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Research- MysteryLimbo

Prisoners Are People Too Felons in the United States have second class citizenship. Becoming a felon in the United States makes one a second class citizen. Second class citizens do not have the same rights as the average American such … Continue reading

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Annotated Bibliography- MysteryLimbo

1.Hess, A. (2018, November 12). California is paying inmates $1 an hour to fight wildfires. Retrieved from https://www.cnbc.com/2018/08/14/california-is-paying-inmates-1-an-hour-to-fight-wildfires.html Background: This article is about how California is paying inmates $1 an hour to fight wildfires. Abigail Hess goes into depth on … Continue reading

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Reflective Statement-MysteryLimbo

Core Value I: After taking Comp 2 my skill in identifying problems such as grammar, sources, and other mecanics have improved drastically. The way we were taught throughout the semester was though conversation more than anything and it helps you … Continue reading

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Rebuttal Rewrite- MysteryLimbo

Why we need to stop mass incarceration before it’s too late. The United States is the developed, richest, and sophisticated nation in the world and is what the rest of the world views as a role model even though mass … Continue reading

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Casual Rewrite- MysteryLimbo

The Prison Loophole The justice system and prison sentencing date back to ancient civilizations keeping prisoners in work camps or prisons, or even to execute them. Most forms of those previous incarceration/confinement methods are now unjust in most countries including … Continue reading

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Visual Rewrite- MysteryLimbo

0:00-0:01 The animation is Disney and each character is either based off of Disney show or videogame. Then scene open with the joy of a team hand stack. Sora, Goofy, and Donald Duck beginning with unity. 0:02-0:03 The scene of … Continue reading

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Rebuttal- MysteryLimbo

Needs a Real Title The United States is the developed, richest, and sophisticated nation in the world and is what the rest of the world views as a role model. Even though mass incarceration is happening in the United States … Continue reading

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