Grammar Exercise – iwantpopsicle

If a primary caretaker has a negative attitude towards their child, it increases the risk that their child will grow up hostile towards others. And it’s not just aggression towards others that results from child abuse; a large amount of children raised by abusive parents also harm themselves. The reason for this negative behavior is that the children don’t learn appropriate techniques for handling life’s disappointments. If you aren’t raised with coping skills, you’re much too likely to act ‘inappropriately’ than if you have developed more reasonable approaches. The effect of poor parenting as reported by Dr. Geoffrey Dahmer in “The Bully Papers”, is that everyone gets the child they deserve.

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1 Response to Grammar Exercise – iwantpopsicle

  1. davidbdale says:

    You’ve left some errors uncorrected, Pop.

    Fails For Grammar

    Consult the Fails For Grammar post for the Rules.

    Rule 4B
    Rule 5
    Rule 3
    Rule 12
    Rule 8 (Two problems here. You’re using the wrong word AND you don’t have a comparative to make the comparison.)
    Rule 11
    Rule 7
    Rule 14 (everyone)

    You may correct by leaving a revised version below OR by editing your post. (I won’t notice if you edit your post, so put it in Feedback Please if you want me to look at it again.)


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