Visual Rhetoric Rewrite-G90

0:01 we see a girl building a contraption. Will it work? She puts it together very quickly like she’s done this before and this is just another improvement to a previously made invention. The mess shows parts and spare wood. This shows that she has made these before.

0:03 We see her at the top of a ramp. She looks determined, ready for her journey in this handmade cart. This cart has a lot of separate pieces of multi colored wood. The wheels of a bicycle. How many tests has she done? She is very confident. It seems as if many tests and alterations to this cart were made before the audience ever saw it.

0:06 We see her parents. The father looks like he works in an office and is already working on his laptop. The mother is in a very floral dress with a blue sweater. She is writing a check. Does she take care of the financials in the family? Their daughter in the background is mid-air flying in this cart.

0:10 We see her go through a portal to a carnival land. There are talking animals and it seems to be middle ages themed from the look of the castles. She is be-wondered and flabbergasted at this land. Where are the humans? Is this a universe where other mammals became fully sentient and humans didn’t? The talking animal is a porcupine holding a cup of coffee.

0:14 We see text on the screen that says STEM and from this we can assume that this an ad promoting STEM. It cuts to the girl pulling a contraption together with rope. Her experience building similar contraptions allows for her to build the same contraption allowing her to possibly get home.

0:20 We see her face has oil marks from her creating contraptions. She flies into balloons and talks to a bear.

0:30 We see the group of animals and her in a cart heading for a jump as if she was trying to get back home to her family. Does she wish to show her universe that there are multiverses? Is she planning an invasion? Does she seek power? Or does she seek the company of friends made? How did she ever communicate with these animals? How long was she stuck in that universe? She makes it back and some text pops up that says @shecanstem this proves that this is a promotion for STEM among women.

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