Grammar Exercise- pomegranate

” If a primary caretaker has a negative attitude toward their child it increases the risk that they’re child will grow up hostile towards others. And its not just aggression toward others that results from child abuse; a large amount of children raised by abusive parents also harm themselves. The reason for this negative behavior is because the children don’t learn appropriate techniques for handling lifes disappointments. If you aren’t raised with coping skills, your much to likely to act ‘inappropriately’ then if you have developed more reasonable approaches. The affect of poor parenting as reported by Dr. Geoffrey Dahmer in “The Bully Papers”, is that everyone gets the child they deserve. “

If a primary caretaker has a negative attitude toward their children, it increases the risk of the child growing up hostile towards others. Not only aggression will be shown from the child who shows signs of child abuse. A large amount of children raised by abusive parents also harm themselves. The reason for this negative behavior is because the children do not learn appropriate techniques for handling life’s disappointments. If a child is not raised with coping skills, the child is more likely to act “inappropriately” then if the child were to have developed more reasonable approaches. The affect of poor parenting, as reported by Dr. Geoffrey Dahmer in “The Bully Papers,” is that everyone gets the child they deserve.

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1 Response to Grammar Exercise- pomegranate

  1. davidbdale says:

    Approximately 7 errors, all fatal, and widely distributed among the Dreaded FFG.
    Take another shot at this, Pomegranate, and let me know when you’ve revised.
    Consult the Fatal Grammar Errors list for help: https://rucomp2.com/about/fails-for-grammar/

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