics the report examined exactly how obesity has grown over the  past two decades (F as in Fat). Twenty years ago, no state had an obesity rating of above 15 percent. This year, in contrast, 38 out of the 50 US states produced obesity ratings of over 25 percent. For the 7th year in a row, Mississippi has maintained its leading spot as the number one state with the highest level of adult obesity (F as in Fat). The report noted that the fastest growing obesity levels reside in the south: Alabama and Tennessee have experienced intensified rates; this year, the slowest growing levels occurred in Washington DC, Colorado and Connecticut. The highest obesity rates remain in racial and ethnic minority adults, along with low-income families (F as in Fat).

While it might seem like Americans are becoming more obese, many public health experts disagree. Since the Surgeon General’s first analysis of American obesity, not enough time has passed to correctly analyze recent data (Rochman).  Although obesity rates are not declining, these numbers have nothing to do with the efforts made to prevent future obesity. This does not mean that an individual’s personal goals and efforts to obtain their dream weight are not working. Dr. William Dietz, director of the division of nutrition for the CDC, claims that efforts to ward off obesity are in fact working fine. Comparing the anti obesity efforts to the 1950 anti-smoking efforts when medical professionals released the conclusive evidence about the link between smoking and cancer, the doctor asserts that for approximately 15 years, smoking rates remained at a plateau and even increased for sometime (Rochman). It is the same concept with tackling the issue of obesity in America: it needs time and further developed tactics to achieve reduced levels. Ironically, these medical professionals are basing their evidence off of a faulty scale for evaluating a person’s body fat percentage.

If the BMI system is clearly flawed and there are other better and more efficient methods of measuring the percentage of a person’s body fat, why are doctors still using it? If a person cannot accurately measure their actual fat percentage, how can we assume that America was at one time the world’s fattest nation? While it is clear that alternative methods to the BMI system are not yet medically accepted, it is also clear that to keep using the BMI system would not be beneficial towards the medical community in any means. The only absolute proof that has come from the realization that the BMI system is heavily flawed is the notion that America may in fact not be as obese as though of by the world’s populations. It is important that medical professionals continue to test alternative theories so that the public can be provided with a more reliable method of calculating a person’s body fat percentage. Based on the fact that the nation’s current obesity levels were raked based on a system that is not accurate, it is impossible to accurately identify whether or not Americans are actually getting fatter or fitter.

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This is a segment of a four part study that was produced by The Lancet, the world’s leading medical journal. It examines what was known about obesity, at the time the study was conducted, the economic and health burdens of obesity, the psychology behind it and the actions that need to be taken to prevent and end it. Although there are already some preventive methods such as “get fit plans,” the efforts have not even begun. Researchers have calculated the effects of behavior and different levels of policy intervention to come up with a preventative method to global obesity. Such include factors that will “..improve the food and built environments, cross-cutting actions (such as leadership, healthy public policies, and monitoring), and much greater funding for prevention programmes. Increased investment in population obesity monitoring would improve the accuracy of forecasts and evaluations. The integration of actions within existing systems into both health and non-health sectors (trade, agriculture, transport, urban planning, and development) can greatly increase the influence and sustainability of policies.”

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This article discusses a study produced byThe Lancet, the world’s leading medical journal, that proves that America is not the world’s fattest nation.For years, Americans have been believing that they have been living in the world’s most obese country but, according to a study conducted by one of the world’s leading medical journals, The Lancet, America was never even in the top ten of the world’s fattest nations. America is just the worlds most industrialized nation, home to many fast food chains and large portion sizes; there are a significant number of fatter nations that have become this way due to the sudden introduction of American based products such as fast food chains and other processed food items. Obesity is measured through the body-mass-index (BMI), a system that calculates the amount of fat a person should have compared to their weight and height. The BMI states that anyone with a BMI over 25 is considered overweight. The Average BMI for the USA as a whole is 28.4, ranked 20th internationally. A noticeable decrease in the amount of overweight American women was acknowledged throughout the study. (Could this be due to media spins? Are they in fact having a positive impact on society, as opposed to the negative image “being thin” currently has?:: a section of my counterintuitive note)But, unfortunately, while the BMI for the American population has dropped substantially, it is not enough to say that America is slimming down. Sadly, the rest of the world is merely getting fatter.

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This source was found through a quick search on Academic Search Premier. The article discusses BMC Public Health’s main goal: the discussion of how childhood obesity is a prominent issue. Childhood obesity effects not only a child throughout his or her childhood, but follows them for years to come. Thats why, according to the article, preventing obesity early on is very important. The research team established a prevention method, STOPP which was based on a similar Swedish program, CHH, combats creating a balanced diet, encouraging physical activity, and evenly distributed sleeping patterns.

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The Scarsdale Diet was created by cardiologist Dr. Herman Tarnower and is one of the most effective international diet plans that allows users to loose up to 20 lbs in two weeks. It is a healthier alternative to other popular plans such as Atkins because it includes what they consider to be “complex carbohydrates” such as bread and fruit. The basis is healthy eating: limiting your intake of most carbs and eliminating others. The diet works by using a strict two week diet plan, and considerable exercise, followed by a week span of not dieting.

    1. http://www.letsmove.gov/

First Lady Michelle Obama’s “Let’s Move Program” focuses on getting kids to get out and get active. She targets healthy eating, as well. Her program is centered through TV networks favored by children across America such as the Disney Channel and Nickelodeon. The idea is to influence American children at a young age of healthy alternatives.

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The article, written by Rogan Kersh and James Monroe, describes the politics of obesity and the seven steps that the government should take to prevent it. Despite previous thoughts, the American government has always been highly involved with the regulation of obesity. It is not just a recent phenomena. In 2001, Surgeon General David Satcher’s called for the American government and public to help fight obesity by saying that the obesity rate has reached epidemic proportions. The problem with fighting obesity is that, unlike other health problems, it comes from private behavior. So, the government was faced with an issue: how can they influence the public sphere? (counterintuitive note). According to the article, you can control private, personal environments through social disapproval, medical-science, self help, media spins, and the demon user and industry concepts. Another way the government can help prevent and maintain obesity is through mass movements in the political sphere, such as the introduction of more interest group action.

F as in Fat. “F as in Fat: How Obesity Threatens America’s Future 2011.” – Trust for America’s Health. Robert Wood Johnson Foundation, Etc. Web. 12 Apr. 2012. <http://www.healthyamericans.org/report/88/>.

This source discusses a study that provides information about how obesity in America has been altered over the past couple of years. Over all, it has been discovered that Americans are not as obese as they were in 2001 when the Surgeon General made his announcement that America had an obesity epidemic. It has become clear that the nations population has actually become more obese than a decade ago, according to data provided by the study.

Rochman, Bonnie, Maia Szalavitz, and Alice Park. “CDC: U.S. Obesity Rates Plateau Overall, But Men and Boys Are Getting Fatter | Healthland | TIME.com.” Time. Time. Web. 12 Apr. 2012. <http://healthland.time.com/2012/01/17/u-s-obesity-rates-remain-stubbornly-high

The authors aim to discuss how obesity rates may appear to have gotten larger in American. The reality of this evidence, however, is that the statistics have hit a plateau due to the fact that Americans have not had enough time to generate enough statistical evidence that can prove obesity rates are declining in America. This can be compared to the non-smoking movement that occurred several decades ago; it takes time to take effect.

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The source discusses that the BMI system is not accurately reflective of modern standards for what is actually over weight as opposed to what the faulty BMI system claims. The article details a conclusive study produced by a Michigan State University research team that proved, as previously noted, BMI does not accurately calculate body fat. The major issue that occurs is that the same criteria for BMI are used for all adults of a specific gender. According to the research team, it does not make any difference to the BMI system whether you are a 21 year-old olympic athlete or a 75 year-old, immobile man. The evidence proves that when evaluating obesity, the BMI system should be used with caution. Also talked about in the article are possible alternative methods that could be used to calculate a man or woman’s obesity; none of these studies have been proven accurate, however. But, the most promising is measuring a person’s height to waist circumference which has thus far proven successful and is gaining a high medical reputation when it comes to evaluating diseases that often come as a result of obesity.

Super Size Me. Dir. Morgan Spurlock. Perf. Morgan Spurlock. Cameo, 2005.

This source is a documentary that was produced by Morgan Spurlock who voluntary set out to discover the health risks of the fast food industry. Specifically, he studied McDonald’s. Throughout his documentary, it became clear that the fast food industry of the early 2000s was not the same as we now perceive it to be. Spurlock exposed the negative health and nutritional benefits that consumers eat when ordering a big mac, the dangers of a super sized option and the way the fast food industry gets around detailing their nutritional facts. As a result of his documentary, there has been a surprising change in the fast food industry that has made food chains such as McDonald’s strive for better and healthier options.

Health Mag. “America’s Top 10 Healthiest Fast Food Places.” Health Magazine. Web. <http://www.health.com/health/article/0,,20411588_5,00.html>.

This article discusses a survey produced by Health Magazine that analyzed over 100 fast food establishments, narrowing them down to the top 10 healthiest places to eat at. Their criteria consisted of: the use of healthy fats and sodium counts, the availability of nutritional facts (which was previously hard to find in fast food chains), and the use of organic and natural produce. As it turns out, McDonald’s was ranked 8th on the top ten list and is not as unhealthy as people claim it to be. One of the establishment’s most popular new techniques that has been incorporated into other establishments is the option to have a side of fruit with every happy meal instead of french fries. And, if you have to have the fries, their french fries are baked in CDA approved heart-healthy canola oil. Also, the chain offers low calorie options such as snack wraps which consist of a mere 260 calories.

DAA. “Dietitians Association of Australia.” Sugar – Not so ‘toxic’. Web. 09 Apr. 2012. <http://daa.asn.au/for-the-media/hot-topics-in-nutrition/sugar-not-so-toxic/>

The source asserts that sugar, which is popularly known as a toxic food that highly contributes to weight gain and obesity, is not as big of a risk factor as many medical professionals are claiming. This study was concluded by the Dietitians Association. In their medical journal entry Sugar: not so toxic,  they state that when it comes to sugar, men and women should try to eat it in moderation and limit their intake of foods high in added sugar and low in nutritional value such as soda and candy.

McLaughlin, Lisa. “Is High-Fructose Corn Syrup Really Good for You?” Time. Time, 17 Sept. 2008. Web. 09 Apr. 2012. <http://www.time.com/time/health/article/0,8599,1841910,00.html>.

The above source argues that while high fructose corn syrup is conventionally thought of as bad for the body and the equivalent to sucrose, or sugar, it is actually nothing similar. Promoted by the Corn Refiners Association (CRA), the attempts to get high fructose corn syrup out of the toxic range are surprisingly being supported by the American Medical Association which recently announced that corn syrup does not contribute to obesity.

“About Body Mass Index for Children and Teens.” Centers for Disease Control and Prevention. Centers for Disease Control and Prevention, 13 Sept. 2011. Web. 21 Mar. 2012. <http://www.cdc.gov/healthyweight/assessing/bmi/childrens_bmi/about_childrens_bmi.html>

The article clearly defines the BMI system and obesity in children and adults. For children, the BMI system is gender specific. It measures how fat, or obese a child is based on their weight and height. Although the body mass index does not directly measure fat, it is a reliable source to indicate how over or underweight a child is. A doctor can calculate a child’s BMI by placing his or her height or weight on a growth chart; a growth chart is able to calculate a child’s weight range in regards to other children his or her age across the US.

Taubes, Gary. “Is Sugar Toxic?” NY Times Online. Web.http://www.nytimes.com/2011/04/17/magazine/mag-17Sugar-t.html?pagewanted=all>.

The source defines sugar as the most toxic thing a person can put into his or her body. Sugar produces excess empty calories that can lead to multiple medical disorders such as heart failure and diabetes and also is a key factor in obesity. Although there are good sugars, “salable sugars” such as the ones found at the dinner table, should be omitted from every day meals.

http://www.womenshealthmag.com/health/fat-acceptance

Many people are learning to live a healthy lifestyle by eating right and exercising but not always striving for thin. The article discusses being happy with the body you are given. The article talks about the negative effects on the current “health craze” on a persons body and how it directly correlates with eating disorders such as bulimia and anorexia. It is counterintuitive to the entire point that my paper is trying to make.

http://medical-dictionary.thefreedictionary.com/Morbidly+obese

Defined in the article are the definitions of obesity and morbid obesity. “Obesity is an abnormal accumulation of body fat, usually 20% or more over an individual’s ideal body weight. Obesity is associated with increased risk of illness, disability, and death. The branch of medicine that deals with the study and treatment of obesity is known as bariatrics. As obesity has become a major health problem in the United States, bariatrics has become a separate medical and surgical specialty.” The article then progresses to discuss the treatments for obesity and how it is much simpleir than people commonly think. The article states that it is simply a mindset: you need to believe that you can get through being overweight in order to do so; the author of the article claims that a healthy mind is a happy body. Other treatments include moeration and various other common techniques.

http://www.cdc.gov/obesity/data/trends.html

More than one-third of U.S. adults are obese; approximately 17% of children and adolescents aged 2—19 years are obese. Within the the past 20 years, there has been a dramatic increase in obesity in the United States and rates remain high. In 2010, no state had a prevalence of obesity less than 20%. Thirty-six states had a prevalence of 25% or more; 12 of these states (Alabama, Arkansas, Kentucky, Louisiana, Michigan, Mississippi, Missouri, Oklahoma, South Carolina, Tennessee, Texas, and West Virginia) had a prevalence of 30% or more.

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Research Position Paper- Final

Are Americans really obese?

We have all heard it: America is obese. We are an obese nation; this notion can be attributed to Surgeon General David Satcher. Satcher identified the problem of America having the largest international body mass index (BMI) in 2001. In 2001, many medical professionals believed that a person’s obesity can be calculated through their BMI, a system that calculates the ratio of a person’s height and weight (Surgeon General). However, this is no longer the case. The acceptance of the BMI system is faltering because it is heavily flawed. It is gender and age specific in children under 15, it uses the same criteria across the board for all men and women, and the system cannot differentiate between fat and muscle. For over a decade, medical professionals passed these flaws off as minor because there was no better alternative system. But, realizing that a flawed system cannot keep being incorporated into American medical history, scientists are striving to find other methods that will accurately measure obesity. Since the BMI system is clearly not effective, many people are beginning to wonder whether or not Americans are in fact as overweight as the BMI system said they were in 2001.

The Surgeon General and his team defined America’s obesity by the BMI system which measures the amount of fat, the flabby tissue that gives a person their out of shape appearance, a person has in comparison to their height and weight; “BMI is calculated as weight in pounds divided by the square of the height in inches, multiplied by 703. Alternatively, BMI can be calculated as weight in kilograms divided by the square of the hight in meters (The Lancet).” Although the system is faulty in some areas, medical professionals deem it an accurate method of measurement primarily based upon the fact that there is no other system of obesity measurement that has been universally accepted. A BMI over 25 is considered to be overweight, signaling that a person has more fat than he or she is supposed to have. When the Surgeon General made his announcement in 2001, Americans were considered to be overweight with a cumulative BMI of approximately 41.5.

But, the BMI system has various limitations that were not taken into account during the Surgeon General’s announcement. These limitations prevent doctors from accurately providing an exact obesity rating. In adolescents, obesity is defined as age and gender specific or, as anyone ranking above the 95th percentile range in the CDC BMI-for-age-growth charts. These charts easily identifies a child’s BMI by comparing their height and weight growth yearly. A child’s percentile ranking is relative to the ranking of other growing adolescents in the same age and gender grouping. These charts not only help assess growing children who are overweight, but also underweight. Each child is measured with these charts by their doctors during their yearly physical.

Research has proven that although the BMI measurements claim to measure body fat, it does not do so as directly as people think. For example, the system can overestimate the amount of fat in a person(s) who is muscular and underestimate the amount of a person(s) who have lost muscle mass, such as the elderly. It does not make any difference to the BMI system whether you are a 21 year-old olympic athlete or a 75 year-old, immobile man (BMI Not Accurate). Prime examples of the BMI system mistakenly classifying people are basketball star Kobe Bryant and actor Brad Pitt, none of whom appear to be overweight. Arnold Schwarzenegger, a body builder, was categorized into the highest level of obesity due to the amount of muscle mass he retains (Devlin). With clearly faulty classifications such as these, how can we trust the system?

The blatantly defective evidence that disproves the BMI system leads to the question of whether or not America really was the most obese nation in 2001 as previously stated by the Surgeon General and if it is still on the track towards chronic obesity. According to a 2004 study conducted by The American Journal of Clinical Nutrition, calculating a persons’ waist circumference (WC) as opposed to their BMI is a better predictor of obesity risk and illnesses that come with being overweight than the BMI system. LiveStrong.com article Alternatives to BMI confirms this theory by stating that measuring the natural waist can give an almost accurate indication of the amount of abdominal fat a person contains. Women with WC of 35 inches or more and men with a WC of 40 inches or more are considered to be risk factors (Holley, Casey). People who are in the “risky range” are more likely to develop side effects of obesity such as diabetes and heart failure. The WC is as simple as measuring a person’s belt size; to make it more accurate, doctors factor in other elements of a patient’s medical history. This enables them to find out what diseases each individual person is capable of developing. WC is more effective than the BMI because it calculates a person on an individual scale, not the wide ranged scale that is used for the BMI. Although these studies are not yet widely approved by national medical professionals, they are quickly on their way to being approved and providing a better method of calculating how obese a person is.

Regardless of the actuality of the Surgeon General’s announcement in 2001, Americans have begun to work towards becoming less obese. Government programs have tried to make sure the US does not remain the world’s fattest nation. The government has involved itself by helping maintain and lower obesity levels in Americans. There has been an increase in the amount of private intervention being put out by privately owned companies and non-profit organizations. This is commonly known as government intervention, or actions taken by the government in order to affect the decisions made by individuals on either economic or social matters.

However, due to the fact that people highly value their privacy and ability to make their own decisions, government intervention into the personal lives of the public is constantly being questioned. Many people do not like government officials telling them what is good for them, how to enforce good eating habits to their children, and even telling school systems what can or cannot be served for lunch. The government has already involved itself into the lives of Americans; they have done this so much and so well that people hardly notice it anymore. For example the federal government constantly intervenes in the lives of Americans by installing traffic lights, setting curfew laws, and creating school curriculums. But, when the Surgeon General made his announcement about obesity, many people rejected early attempts of regulating the nations obesity levels. Weight, is a personal issue and for a while, a great deal of people felt that it was too personal for government intervention they do not want to be told that they are too fat by someone who is not a doctor. However, over time, people have become more aware and accustomed to the obesity epidemic, primarily to both government and private intervention.

One major issue with the government trying to reduce and maintain the current levels of obesity in America is the fact that their intervention would have to surpass the economic states of some areas of the countries. People residing in low-income areas tend to maintain higher obesity levels due to the simple fact that eating healthy is expensive. In most low-income places, a 12 pack of Cosmic Brownies is equivalent to the price of about two packages of grapes. So, naturally, to save money, people tend to eat more fattening foods.  In places such as this, there is also less money being given to school districts where there are less healthy alternatives for students to eat during lunch and snack time. The government, along with many private companies and non-profit organizations have been pushing for more natural grown foods in schools, such as fruits and vegetables, and healthier options to be provided for students, pretzels as opposed to cookies. Many companies have been donating money to get healthier options for students to eat and providing money for these options to become more accessible and affordable. Leading Medical Journal, The Lancet, states the government should be responsible for making healthy foods cheaper and affordable stating that they should be easily accessible at both private and public schools along with public universities. So, a possibility to increase health the over all health in the general public would be to produce cheaper produce and for the government to fund more home-grown produce, such as establishing new farms and giving money to already existing ones. If fresh produce is more affordable, there is a possibility that they will become more desirable and regularly consumed. An issue with this would be that this idea would be opposing foreign trade and would be slightly more costly.

One of the toughest forms of intervention is trying to influence the private sphere of people. The private sphere is a space known only to the person who possesses it; it contains their thoughts, desires and knowledge. Republicans feel that there should be little to no government involvement into this realm while Democrats feel that there should be a great deal of intervention. But with an issue such as obesity, something needs to be done. Bureaucrats cannot sit down with every family during every meal to make sure good eating habits are being enforced and proper exercise routines are being followed.  One possible way of doing this, according Kersh and Monroe, is to create an even stronger sense of social disapproval. The idea is to alter the current social atmosphere and have fast food chains, and other fattening foods, be thought of as highly unacceptable and even detrimental to the overall health of a person. Supersize Me, a documentary study about McDonald’s and other fast corporations, has already given out a simple form of social disapproval: fast food makes you fat. Since the documentary was released, there has been a dramatic chance in the way the fast food industry was run.

Almost immediately after the documentary was released, it became a common belief that eating at restaurants such as McDonald’s and Taco Bell were one of the key factors that played a role in American obesity. Contrary to this popular and often substantive belief, not all fast food restaurants are as detrimental to a person’s weight as previously believed. McDonald’s is a prime example of this. Ever since the movie Super Size Me was released in 2004, exposing the dangers of a “super sized (Super Size Me),” or extra-large, meal, McDonald’s has moved away from its long, publicly given title of the most unhealthy fast food establishment. While the movie helped change a great deal about McDonald’s and numerous other fast food establishments, they did not do all the work that has ranked McDonald’s 8th out of the top ten healthiest fast food establishments, according to a consensus produced by Health Magazine (Health Mag.). Other fast food chains such as Wendy’s or Taco Bell do not even make the cut. The magazine sent out a team of researchers to survey 100 fast food places, and scored them on factors such as the use of healthy fats and sodium counts, the availability of nutritional facts (which was previously hard to find in fast food chains), and the use of organic and natural produce. The article states that the once thought of as unhealthy restaurant is paving the way for other fast food industries in the currently “heart- and waist-friendly (Health Mag.)” society. One of the establishment’s most popular new techniques that has been incorporated into other establishments is the option to have a side of fruit with every happy meal instead of french fries. And, if you must have the fries, their french fries are baked in CDA approved heart-healthy canola oil. Also, the chain offers low-calorie options such as snack wraps which consist of a mere 260 calories (Health Mag.).

So, they suggest that another positive form of influence to public behavior can be achieved through medical-science which means allowing people to know facts about being overweight and what it means to be physically fit. According to the two, the facts do not have to be entirely accurate; the idea is to convey the true message that being overweight is not good and will soon be socially unacceptable. Also, people should be able to get help outside of the gym, according to the authors, who want there to be group meetings similar to meetings set up for drug addicts. The demon user/ industry effect is to influence Americans to feel like people who eat poorly and industries that promote poor health habits are “demons,” or inherently bad. Surprisingly, it is easier than it seems to put a demonic spin on negative foods. In 2009, leading expert in childhood obesity Robert Lusting’s lecture, “Sugar: the Bitter Truth,” got over 800 thousand views on YouTube with a viewer growth rate of approximately 50 thousand views a month. The hour and a half long speech persuasively lists sugar as a toxin and a poison and often refers to it as evil. Toxic sugar is not only the common white household substance, scientifically known as sucrose, but also high-fructose corn syrup, which Lusting calls the “most demonizing addictive known to man (Taubes, Gary).” Not only does sugar provide consumers with empty calories, calories that provide no nutritional value, but can cause numerous health issues such as obesity, hypertension and diabetes. However, this is not to say that people should not be eating positive sugars: the sugars that come from fruits, vegetables and whole grains that provide antioxidants, energy and often enzymes that encourage a natural boost in metabolism, leading to weight loss. Foods that contain toxic sugars, such as anything processed, from a fast food restaurant, and many desserts should be avoided. Since Americans have acknowledged their growing obesity problem, there has been a rapid increase in the over all health of the American Public and a decline in the nations average BMI.

However, most of the sugars that were attacked by Lusting in his lecture are incorporated into fast foods and other processed goods. Yet, it is not useful to place all the blame of weight gain onto one food. While Lusting suggests and enforces the idea of cutting out sugar entirely, the Dietitians Association of Australia does not recommend this at all. In their medical journal entry Sugar: not so toxic,  they state that when it comes to sugar, men and women should try to eat it in moderation and limit their intake of foods high in added sugar and low in nutritional value such as soda and candy (DAA). If you have not seen the commercials proclaiming the goodness of high fructose corn syrup, then you should. Aside from their comical attributes, they are not wrong. What was conventionally known to be bad for your body, and toxic, according to Lusting, is far from it. Promoted by the Corn Refiners Association (CRA), the attempts to get high fructose corn syrup out of the toxic range are surprisingly being supported by the American Medical Association which recently announced that corn syrup does not contribute to obesity (McLaughlin, Lisa).

According to a study conducted by one of the top medical journals, The Lancet, as a follow-up to the study produced by the Surgeon General in 2001, when modern international BMIs are compared, America is not even in the top 10 fattest nations. America has lost its perviously held number one spot to the small nation of Nauru. Over the last decade or so, the push for government intervention and personal motivation to get fit, and healthy has paid off. While American men are rated 10th on the international BMI scale, American women are ranked 36th with a BMI of 28.7. This is proof that, obesity can be sustained and maintained at its current levels and even prevented for the future. The truth is, it is very hard to influence the public and personal sphere of America. But, if it is reached, it is possible that obesity can be maintained at its current levels and even possibly decreased and one day stopped.

Although many aspects of American society are getting healthier: McDonald’s has become a considerably healthy establishment, the last fifteen years or so has seen a spike in the organic and natural foods industry and, in part due to First Lady Michelle Obama’s “get fit” programs, it has become increasingly more important for Americans to exercise and consume healthier foods and yet, in 2011, obesity rates increased in 16 states and the rates did not decline in any state (F as in Fat). According to F as in Fat: How obesity threatens America’s future 2011, a report from Trusts for Americans Health (TFAH) and the Robert Wood Johnson Foundation (RWJF), 12 states  now have obesity rates above 30 percent; merely four years ago, only one state had a percent ranking that high. Shocked by these statistics the report examined exactly how obesity has grown over the  past two decades (F as in Fat). Twenty years ago, no state had an obesity rating of above 15 percent. This year, in contrast, 38 out of the 50 US states produced obesity ratings of over 25 percent. For the 7th year in a row, Mississippi has maintained its leading spot as the number one state with the highest level of adult obesity (F as in Fat). The report noted that the fastest growing obesity levels reside in the south: Alabama and Tennessee have experienced intensified rates; this year, the slowest growing levels occurred in Washington DC, Colorado and Connecticut. The highest obesity rates remain in racial and ethnic minority adults, along with low-income families (F as in Fat).

While it might seem like Americans are becoming more obese, many public health experts disagree. Since the Surgeon General’s first analysis of American obesity, not enough time has passed to correctly analyze recent data (Rochman).  Although obesity rates are not declining, these numbers have nothing to do with the efforts made to prevent future obesity. This does not mean that an individual’s personal goals and efforts to obtain their dream weight are not working. Dr. William Dietz, director of the division of nutrition for the CDC, claims that efforts to ward off obesity are in fact working fine. Comparing the anti obesity efforts to the 1950 anti-smoking efforts when medical professionals released the conclusive evidence about the link between smoking and cancer, the doctor asserts that for approximately 15 years, smoking rates remained at a plateau and even increased for sometime (Rochman). It is the same concept with tackling the issue of obesity in America: it needs time and further developed tactics to achieve reduced levels. Ironically, these medical professionals are basing their evidence off of a faulty scale for evaluating a person’s body fat percentage.

If the BMI system is clearly flawed and there are other better and more efficient methods of measuring the percentage of a person’s body fat, why are doctors still using it? If a person cannot accurately measure their actual fat percentage, how can we assume that America was at one time the world’s fattest nation? While it is clear that alternative methods to the BMI system are not yet medically accepted, it is also clear that to keep using the BMI system would not be beneficial towards the medical community in any means. The only absolute proof that has come from the realization that the BMI system is heavily flawed is the notion that America may in fact not be as obese as though of by the world’s populations. It is important that medical professionals continue to test alternative theories so that the public can be provided with a more reliable method of calculating a person’s body fat percentage. Based on the fact that the nation’s current obesity levels were raked based on a system that is not accurate, it is impossible to accurately identify whether or not Americans are actually getting fatter or fitter.

Bibliography

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This is a segment of a four part study that was produced by The Lancet, the world’s leading medical journal. It examines what was known about obesity, at the time the study was conducted, the economic and health burdens of obesity, the psychology behind it and the actions that need to be taken to prevent and end it. Although there are already some preventive methods such as “get fit plans,” the efforts have not even begun. Researchers have calculated the effects of behavior and different levels of policy intervention to come up with a preventative method to global obesity. Such include factors that will “..improve the food and built environments, cross-cutting actions (such as leadership, healthy public policies, and monitoring), and much greater funding for prevention programmes. Increased investment in population obesity monitoring would improve the accuracy of forecasts and evaluations. The integration of actions within existing systems into both health and non-health sectors (trade, agriculture, transport, urban planning, and development) can greatly increase the influence and sustainability of policies.”

    1. http://www.livescience.com/11825-global-obesitiy-united-states-ranking.html

This article discusses a study produced byThe Lancet, the world’s leading medical journal, that proves that America is not the world’s fattest nation.For years, Americans have been believing that they have been living in the world’s most obese country but, according to a study conducted by one of the world’s leading medical journals, The Lancet, America was never even in the top ten of the world’s fattest nations. America is just the worlds most industrialized nation, home to many fast food chains and large portion sizes; there are a significant number of fatter nations that have become this way due to the sudden introduction of American based products such as fast food chains and other processed food items. Obesity is measured through the body-mass-index (BMI), a system that calculates the amount of fat a person should have compared to their weight and height. The BMI states that anyone with a BMI over 25 is considered overweight. The Average BMI for the USA as a whole is 28.4, ranked 20th internationally. A noticeable decrease in the amount of overweight American women was acknowledged throughout the study. (Could this be due to media spins? Are they in fact having a positive impact on society, as opposed to the negative image “being thin” currently has?:: a section of my counterintuitive note)But, unfortunately, while the BMI for the American population has dropped substantially, it is not enough to say that America is slimming down. Sadly, the rest of the world is merely getting fatter.

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This source was found through a quick search on Academic Search Premier. The article discusses BMC Public Health’s main goal: the discussion of how childhood obesity is a prominent issue. Childhood obesity effects not only a child throughout his or her childhood, but follows them for years to come. Thats why, according to the article, preventing obesity early on is very important. The research team established a prevention method, STOPP which was based on a similar Swedish program, CHH, combats creating a balanced diet, encouraging physical activity, and evenly distributed sleeping patterns.

    1. http://www.scarsdalediet.com/

The Scarsdale Diet was created by cardiologist Dr. Herman Tarnower and is one of the most effective international diet plans that allows users to loose up to 20 lbs in two weeks. It is a healthier alternative to other popular plans such as Atkins because it includes what they consider to be “complex carbohydrates” such as bread and fruit. The basis is healthy eating: limiting your intake of most carbs and eliminating others. The diet works by using a strict two week diet plan, and considerable exercise, followed by a week span of not dieting.

    1. http://www.letsmove.gov/

First Lady Michelle Obama’s “Let’s Move Program” focuses on getting kids to get out and get active. She targets healthy eating, as well. Her program is centered through TV networks favored by children across America such as the Disney Channel and Nickelodeon. The idea is to influence American children at a young age of healthy alternatives.

    1. http://content.healthaffairs.org/content/21/6/142.full

The article, written by Rogan Kersh and James Monroe, describes the politics of obesity and the seven steps that the government should take to prevent it. Despite previous thoughts, the American government has always been highly involved with the regulation of obesity. It is not just a recent phenomena. In 2001, Surgeon General David Satcher’s called for the American government and public to help fight obesity by saying that the obesity rate has reached epidemic proportions. The problem with fighting obesity is that, unlike other health problems, it comes from private behavior. So, the government was faced with an issue: how can they influence the public sphere? (counterintuitive note). According to the article, you can control private, personal environments through social disapproval, medical-science, self help, media spins, and the demon user and industry concepts. Another way the government can help prevent and maintain obesity is through mass movements in the political sphere, such as the introduction of more interest group action.

F as in Fat. “F as in Fat: How Obesity Threatens America’s Future 2011.” – Trust for America’s Health. Robert Wood Johnson Foundation, Etc. Web. 12 Apr. 2012. <http://www.healthyamericans.org/report/88/>.

This source discusses a study that provides information about how obesity in America has been altered over the past couple of years. Over all, it has been discovered that Americans are not as obese as they were in 2001 when the Surgeon General made his announcement that America had an obesity epidemic. It has become clear that the nations population has actually become more obese than a decade ago, according to data provided by the study.

Rochman, Bonnie, Maia Szalavitz, and Alice Park. “CDC: U.S. Obesity Rates Plateau Overall, But Men and Boys Are Getting Fatter | Healthland | TIME.com.” Time. Time. Web. 12 Apr. 2012. <http://healthland.time.com/2012/01/17/u-s-obesity-rates-remain-stubbornly-high

The authors aim to discuss how obesity rates may appear to have gotten larger in American. The reality of this evidence, however, is that the statistics have hit a plateau due to the fact that Americans have not had enough time to generate enough statistical evidence that can prove obesity rates are declining in America. This can be compared to the non-smoking movement that occurred several decades ago; it takes time to take effect.

BMI Not Accurate Indicator Of Body Fat.” Medical News Today. MediLexicon International, 09 Mar. 2007. Web. 02 Apr. 2012.http://www.medicalnewstoday.com/releases/64577.php>.

The source discusses that the BMI system is not accurately reflective of modern standards for what is actually over weight as opposed to what the faulty BMI system claims. The article details a conclusive study produced by a Michigan State University research team that proved, as previously noted, BMI does not accurately calculate body fat. The major issue that occurs is that the same criteria for BMI are used for all adults of a specific gender. According to the research team, it does not make any difference to the BMI system whether you are a 21 year-old olympic athlete or a 75 year-old, immobile man. The evidence proves that when evaluating obesity, the BMI system should be used with caution. Also talked about in the article are possible alternative methods that could be used to calculate a man or woman’s obesity; none of these studies have been proven accurate, however. But, the most promising is measuring a person’s height to waist circumference which has thus far proven successful and is gaining a high medical reputation when it comes to evaluating diseases that often come as a result of obesity.

Super Size Me. Dir. Morgan Spurlock. Perf. Morgan Spurlock. Cameo, 2005.

This source is a documentary that was produced by Morgan Spurlock who voluntary set out to discover the health risks of the fast food industry. Specifically, he studied McDonald’s. Throughout his documentary, it became clear that the fast food industry of the early 2000s was not the same as we now perceive it to be. Spurlock exposed the negative health and nutritional benefits that consumers eat when ordering a big mac, the dangers of a super sized option and the way the fast food industry gets around detailing their nutritional facts. As a result of his documentary, there has been a surprising change in the fast food industry that has made food chains such as McDonald’s strive for better and healthier options.

Health Mag. “America’s Top 10 Healthiest Fast Food Places.” Health Magazine. Web. <http://www.health.com/health/article/0,,20411588_5,00.html>.

This article discusses a survey produced by Health Magazine that analyzed over 100 fast food establishments, narrowing them down to the top 10 healthiest places to eat at. Their criteria consisted of: the use of healthy fats and sodium counts, the availability of nutritional facts (which was previously hard to find in fast food chains), and the use of organic and natural produce. As it turns out, McDonald’s was ranked 8th on the top ten list and is not as unhealthy as people claim it to be. One of the establishment’s most popular new techniques that has been incorporated into other establishments is the option to have a side of fruit with every happy meal instead of french fries. And, if you have to have the fries, their french fries are baked in CDA approved heart-healthy canola oil. Also, the chain offers low calorie options such as snack wraps which consist of a mere 260 calories.

DAA. “Dietitians Association of Australia.” Sugar – Not so ‘toxic’. Web. 09 Apr. 2012. <http://daa.asn.au/for-the-media/hot-topics-in-nutrition/sugar-not-so-toxic/>

The source asserts that sugar, which is popularly known as a toxic food that highly contributes to weight gain and obesity, is not as big of a risk factor as many medical professionals are claiming. This study was concluded by the Dietitians Association. In their medical journal entry Sugar: not so toxic,  they state that when it comes to sugar, men and women should try to eat it in moderation and limit their intake of foods high in added sugar and low in nutritional value such as soda and candy.

McLaughlin, Lisa. “Is High-Fructose Corn Syrup Really Good for You?” Time. Time, 17 Sept. 2008. Web. 09 Apr. 2012. <http://www.time.com/time/health/article/0,8599,1841910,00.html>.

The above source argues that while high fructose corn syrup is conventionally thought of as bad for the body and the equivalent to sucrose, or sugar, it is actually nothing similar. Promoted by the Corn Refiners Association (CRA), the attempts to get high fructose corn syrup out of the toxic range are surprisingly being supported by the American Medical Association which recently announced that corn syrup does not contribute to obesity.

“About Body Mass Index for Children and Teens.” Centers for Disease Control and Prevention. Centers for Disease Control and Prevention, 13 Sept. 2011. Web. 21 Mar. 2012. <http://www.cdc.gov/healthyweight/assessing/bmi/childrens_bmi/about_childrens_bmi.html>

The article clearly defines the BMI system and obesity in children and adults. For children, the BMI system is gender specific. It measures how fat, or obese a child is based on their weight and height. Although the body mass index does not directly measure fat, it is a reliable source to indicate how over or underweight a child is. A doctor can calculate a child’s BMI by placing his or her height or weight on a growth chart; a growth chart is able to calculate a child’s weight range in regards to other children his or her age across the US.

Taubes, Gary. “Is Sugar Toxic?” NY Times Online. Web.http://www.nytimes.com/2011/04/17/magazine/mag-17Sugar-t.html?pagewanted=all>.

The source defines sugar as the most toxic thing a person can put into his or her body. Sugar produces excess empty calories that can lead to multiple medical disorders such as heart failure and diabetes and also is a key factor in obesity. Although there are good sugars, “salable sugars” such as the ones found at the dinner table, should be omitted from every day meals.

http://www.womenshealthmag.com/health/fat-acceptance

Many people are learning to live a healthy lifestyle by eating right and exercising but not always striving for thin. The article discusses being happy with the body you are given. The article talks about the negative effects on the current “health craze” on a persons body and how it directly correlates with eating disorders such as bulimia and anorexia. It is counterintuitive to the entire point that my paper is trying to make.

http://medical-dictionary.thefreedictionary.com/Morbidly+obese

Defined in the article are the definitions of obesity and morbid obesity. “Obesity is an abnormal accumulation of body fat, usually 20% or more over an individual’s ideal body weight. Obesity is associated with increased risk of illness, disability, and death. The branch of medicine that deals with the study and treatment of obesity is known as bariatrics. As obesity has become a major health problem in the United States, bariatrics has become a separate medical and surgical specialty.” The article then progresses to discuss the treatments for obesity and how it is much simpleir than people commonly think. The article states that it is simply a mindset: you need to believe that you can get through being overweight in order to do so; the author of the article claims that a healthy mind is a happy body. Other treatments include moeration and various other common techniques.

http://www.cdc.gov/obesity/data/trends.html

More than one-third of U.S. adults are obese; approximately 17% of children and adolescents aged 2—19 years are obese. Within the the past 20 years, there has been a dramatic increase in obesity in the United States and rates remain high. In 2010, no state had a prevalence of obesity less than 20%. Thirty-six states had a prevalence of 25% or more; 12 of these states (Alabama, Arkansas, Kentucky, Louisiana, Michigan, Mississippi, Missouri, Oklahoma, South Carolina, Tennessee, Texas, and West Virginia) had a prevalence of 30% or more.

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For my research paper I will be trying to prove that teens who grow up without a father figure or positive male role model are more likely to join gangs. Not that I am arguing that other factors don’t lead kids into gangs, but the lack of a father figure does as well. This is what my research will be proving.

1.Understanding why people join gangs.

In this article it gives specific reasons why some teens might join a gang. Not only does it tell about family problems but it goes into deeper detail giving reasons of why they might join such as money issues or even peer pressure.

I intend to use this article to better give the other side of my story as of why teens join gangs which does not include broken households or negative childhoods. I also like to use this article to possibly refute an argument that i might find telling that some of the reasons teens join gangs are not accurate.

2.What do gangs provide?

In this article what gangs are and why they are normally formed is explained clearly.It starts by telling that gangs are an alternate family to teens which is why they join. It also gives definitions why the leader of gangs get the up-most respect and why these certain teens need that certain love from its members in the gang. It stresses the fact that gangs provide a sense of belonging as well as protection.

I really like this article because it goes so deep into what the gangs do for its members and how teens really rely on the gangs to make it through life. I plan on using this information to better support that my argument of broken homes lead to gang joining by teens.

3.Why are gangs attractive?

This article shows and explains the significance of why gangs are so appealing to people. Location is also explained as a big part in here as well. It gives more of a general look at why and not a inside detailed look. It tells about the wanting feeling of love, but also the fear and race factor communities have giving an impact of teens lives causing them to join as well.

I intend on using this article to back up my thesis on teens joining gangs because of a bad childhood. This article with quotes from teens on whether they had a bad childhood or not should be great information in this essay.

4.Different perspectives

In this article that I found using the academic search premier, it gives a great deal of information on why youth or teens join gangs. But it more so gives the background information on gangs such as what they do, different reasons why they do crimes, and as well as what can they do to prevent teens from joining gangs.

I definitely intend on using this article to show reasons why they join gangs but to tell how the government looks to stop youth from joining but it hasn’t really worked yet. This article is full of different information that can be included in this essay and it all is very useful.

5. Gang affiliation

The article I found by using the academic search premier is about the connection between bad neighborhoods and gang affiliation. Its talking about the way gangs come to neighborhoods to recruit kids who basically lives a criminal life or who has been given jail time. It gives a lot of information about different characteristics of neighborhoods and how they have the qualities for a specific gang to come and try to recruit.

6.Single-motherhood

This article provides great detail in which tells that children with out a father figure in their life is the root of recruitment for gangs. It also quotes a statement from the Rev. Leon Kelly which states, “Moms are grieving because they feel like they’ve lost their kids to this [gang] behavior.”

7. London Riots

I like to use this article because it shows that this issue is worldwide rather than just in the United States. Out in London there has been riots and this article talks about it and also about how many gang members are growing up without a father.

8. No father no sense of belonging

In this article, it basically gives quotes a relative facts about children who have turned to gangs at a younger age then normal. Kids are not even starting at a teen age now they are getting as low as age 9 joining gangs.

9. What is the leading cause?

The explanation of this article is to tell what the leading cause of kids living the life of a gang member. Its said that divorced families have children joining gangs more often then families where the father just leaves. I like this article because it is very detailed and precise of the information it gives.

10. Percentage of men without a father

This article gives specific details and percentages of young men growing up without a father. Also is gives examples of the types of crimes they are drawn to without a father. I like this article because it has much more issues detailed out to give readers a clear image of why teens are joining gangs.

11.  Gang members with mothers only  August 25th, 2008 by Glenn Sacks

With this article, I feel that I can provide evidence shoowing that most of the gang members live without a positive male role model, meaning the only live with mother only. With the percentages on this page, I think it can be proven that single mothered homes leads teens into joining gangs.

12. Why teens need to accept that they have no father figure Tiki33 in Issues, March 10, 2012

This article basically sums up why children in gangs just need to accept the fact that they have no father figure and decide not to let it lead them into joining gangs.

13. Effects of joining gangs eHow Contributor April 12, 2012

Using this article will help me to explain better of why teens joining gangs is hurting the society we live in.This article gets into detail about the history and reason most teens join gangs, starting with and emotional point of view.

14. Percentages MARK MATHER, PH.D. MAY 2010

this article brings great evidence to compare to teens that live only with a mother. It will compare them to teens who are not in gangs and teens who are in gangs. It helps me provide specific evidence to my theory, and gives me examples to help explain why i take a specific side on this.

15. Info on gangs

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Reflective – Bill Brooks

Valued Improvement

As our College Composition II class draws to a close, it is easy to look back and see how I have evolved as a writer since the beginning of the course.  My first few assignments were often awkwardly worded and lacked the flow necessary to be a proficient writer.  However, at each subsequent assignment slight improvements can be seen.  With the help of my professor’s feedback, the utilization of re-writes and the insight of other students, I was able to iron out the wrinkles in my writing that held me back.  The one area that I struggled with the most was staying on task and addressing what the assignment asked of me.  In my first draft of the assignment about the invention of money, I missed the point of the assignment entirely by rambling on about unrelated topics.  Looking back I am glad that I made this mistake early on because since then I have been careful not to make the same mistake.  My progression throughout this course has led to my portfolio which contains my best work as a writer.

I believe that this class has shaped my writing in such a way that I was able to embody the necessary course values.  Core Value III states that it is crucial to: Understand how texts represent meaning and how the process of writing and reading create and interpret meaning.  The critical reading in-class assignment helped me to better understand the meaning of this value.  This assignment showed me that carefully choosing the way to quote someone can greatly change the way an article is interpreted.  This is critical when dealing with persuasive pieces in which it is necessary to subtly sway your audience’s opinion of the subject matter at hand.  This value is not about deceiving the audience but rather presenting valid information in such a light that your point of view seems correct.  In my research position paper I used this technique to point out the fallacy of current stem cell research laws.

Core Value V states that a student must understand the role and use of information in writing.  This value is of highest priority when writing a research paper.  Even if one statement a writer makes is proven false, his entire argument is devalued.  For this reason attention to detail and scrutiny is required when gathering research materials.  Every piece of information I collected was thoroughly researched and analyzed for bias and accuracy.  I demonstrated this value in my research proposal paper by using only valid sources from Academic Search Premier and government sites.  By ensuring the accuracy of my sources I was able to make valid claims about my topic and support them with irrefutable data.  My paper benefitted greatly in this respect, it gained credibility by its sturdy backing with scientific data.

Core Value VII states that a student must also understand the power and ethical responsibility that comes with the creation of written discourse.  As the age old saying goes the pen is indeed mightier than the sword.  The power of the written word is immense and should not be underestimated as the value states.  The power of writing is derived from its effect on the reader.  A single piece of writing has the power to sway the opinions of the masses.  It is the responsibility of the writer to provide the reader with nonbiased information.  Equally as important is the ethical responsibility that comes with any written piece.  The ethical responsibility of the reader is to present accurate information as well as to avoid plagiarism by always citing the sources used.  I believe I have accomplished these goals in my research proposal paper by using credible sources, and citing all the information that was not my own, to provide the necessary information for the reader to make an informed decision on the subject rather than forcing my own opinion.

The overall objective of this course is to create better, well informed writers.  I believe I have accomplished this objective because my writing has improved during the course and made me realize my flaws as well as my strengths in order to become the best writer I can be.

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Reflective Statement – Tabitha Corrao

In life we are all born with creative characteristics. Some people are born nature writers and others, like me, were not. So coming into Composition Two course with a weak background of writing I couldn’t help but be nervous for this course. Now that this semester is almost over, I can now say that I’ve have a better understanding of the Core Values. I used my knowledge of Core Values and demonstrated the three main Core Values III, V, and VII throughout this semester.

Core Value III is understanding how texts represent meaning and how the processes of writing and reading create and interpret meaning. I demonstrated this Core Value in my Visual Argument. For my Visual Argument, I watched a thirty second commercial about prevention on gay and lesbian bullying. After watching the commercial several times, I dissected the video by explaining why I believe the director of the video shot the video the way he did. My explanation shows how I examined the director’s commercial and how I interpret the meaning behind the all of the directors’/actors’ actions. For example, in my argument I said I believed the director of the film chose Hillary Duff as an actor for the commercial because she is a well-known woman who sets good examples for other women and children as well. Although the director of the video did not say why he chose Hillary Duff, it could be implied that Hillary Duff was picked for this video because she is famous and her name is not associated with any negative qualities. I’ve also demonstrated this Core Value in my Research Position Paper. My Research Position Paper shows how I learned about a compound issue, the increase of crime rate and drug addicts not receiving the medical help they need, and expanded the issue as a discussion. In my discussion I talked about a solution to the issue and explained how the issue could be solved by programs like the DTAP programs. That’s how I demonstrated Core Value III.

Core Value V is understanding the role and use of information in writing. I demonstrated this Core Value in my Fifteen Annotated Bibliography. For my Fifteen Annotated Bibliography I found fifteen sources that contributed to my Research Position Paper and used the information to build my argument. By doing the Fifteen Annotated Bibliography, I learned what sources are reliable and what sources are not. For example one of my sources was a website for drug addicts to tell their success stories of how drug treatment centers worked for them. I was going to use this information to support my argument that drug treatment centers worked. I later learned that this source was not a reliable source because the website could be concerned bias. I then replaced that unreliable source to one that was. That’s how I demonstrated Core Value V.

Core Value VII is understanding the power and ethical responsibility that comes with the creation of written discourse. I demonstrated this Core Value in my Causal Argument. For my Causal Argument I used three reliable sources to support why programs like DTAP are more beneficial than prisons. Unlike my other arguments, I used quotes from the sources to help me support my reasons why the programs are better than prison. I made sure the quotes were logical and the quotes flowed well with the rest of the paper. That’s how I demonstrated Core Value VII.

All in all, I’ve come a long way in writing and I’m proud to say little by little the Core Values have helped me. I’ve come a long way with my writing and just like my grandmother would say there’s nothing a little hard work and some elbow grease (Core Values) can’t do.

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Causal Essay Rewrite – Tikeena Sturdivant

Slavery was not seen as a bad thing in the white man’s eyes even though it clearly was. If it was up to them slavery would go on forever! The effect of slavery was the last thing on their mind, they did not care about how blacks felt. The effect of slavery has negatives and positives. The positives come from blacks wanting to prove white people wrong and actually make something out of their lives which caused them to work hard. But even working hard didn’t change what the whites thought about them. The negatives were discrimination, less opportunities, being treated bad, and being looked down on. The things that blacks had to go through as a race was extremely crucial.

The Thirteenth Amendment  freed black slaves in the U.S, however, as a race we still suffered. The goal of this Amendment was to “abolish slavery and to eliminate both symbolically and practically the cause of the Civil War and threat to the stability of the Union.” The President of the United States at the time, Abraham Lincoln, believed that “men were created equally.” Many people disagreed with President Lincoln, whites thought they were always better than blacks.

The racial comments, thoughts, actions, and mindsets of whites did not change immediately. Blacks were still neglected by society and dealt with discrimination, they were freed physically but not mentally. Whites had a mindset that led them to believe that blacks were inferior to them and they were born to serve them.  So many laws were passed to protect blacks after slavery, the physically pain was over but as a race blacks still had to deal with negatives.

Unfortunately, slavery is the “heart of conflict” between white and blacks. Slavery still had a big influence on blacks even after emancipation. The Union Army encouraged blacks to become slaves again to avoid the discrimination that they would face. Personally, I would not be willing to go back and work for anybody but what can I do if no one is willing to help me? It was hard for them to find a job, a place to live, and a way to reunite with their family. One could argued that they went from being slaves to complete bums. They were basically forced to deal with the hardships of being a slave or be set free with nothing at all, which reminds me of the NFL lockout!

Professional football players are expected to accept the way they are treated because of the amount of money they are paid. Slaves may have not of been paid a lot of money but they had to accept the way they were being treated. After the emancipation some slaves chose to go back and some slaves chose to try living on their own. At the time slaves did have a choice just like football players have a choice to quit the team. People always seem to bring up the fact that Adrian Peterson could just quit, however, its irrelevant because after the Thirteenth Amendment slaves had a choice as well.

As many years went by things began to become better for Blacks in the US. Racism still exist but not as much as it did after emancipation. The black community is given more opportunities to work, own a house, and live peacefully. However, racism still exist and blacks still face more discrimination then any other race. Personally, I believe white men still feels superior to have a black person working for them. The perfect example will be football. It clear that President Lincoln’s “all men were created” belief do not apply in this country as much as it should. This does not even apply to the NFL! If all men and created equal, why are the men who are working the hardest is getting paid the least? The team owners are literally making money off of the NFL players, where most of them are black.

All the team owners are white an 72% of NFL players are black, which are more than half. Professor Hodges made a good point he said, “wealthy white men still gather in rooms to decide how many times a year to put their mostly black players onto the field to put on a show for the fans.” They are rich due to the black players performance on the field. How is it that they make more money then the players who work hard to play the game? I’m not saying that they shouldn’t be paid, however, I am saying they should not be making more than the players!

I can not think of anything to describe the labor of the NFL and what the players go through but “slavery by another name”. The team owners have just as much power has a slave owner would have had. I agree with our former President George Bush, he described slavery as “one of the greatest crimes of history.” These people should not get away with this hidden from of slavery. The NFL should actually be investigated, in which they were but I still feel as though some changes need to be made.

WORK CITED

Wendy, Koch. “Some offenses get apologies.” USA Today n.d.:Academic Search Premier. Web. 12 Apr. 2012.

Von Drehle, David. “The Way We Weren’t. (Cover Story).” Time177.15 (2011): 40-51. Academic Search Premier. Web. 12 Apr. 2012.

Ruef, Martin, and Ben Fletcher. “Legacies Of American Slavery: Status Attainment Among Southern Blacks After Emancipation.” Social Forces 82.2 (2003): 445-480.Academic Search Premier. Web. 12 Apr. 2012.

Lewis, Harold T. “`They Call Us To Deliver Their Land From Error’s Chain’.” Anglican Theological Review 77.4 (1995): 455.Academic Search Premier. Web. 12 Apr. 2012.

Fletcher, George P. “Lincoln And The Thirteenth Amendment.”OAH Magazine Of History 21.1 (2007): 52-55. Academic Search Premier. Web. 25 Apr. 2012.

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Reflective- Tyson Still

At the beginning of this course I noticed that my writing abilities weren’t as good as I thought. I was having a great amount of problems regarding my grammar and my sentence structure. This course has required and challenged me to become a better writer as well as a better reader.

Composition 2 has been quite an experience, and while going through this course I have been required to address core values of the course.  Core value III states “Understand how texts represent meaning and how the processes of writing and reading create and interpret meaning.” To me what this means basically is to understand that reading and writing is very important in the world we live in. Knowing how what you are reading has a meaning to it and that the author wants you to look at it from their point of view. Also, core value 3 wants you to recognize that you are writing for a purpose as well as understanding that good writers understand that writing and reading has a process that allows you to understand the meaning of what is being said. For example, when writers write an argument essay they state their position and also use information and persuasion to get their meaning across. So understanding that the text we use has a specific meaning and point that we need to recognize and understand, if not our reason for reading or writing is useless.

The next core value is number V which states, “Understand the role and use of information in writing.” I believe this is to understand why research is needed in writing and how it should be used correctly. My research paper is a great example of using information and understanding why I am using this information. My topic for my research paper was to prove that kids living in a fatherless home leads to joining gangs. Research for percentages, rates and other things of that nature was definitely needed to try and prove my theory. You have to be able to prove that whatever you say is true. Also you have to make sure you prove that your information is correct. Anyone can put statements into their writings and say someone said it, but that is where your works cited comes in. This shows that you can actually incorporate information from someone else into your writing and it can be proven. Core value III can also tie into this as well because you have to understand the information you are reading, you cannot just put things in your writing that has no effect on your topic.

Core value VII states, “Understand the power and ethical responsibility that comes with the creation of written discourse. This to me is the most important thing to understand as a writer, the effect and power you have in your words and how it affects the reader. I want my readers to understand everything about my piece of writing, starting from the information I use from other writers up to the information I am using from my own knowledge. Background information might be needed to make a clear point on what you want your reader to understand. Another thing that can tie into this value is understanding the view points of others. In my research paper some people might have clear reasons why fatherless homes might not lead teens into gangs and I have to be responsible enough to understand their point of view as well as being responsible enough to know how to take what they’re saying and have a counter argument to prove my theory. This core value should be taken into consideration in every piece of writing because no matter what your topic is there can always be a counter argument to that, so for you to incorporate others information into your writing and try to get your audience to understand everything, your work has to be effective and your words must be powerful and accurate on your topic.

Reviewing how I progressed over this course, I can say that overall this made me a better writer and reader. I now understand the important elements regarding what it takes to create a good paper and to understand the meaning of a writers purpose for writing. The assignments that were given challenged us to be better in every field that composition 2 had to offer.

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Reflective – Joe Mleczko

I Eat Core Values for Breakfast

Composition 2 is now coming to an end. This course required research and (of course) the use of words to convey certain ideas. While the many small assignments can be used to display how I met the ideas of the core values, the research project is by far the most impressive and is definitely the best projection of core values 3, 5, and 7.

The first core value to be addressed is core value 3, which states “Understand how texts represent meaning and how the processes of writing and reading create and interpret meaning.” My basic understanding of what this means (which is kind of ironic…) is that reading and writing is important, to help better understand the world we live in. My best example of meeting this core value comes from interpretation of the New York Times article written by Richard Perez-Pena. Personally, I read this as a stab at abolishing affirmative action. Instead, for my writing, I used the part of the newspaper article that proved states have maintained diversity without affirmative action, as fortification for my proposal to abolish affirmative action. I, in no way, changed what Perez-Pena was saying; however, I recognized my ability to take some of what he said and help mold it to my idea. Therefore, depending on how text is used, it can hold a variety of meanings. Failure to recognize this could result in the misuse of researched information.

The next core value, number 5, states “Understand the role and use of information in writing.” Core value 3 focused on my ability to understand the importance of the meaning of texts that I read and wrote. Core value 5 highlights my ability to find and use information from external sources in an appropriate manner. What better way to prove this ability than with a research project? Finding information is of course the first step. I looked only at relevant sources to not only my writing, but my readers as well. Eventually my cited works included peer-evaluated journals, government websites, college websites, and newspaper articles from well acclaimed publishers. Not only was I looking to prove my point that affirmative action creates more evil than good, but I had to refute the strongest proponents of keeping affirmative action. After finding all the pieces of information I needed, I then had to use them appropriately and fairly. I used sources that lent support for the success of the abolition of affirmative action to substantiate my claims. For refutation, I presented the opposition’s claims, and rejected them with evidence for the contrary. Ultimately, through my research paper, I demonstrate the importance of information to substantiate my claims, and believe that I accomplished this core value in an appropriate manner.

The final core value for composition 2 is core value 7, which says “Understand the power and ethical responsibility that comes with the creation of written discourse.” To me, this is by far the most important idea to understand as a writer. I am a huge advocate of the spreading of accurate knowledge for the greater good of mankind. This is not a task I take lightly either. I want my readers to understand the material I am writing about. It is that fact that results in the massive amounts of background information I provide in my research paper. I believe that if the reader understands all or a lot of the information there is to know about something, he will be able to make the best educated decision as possible. Obviously my paper proposes something I believe in, but I must respect anyone’s decision (even the opposition) if it is supported by knowledge (However, I may feel inclined to dissuade them…). Once again, my research paper is a great example of the responsibility I take in providing sources adequately and appropriately, while I use certain language to appeal to my specific audience. Words can be very dangerous when used incorrectly. That is why I choose every word carefully as to not provide false or “accidentally” false information.

In review, the course material and assignments of composition 2 demonstrated the importance and power of a well substantiated argument. That is not to say every well substantiated argument is “correct;” however, an unsubstantiated argument does not stand a chance.

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Reflective Statement-Brett Lang

As this semester progressed I understood and demonstrated the main core values more and more. Through out my work I demonstrated core value III very well. For instance in my Rebuttal essay I give a clear description of how the FDA not having tight regulations to stop the harmful supplements from getting by just because there are still drugs that get by the FDA’s tight regulations is a ridiculous thought to have. I use an example of how it is similar to not having laws and security on banks because banks still get robbed. This creates a picture for the reader with the words that are used as they go through the paper. It also makes the weak supplement regulation look as crazy as not keeping banks secure, which makes the supplement regulation and bank security seem very similar and then represents that the harmful supplements should have tighter regulation to the readers.

Going through my works core value V is demonstrated quite frequently. As in my research position paper I use information I have found on my subject about the Metabolife 356 product, its ingredients, and statistics and information on drugs as well. I use this information and clearly site where I have received this information from as well. This shows that information was researched and found and was used to demonstrate problems along with making claims throughout the research paper. The information was well cited and used to a very large importance when talking about the supplements in my paper. The information gives clear concepts about regulations on the supplements and the problems faced with the regulations, along with the Ephedra supplement. The information stays on the main point of my argument without jumping off page and talking about irrelevant information. The clear views of the writer are also expressed through my own take on the information I found.

Core value VII is demonstrated throughout my works in many way. The use of taking feedback from my professor and using it to better my definition essay and revising it  is one way this is demonstrated. I also clearly express the views of myself on my side of the argument while touching base and talking about the issues on the other side of the argument in my rebuttal essay. Within the rebuttal essay I express the views of why the supplements’ regulations shouldn’t be fixed while expressing my own views of why they should. I also do this by talking about what others have discovered on the topic and expressing and citing their views on the supplement problem. More feedback is taken in consideration from my classmate commenting on my rebuttal essay, and then using that feedback and considering it when later papers were written. I consistently took feedback from others to improve my writing later on and better my skills as a writer throughout this semester. This is how the three main core values have been touched upon throughout this portfolio of work.

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Rebuttal Essay Rewrite ~ Tony Shilling

Captain America Would be Disappointed

America is the greatest nation in the world.

We as Americans are free, proud, and strong; this is the land of opportunity and prosperity.  Or, at least, that is what she was founded on.  Unfortunately, history has not been kind to America; every incident of the past has brought the nation to a cruel and cynical present.  Even the escapes from the real world like the comic book have suffered at the hands of modern America.  Our heroes were founded as means of being aspiration goals and for the enjoyment of the masses in a time of crisis; now they’re pawns of an industry driven by economics and being better than its rivals.  A noble cause to be the best, yes, but to what length is Marvel suggesting it is worth hurting not only the employees but the entire spirit of comicdom along the way?  Marvel is pushing the boundaries, using its legal capabilities to take action against artists personally profiting from the sales of unauthorized artwork, and it is here that they have crossed the line of “Cruel and Unusual.”

To clarify, Marvel is suing its own artists and character creators, whom they employ, for selling artwork such as personal commissions of copyrighted Marvel characters for a personal profit (O’Neal).  Normally this would not a drastic issue, but Marvel hiring someone like Gabriel Hardman to draw the Secret Avengers for the mass-market book and prohibiting him from drawing Hawkeye as a commission is akin to suing a plumber for fixing his mother’s sink.

The major argument posed here is not merely whining against the law.  To suggest that Marvel is right is much more than acceptable; in a very twisted, appropriate way, they are.  By law, Marvel Comics holds the rights to each character it publishes; Jack “The King” Kirby and his heirs do not own Thor; Gary Friedrich does not own Ghost Rider (O’Neal).  By United States copyright Law, the creators wanted to see their work published, so whether it was someone like Jack Kirby designing Thor, working for Marvel (ignoring that the character could be considered public domain; this is not that Thor), or Friedrich appealing, they signed the characters to Marvel.  As such, Marvel is allowed the sole usage of the character in whatever manners are outlined in the contract; anyone else is technically stretching or breaking the law (“Copyright”).

But this should not diminish the impact of the creator over the character; when Marvel sued Friedrich on the grounds of his selling Ghost Rider merchandise at a comic convention, Friedrich’s punishment includes a $17,000 payout to Marvel, and for Friedrich to stop saying he’s the creator of Ghost Rider (O’Neal).  Now it is no longer a matter of ownership and usage rights: Marvel is sending a message.  Forcing the practically poor 60-plus year-old man to not only take away the one thing he’s done with his life that makes him a profit but to prevent him from boasting that he created a nationally-recognized character is horrifyingly severe; Marvel could not have asked for a better test candidate.

The true question at hand though is whether laws are being broken by artists in the first place; it is quite possible that parody provides a written loophole to prevent further legal action.  In art of all forms there exists a category exploited far more than any other: Parody.  A parody is an imitation of the style of a particular writer, artist, or genre with deliberate exaggeration for comic effect; in terms of the actual law, parody’s fall under the Fair Use Law and do not violate copyright laws (Deazley).

Saturday Night Live is the most open proprietor of the parody concept; the sketches conducted on the program constantly utilize copyrighted film, book, comic, and other media characters and do not pay any sort of royalties or licensing fees for each use.  The characters are not “deliberate exaggeration[s] for comic effect,” either; certainly John Belushi in Lou Ferrigno-style  Hulk make-up may look humorous, but that is more the credit of Belushi; SNL is permitted to use exact interpretations of copyrighted characters for their use, basically.

The concept is just as applicable to comics.  If an artist is at a convention and sketches a commission for a child of Captain America, but draws the classic Captain America with no scaling detail and has him hold the original heater shield instead of the circular, is it still the currently-published Captain America?  Now, obviously this is stretching the limits, but the point still stands.  There is no strict dictation of who a certain character is.  All of these characters are based on appearance, so the rule is virtually no existent; otherwise no other artist could ever draw the character.  Another key element that lends to this is artistic liberty.  No two artists draw the same, and the basic recognized element is costume; the question again, does adding an extra red stripe to Captain America’s waist-padding still make him Captain America?  The Fair Use Law can be stretched to permit all such actions, technically, and no one but the creator has the ability to say what something is or is not; that right prevents all legal action.

So, no, the law is not as clear as Marvel would prefer it to be to sue a few pencillers.  Elements such as the Fair Use Policy and the parody clause still exist and have been exploited for years, and are just as applicable in this instance as any other.  Unfortunately Marvel chooses to ignore the actual law in suits, and wins, but will halt artists from continuing their passions; with each court case, the fear of a threat does not help matters either.  Artists continue to come forward with statements agreeing with Marvel, such as Robert Liefeld, creator of Deadpool, Cable, and the first X-force, boasting that he is aware that,

“Not a single creator that has sued Marvel for creative compensation has succeeded. The list is getting longer. Know what you signed.  I do not own Deadpool, Cable, X- Force—I get a generous payout on their exploitation, but I knew from day one, they are not mine. Period.  I signed those deals when I was 21 years old. I knew that pennies on the dollar were better than no pennies at all.  I was an eager young talent looking to change the game and the playing field, I did that through my creations. No regrets” (Liefeld).

It is very disheartening that so many creators would choose to side with Marvel and cease working on their wonderful stories and drawings.  The main Copyright Law is conveniently vague, but there are other ways to gloss and side-step it and still succeed; parody and Fair Use are strong weapons to have against Marvel’s legal team.  Marvel is not wrong in knowing it has the ability to sue, but wrong for actually suing and even more so for succeeding.

Works Cited

Copyright and Fair Use.” ASHE Higher Education Report 34.4 (2008): 31-52. Academic Search Premier. Web. 3 Apr. 2012.

Deazley, Ronan. “Copyright And Parody: Taking Backward The Gowers Review?.” Modern Law Review 73.5 (2010): 785-807. Academic Search Premier. Web. 3 Apr. 2012.

Liefeld, Robert.  Twitter.  Web.  14 Feb. 2012.

Cieply, Michael.  “Court Ruling Says Marvel Holds Rights, Not an Artist.” New York Times.  Web.  28 July 2011.

O’Neal, Sean.  “Marvel Forces Ghost Rider Creator to Stop Saying he’s Ghost Rider’s Creator.”  The A.V. Club.  10 Feb.  2012.

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