Rebuttal Rewrite—612119

Mask up

Rebuttal Argument-612119d

New thesis

Requiring a mandatory Mass program in the United States would have a positive effect on saving human lives while doing great things for the economy. This idea to be true because the less human life  lost the more the faster the economy would be able to open back up since businesses would be able to run since the wide spread of covid-19 wouldn’t occur so fast. It would also help prevent another massive shutdown of the local and Country by wearing such a cheap product over the face.  Keeping Americans healthy should be the primary goal in defeating the virus.

The COST

While wearing a mask could give Americans a false sense of security it is the only way to continue living with this pandemic.  This system is far from perfect but having it in place will help keep things going. A claim that wearing a mask gives you a false sense of security is a big one.While yes you can still be infected by the virus while wearing a mask the odds are extremely low and combining it with the other recommendations is our best way. According to Dr Lisa Lockerd Maragakis “Wearing a face mask in public helps prevent the spread of COVID-19 — but only if worn properly, covering both your nose and mouth.” In the case where people don’t do this it defeats the purpose of wearing the mask in the first place and won’t prevent the spread and wont prevent you from getting sick. As a country we need to fight this together or we will end up wasting years of our lives because we don’t. If we viewed this as a World War and got everyone on board with containing this virus we would have a chance to go back to normal without a vaccine out for the masses.

Another counter to that would be Americans would get sick from these masks if they keep wearing them without washing them or getting a new mask putting more lives at risk. Obviously Putting a dirty mask on could potentially spread the virus. Considering this is a concern for some it is understandable to be the solution is simple.  A NEW MASK. “To avoid contamination (which can happen if you touch it, set it down or just if you’re out and about), throw your cloth mask in the washing machine at the end of each day or after each use, says Dr. Burgess. Since we are in a pandemic people need to be more cautious of others since this has the power to shut down our country. So it’s not giving a false sense of security it more or so using common sense you wouldn’t want a dirty mask on your face in the first place. Being more clean at the end of the day will help Americans as a whole to prevent other sickness. Being extra careful will never hurt anyone and if anything we will prepared.

Someone who wore the mask at all times would be California’s assemblymember Miss Autumn Burke; she believes she got the covid-19 virus while wearing her mask indoors at a meeting where social distancing wasn’t practiced. cases like these will still pop-up even though they wore their mask but that’s how contagious this virus actually is. “While masks are effective, they are not 100% foolproof,” says Dr. Burgess. Maintaining a distance of at least six feet between yourself and others adds an extra layer of protection”. On top of preaching how important mask our hand washing and social distancing should even be practiced better since they are both important to containing the virus.  Important now we should be stressing and washing, which  is  efficient against the virus. Nothing is going to be truly 100 percent against this virus. We just have to do our best everyday to end it so we can get back to normal life. Mask cant and wont be 100 percent effective but if they save 1 life it shouldn’t be a question.

Wearing a mask also won’t weaken your immune system. So people’s first instincts were they didn’t want to wear it to repress their immune system which isn’t the case.  A healthy immune system is very important against fighting off any virus and when covid 19 first came out a rumor that was out there was that wearing a mask could repress your immune system. This claim is false and is looked down on in the medical community. The immune system is the body’s natural defense system.  The immune system works and its function as a whole, which is crucial in preventing infection or disease which Covid is. Dr Sullivan said in the article Can face masks lower oxygen levels or weaken the immune system? Here’s what health experts say “I can pretty much guarantee to you that wearing a mask intermittently throughout the day or even all day long is not going to weaken your immune system.” Wearing a mask won’t affect your health in any way actually. Even your breathing which some people brought up as a cause of concern is really non existent. Facemask may be uncomfortable and may be a bother to wear but they aren’t meant for style here meant to protect you. Some facebook articles have flooded the internet where some guy passed out because he was wearing a face mask. It came out to be false but it was spread to thousands of people. It doesn’t affect your breathing to the point where Co2 levels rise or you can pass out. It’s going to be harder to breathe, yes but it’s because there is a piece of cloth covering your face.

A Mask mandation might sound a little harsh at first but in the end it will end up preventing thousands if not  tens of thousands of deaths this year alone in the United States. We need to sense up an act on it before it’s too late And not let unexpected Americans die.

References

CBS Los Angeles, unknown. “Experts Warn Masks Can Give Some False Sense Of Security, Encourage People To Socially Distance.” CBS Los Angeles, CBS Los Angeles, 7 July 2020, losangeles.cbslocal.com/2020/07/07/masks-scientists-covid-19-airborne/

Lazzarino, Antonio. “Covid-19: Important Potential Side Effects of Wearing Face …” Thebjm, 20 Apr. 2020, www.bmj.com/content/369/bmj.m1435/rr-40

Nicolaides, Dr. “Handwashing Slows the Virus More Effectively than Face Masks.” Clinical Trials, 7 May 2020, www.cmbclinicaltrials.com/post/handwashing-slows-the-virus-more-effectively-than-face-masks

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3 Responses to Rebuttal Rewrite—612119

  1. davidbdale says:

    Hey, 612. Thank you for the post and the feedback request.

    First some formatting issues.
    —Please name your posts according to our class protocol. I’ve renamed your post Rebuttal Rewrite—612119. Use the same technique for all your posts to make them easier to find on the blog.
    —In APA style, your sources are identified as References as I have demonstrated with yours at the bottom of the page. Adopt this style to all your own posts as well.
    —When you submitted this post, you didn’t separate your sources with a return. The second and third were combined and neither had a usable link. I have located all three sources, separated the references, and provided working links. Please do this work yourself on the rest of your own posts.
    —You have somehow gotten the impression that your Rebuttal argument should contain an alternate hypothesis as a separate note at the top of the page. As described in the assignment post, identified as My Worthy Opponent Is Wrong, the technique of the Rebuttal argument is to FIND and QUOTE or paraphrase a reputable “opponent” whose position on your topic MUST be refuted before you can convince skeptical readers. Present that position AS SOMEONE ELSE’S, attribute it as THEIRS, and then refute it. Re-read the assignment if that’s unclear.

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  2. davidbdale says:

    From your version of the assignment, we can’t tell which of the positions you personally endorse.

    New thesis

    Requiring a mandatory Mass program in the United States would have a positive effect on saving human lives while doing great things for the economy. This idea to be true because the less human life lost the more the faster the economy would be able to open back up since businesses would be able to run since the wide spread of covid-19 wouldn’t occur so fast. It would also help prevent another massive shutdown of the local and Country by wearing such a cheap product over the face. Keeping Americans healthy should be the primary goal in defeating the virus.

    Hand washing

    Wearing a mask will give Americans a false sense of security since the mask isn’t even the most important thing in preventing the spread of the virus.

    Readers of your Rebuttal argument should not be in doubt about which is your point of view.

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  3. davidbdale says:

    I’m going to move along to another feedback request, 612. See what you can do to resolve this fundamental problem of your Rebuttal argument first, then feel free to put your post back into Feedback Please for additional interference. I’ll be happy to respond to your requests as long as you ask for specific assistance.

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