Causal Argument – bluntwriting88

Ionizing Threats

If an electromagnetic pulse were to detonate over the middle of America, all the population’s means of communication, power, refrigeration, economy, and society would be at full mercy to the ionization of the particles in the air. Similarly, but not as destructively, a massive major storm taking out power to an entire swathe of the U.S. has the capability of leaving thousands without electricity for multiple weeks. These are few of the greatest threats and challenge the electrical infrastructure in America. Despite the development of physical understanding and technologies, America is in this energetically vulnerable position due to lack of investment in improved energy transport infrastructure, specifically the electric power grid. There is much physics and engineering which allows for electromagnetic shielding, and there is also much literature and work done on improving operational procedures regarding our electrical power system. The only question is whether the U.S. government is prepared to being a serious and sophisticated analysis, reevaluation, monetary investment, and improvement upon the current existing infrastructure. America has never been in such an unstable and vulnerable position ever before in its history due to this general lack of interest and funding from the U.S. government with regards to the power grid.

In the specific case of an EMP attack on American soil, America has almost zero defensive and counter-threat infrastructure in the circumstance of EMP’s. As mentioned, all electromagnetic devices can be rendered useless from such attacks. Much of American society can be fragmented and destroyed from this, as electronic devices operate and run the U.S. economy which supports the whole of the societal structure for America. If a foreign power has nuclear weapons, then creating an EMP over America is a real and ever-increasing threat. There is quite simply not much else to do other than to be as cleverly prepared and defensive such that if such an EMP attack were to take place, few power plants, substations, lines, devices, etc. would be severely affected or damaged at all. The colloquial idea of investing in one’s future is heard and observed commonly in America. As years have gone and gone by, America has rejected investment in its power systems, which as expected, has left behind such power systems in the sands of time only to be wholly obscured by EMP devices possessed by hostile foreign nations, superior foreign energy transmission, protection, and economics. Now more than ever the problem and its causation (and thus a potential solution) are clear to scientists, engineers, the rest of the world, and America.

When one steps outside in America to examine the powerlines, it is hard to find any significant change at all since they were first erected. The only time we ever hardly see anything different or a replacement is during power outages. The antiquated delivery systems for electricity are only one such example of lack of interest and investment from the government. Powerlines, most of which are 30 years old, have not received investment since their inception

Many power plants were created during the post war boom following WWII. Yet, while WWII veterans become increasingly hard to come by, it is without scarcity to find a power plant dating to the 1940’s. so much so that the American Society of Civil Engineers gave the entire energy infrastructure a barely passing grade of D+ for all the United States. That is truly astounding considering electricity and its delivery is the literal powerhouse of our modern industrialized society. The U.S. government’s lack of interest, improvement, and investment in the power grid means that the state of our power systems has equivalently become a deteriorated and dilapidated relic with an increasing number of yearly problems.

As a matter of fact, America’s vulnerability and lacking in the energy sector currently ends up costing more money to supply electricity to millions of homes. If only investment would be made in changing or improving upon the power grid, then the investment would have a very good justification. So here a new vulnerability for America is created from the disinterest of change and funding: the vulnerability of American energy on the world market.  Americans paying more for outdated power delivery simply because the infrastructure has not been maintained or updated properly hurts the American economy, but most importantly and principally, Americans which are paying for electricity at the ‘archaic’ price level.

Americans are still living in the shadow of development and technological progress while utilizing dilapidated and unprotected electric devices and power transmission. As is usually the case, lack of money is the issue. A lack of interest for investment in  such a large and indispensable component of the American Machine is extremely dangerous, as all of the unshielded circuits which are abstracted away from us but inside everything we use are one short circuit away from complete inutility which implies the worst for America.
               

References

Cohen, A. (2019, April 05). Trump Moves To Protect America From Electromagnetic Pulse Attack. Retrieved October 29, 2020, from https://www.forbes.com/sites/arielcohen/2019/04/05/whitehouse-prepares-to-face-emp-threat/

Joshua D. Rhodes Postdoctoral Researcher of Energy. (2020, March 20). The old, dirty, creaky US electric grid would cost $5 trillion to replace. Where should infrastructure spending go? Retrieved October 29, 2020, from https://theconversation.com/the-old-dirty-creaky-us-electric-grid-would-cost-5-trillion-to-replace-where-should-infrastructure-spending-go-68290

Our Outdated Grid. (n.d.). Retrieved October 29, 2020, from https://cleanenergygrid.org/our-outdated-grid/

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4 Responses to Causal Argument – bluntwriting88

  1. davidbdale says:

    Paragraph 1. It’s odd that you invoke the example of a big storm AFTER you’ve raised the specter of an EMP. It minimizes the impact you could achieve by first reminding us how devastating a simple weather occurrence can be and then laying on us the larger catastrophe of a deliberate attack. We don’t need “a few” threats. We need ONE threat: busted grid. Your job after that is to make us fear most the threat that could hurt us most.

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  2. davidbdale says:

    Paragraph 1 and general advice. You write well enough to want to purge your language of awful phrases like “due to” and “with regard to.” They’re almost always vague and virtually always unnecessary. Your sentence:

    America has never been in such an unstable and vulnerable position ever before in its history due to this general lack of interest and funding from the U.S. government with regards to the power grid.

    What you meant:

    Disinterest and funding shortfalls threaten America’s power grid as never before.

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  3. davidbdale says:

    Let’s tighten up some language.
    In the specific case of an EMP attack on American soil, America has almost zero defensive and counter-threat infrastructure in the circumstance of [against] EMPs, . As mentioned, all [which render] electromagnetic devices can be rendered useless from such attacks. Much of American society can be fragmented and destroyed from this, as [by disabling the] electronic devices operate and run the U.S. economy which supports the whole of the societal structure for America. [that power American society]. If a [Any] foreign power has [with] nuclear weapons, then creating[can create] an EMP over America is a real and ever-increasing threat. There is quite simply not much else to do other than to be as cleverly prepared and defensive such that if such an EMP attack were to take place,, [and we have not invested in protecting our] power plants, substations, lines, and devices. etc. would be severely affected or damaged at all. The colloquial idea of investing in one’s future is heard and observed commonly in America. As years have gone and gone by, America has rejected investment in its power systems, which as expected, has left behind s [Our] power systems in the sands of time only to be wholly obscured by [could be obliterated by] EMP devices possessed by hostile foreign nations [with] superior foreign energy transmission, protection, and economics. Now more than ever[,] the problem and its causation (and thus a potential solution) are [should be] clear to scientists, engineers, the rest of the world, and America.

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  4. davidbdale says:

    Put this back in Feedback Please if you need more interference. 🙂

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