Robust Verbs-shadowswife

Posted on October 27, 2020 by shadowswife

In Vancouver, heroin addicts commit crimes to continue their habits. The “free heroin for addicts” program does everything they can to settle their addiction. However, addicts have no limits to how they will retrieve this drug to satisfy their addiction. The program fails to attend to these addicts using heroin and only prioritizes the city’s rising crime rates. The program hopes to reduce the crime rate and keep heroin users out of the hospital by administering the drug. The program will in turn fix the city but not the addiction that these people face.

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Robust Verbs – clementine

Posted on October 27, 2020 by clementine102

There is a huge problem in Vancouver with heroin addicts committing crimes to support their habits. The “free heroin for addicts” program is doing everything they can to stop the addicts. The problem is that there is a large crime rate due to the addicts. It is obvious that addicts have a hard time getting through their day to day lives. Daily activities such as jobs, interactions, and relationships are hard to maintain because of the fact that they are using. By heroin users being addicted, they will do whatever they have to do to get their hands on the drug. The types of crimes committed are those of breaking and entering as well as stealing. There are no limits to where they will go to retrieve this drug so that they can feed their addiction. The problem with this program is that it won’t help to ween these addicts off using heroin. It is only trying to save the city from rising crime rates that they’re up to. By providing the drug, these addicts will be off the streets, which in turn will prevent them from committing minor street crimes. This will also keep the heroin users out of the hospital. It is pointless that the hospitals have to deal with people that want to use bad drugs or unsanitary needles and find themselves being unable to afford hospital bills and hard to cope without the drug. This program gives people free heroin in the cleanest way possible. This will in turn fix the city  but not the addiction that these people face.

1.) There is a huge problem in Vancouver with heroin addicts committing crimes to support their habits.

Fixed: Felons who commit crimes, especially those who are heroin addicts, are creating a huge problem in Vancouver.

2.) The “free heroin for addicts” program is doing everything they can to stop the addicts.

Fixed: Addicts have been uncontrollable but the “Free Heroin for Addicts” program has a plan to stop these felons.

3.) The problem is that there is a large crime rate due to the addicts

Fixed: In the city of Vancouver, heroin addicts have caused the crime rates to increase.

4.) It is obvious that addicts have a hard time getting through their day to day lives

Fixed: *Can be deleted since this is known information to most people and doesn’t pertain to the program*

5.) Daily activities such as jobs, interactions, and relationships are hard to maintain because of the fact that they are using

Fixed: *Can be deleted since this is known information to most people and doesn’t pertain to the program*

6.) By heroin users being addicted, they will do whatever they have to do to get their hands on the drug

Fixed: *Can be deleted since this is more information about the heroin user which we do not absolutely need*

7.) The types of crimes committed are those of breaking and entering as well as stealing.

Trespassing and theft crimes are more likely to be committed by heroin addicts.

8.) There are no limits to where they will go to retrieve this drug so that they can feed their addiction.

Fixed: *This was already similarly stated in a previous sentence so we can delete it*

9.) The problem with this program is that it won’t help to ween these addicts off using heroin

Fixed: Although most drug addict programs help a victim slowly shy away from the drug, the “Free Heroin for Addicts” program does not which plays into the increase of crime rates in the city.

10.) It is only trying to save the city from rising crime rates that they’re up to.

Fixed: The program is not helping the addict, but is only trying to help the city be more safe.

11.) By providing the drug, these addicts will be off the streets, which in turn will prevent them from committing minor street crimes.

Fixed: The reduction of minor street crimes would be provided by the “Free Heroin for Addicts” program which in turn, give free heroin to the addicts.

12.) This will also keep the heroin users out of the hospital

Fixed: The “Free Heroin for Addicts” program will reduce the number of hospitalizations since the drug is being provided to addicts safely.

13.) It is pointless that the hospitals have to deal with people that want to use bad drugs or unsanitary needles and find themselves being unable to afford hospital bills and hard to cope without the drug

Fixed: Having addicts to continue to use unsafe ways to inject heroin is unnecessary if the “Free Heroin for Addicts” program could provide safety and benefit the addicts financially as well.

14.) This program gives people free heroin in the cleanest way possible.

Fixed: *Do not need this sentence since the previous sentence is saying the needle is already unsanitary and the program is providing safe ones*

15.) This will in turn fix the city  but not the addiction that these people face.

Fixed: The addiction of heroin will not go away, but the safety of Vancouver will greatly increase through the “Free Heroin for Addicts” program.

Revised and Edited Paragraph:

Felons who commit crimes, especially those who are heroin addicts, are creating a huge problem in the city of Vancouver. Addicts have been uncontrollable but the “Free Heroin for Addicts” program has a plan to stop these felons. In the city of Vancouver, heroin addicts have caused the crime rates to increase. Trespassing and theft crimes are more likely to be committed by heroin addicts. Although most drug addict programs help a victim slowly shy away from the drug, the “Free Heroin for Addicts” program does not, which plays into the increase of crime rates in the city. The program is not helping the addict, but is only trying to help the city be more safe. The reduction of minor street crimes would be provided by the “Free Heroin for Addicts” program which in turn, gives free heroin to the addicts. The “Free Heroin for Addicts” program will also reduce the number of hospitalizations since the drug is being provided to addicts safely. Having addicts to continue to use unsafe ways to inject heroin is unnecessary if the “Free Heroin for Addicts” program could provide safety and benefit the addicts financially as well. The addiction of heroin will not go away, but the safety of Vancouver will greatly increase through the “Free Heroin for Addicts” program.

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Not Because – cfriery

Posted on October 27, 2020 by cfriery

1. Coats was using a legal drug, marijuana, for a legitimate purpose for which he had a prescription, but he was fired for violating workplace policy.

2. An employer can’t fire a person who has anxiety because they are taking the correct medication to deal with the issue.

3. Alcohol is legal, so employees don’t get fired for going out and having a few beers after work, and, in Colorado, so is marijuana.

4. Coats was trying to treat the pain he endured on a daily basis so he shouldn’t have been fired.

5. It’s not fair to discriminate against him since he was able to ease the pain of his multiple spasms by using marijuana.

6. Coats wasn’t harming anyone at his job due to his smoking of marijuana, and, he was doing so on his own time, not at work.

BACKGROUND FOR 7-10: The director of the Secret Service ordered an internal review of its security procedures around the White House after a man armed with a knife who jumped the fence at 1600 Pennsylvania Avenue on Friday night managed to make his way through the front door of President Obama’s home before being stopped, officials said Saturday.

7. Omar Gonzalez didn’t penetrate deep into the White House because of the swift actions of Secret Service agents.

8. The Secret Service isn’t being compelled to explain its actions because of the way it  responded to the breach of the White House, but rather how the breach occurred.

9. Secret Service chief Julia Pierson won’t be fired because of her testimony before Congress yesterday. Her incompetence might cost her her job though.

10. Secret Service agents didn’t use deadly force against the intruder because he was carrying a knife with a 4-inch blade.

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Robust Verbs-rowanstudent24

Posted on October 27, 2020 by rowanstudent24

The Paragraph:

There is a huge problem in Vancouver with heroin addicts committing crimes to support their habits. The “free heroin for addicts” program is doing everything they can to stop the addicts. The problem is that there is a large crime rate due to the addicts. It is obvious that addicts have a hard time getting through their day to day lives. Daily activities such as jobs, interactions, and relationships are hard to maintain because of the fact that they are using. By heroin users being addicted, they will do whatever they have to do to get their hands on the drug. The types of crimes committed are those of breaking and entering as well as stealing. There are no limits to where they will go to retrieve this drug so that they can feed their addiction. The problem with this program is that it won’t help to ween these addicts off using heroin. It is only trying to save the city from rising crime rates that they’re up to. By providing the drug, these addicts will be off the streets, which in turn will prevent them from committing minor street crimes. This will also keep the heroin users out of the hospital. It is pointless that the hospitals have to deal with people that want to use bad drugs or unsanitary needles and find themselves being unable to afford hospital bills and hard to cope without the drug. This program gives people free heroin in the cleanest way possible. This will in turn fix the city  but not the addiction that these people face.

Revised:

In Vancouver, heroin addicts have been committing crimes to support their habits which has grown into a major problem. The program, “Free Heroin for Addicts,” is doing their best to help the addicts with their problem. The crime rate is large due to the addicts. The addicts day to day lives are challenging. Heroin users will do whatever it takes to get drugs because of their addiction. Breaking and entering and stealing are the types of crimes being committed. The addicts will go through a lot to feed their addiction. Unfortunately, “Free Heroin for Addicts” doesn’t help the addicts to stop using heroin. The program is only trying to decrease the crime rate. They provide the drug to the addicts to keep them from off the streets and committing minor street crimes. Keeping the heroin users out of the hospital is also one of their objectives. This plan from the program will decrease the crime rate but will not help the heroin users with their addiction.

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Robust Verbs-profs22

Posted on October 27, 2020 by Jessicariccio

Original:There is a huge problem in Vancouver with heroin addicts committing crimes to support their habits. The “free heroin for addicts” program is doing everything they can to stop the addicts. The problem is that there is a large crime rate due to the addicts. It is obvious that addicts have a hard time getting through their day to day lives. Daily activities such as jobs, interactions, and relationships are hard to maintain because of the fact that they are using. By heroin users being addicted, they will do whatever they have to do to get their hands on the drug. The types of crimes committed are those of breaking and entering as well as stealing. There are no limits to where they will go to retrieve this drug so that they can feed their addiction. The problem with this program is that it won’t help to ween these addicts off using heroin. It is only trying to save the city from rising crime rates that they’re up to. By providing the drug, these addicts will be off the streets, which in turn will prevent them from committing minor street crimes. This will also keep the heroin users out of the hospital. It is pointless that the hospitals have to deal with people that want to use bad drugs or unsanitary needles and find themselves being unable to afford hospital bills and hard to cope without the drug. This program gives people free heroin in the cleanest way possible. This will in turn fix the city  but not the addiction that these people face.

1.There is a huge problem in Vancouver with heroin addicts committing crimes to support their habits.

Revised: Heroin addicts turn into criminals when it comes down to supporting there habits.

2.The “free heroin for addicts” program is doing everything they can to stop the addicts.

Revised: Vancouver’s “free heroin for addicts” is putting a stop to the addicts.

3.The problem is that there is a large crime rate due to the addicts. It is obvious that addicts have a hard time getting through their day to day lives.

Revised: *delete both sentences

4.Daily activities such as jobs, interactions, and relationships are hard to maintain because of the fact that they are using.

Revised: *delete sentence

5.By heroin users being addicted, they will do whatever they have to do to get their hands on the drug.

Revised: Heroin users will do anything to get their hands on the drug.

6.The types of crimes committed are those of breaking and entering as well as stealing.

Revised: *combine with previous sentence: Such as breaking and entering and stealing.

7.There are no limits to where they will go to retrieve this drug so that they can feed their addiction.

Revised:*delete sentence (repetitive)

8.The problem with this program is that it won’t help to ween these addicts off using heroin.

9. It is only trying to save the city from rising crime rates that they’re up to.

Revised:*combine both sentences: This program won’t help ween these addicts off using heroin, but it saves the city from rising crime rates.

10.By providing the drug, these addicts will be off the streets, which in turn will prevent them from committing minor street crimes.

11.This will also keep the heroin users out of the hospital.

Revised:*combine both sentences:Providing heroin to addicts will keep them off the streets, reducing crime, and keep users out of the hospital.

12.It is pointless that the hospitals have to deal with people that want to use bad drugs or unsanitary needles and find themselves being unable to afford hospital bills and hard to cope without the drug.

Revised: *delete sentence

13.This program gives people free heroin in the cleanest way possible.

Revised: The “free heroin for addicts” program gives users the drug in a clean and safe way.

14.This will in turn fix the city  but not the addiction that these people

Revised: The program will fix the city, but not the addiction.

Revised paragraph: Heroin addicts turn into criminals when it comes down to supporting there habits. Vancouver’s “free heroin for addicts” is putting a stop to users. Heroin users will do anything to get their hands on the drug, such as breaking and entering and stealing. This program won’t help ween these addicts off using heroin, but it saves the city from rising crime rates. Providing heroin to addicts will keep them off the streets, reducing crime, and keep users out of the hospital. The “free heroin for addicts” program gives users the drug in a clean and safe way. This program will fix the city, but not the addiction.

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Robust Verbs-Hailthegreat8

Posted on October 27, 2020 by hailthegreat8

There is a huge problem in Vancouver with heroin addicts committing crimes to support their habits. The “free heroin for addicts” program is doing everything they can to stop the addicts. The problem is that there is a large crime rate due to addicts. Addicts have a hard time getting through their day to day lives. Daily activities, such as jobs, interactions, and relationships, are hard to maintain because they are using. By heroin users, they will do whatever they have to do to get their hands on the drug. The types of crimes committed are those of breaking as well as stealing. There are no limits to where they will go to retrieve this drug to feed their addiction. The problem with this program is that it won’t help to ween these addicts off using heroin. It is only trying to save the city from rising crime rates that they’re up to something. By providing the drug, these addicts will be off the streets, which will prevent them from committing minor street crimes. Will also keep the heroin users out of the hospital. It is pointless that the hospitals have to deal with people who want to use harmful drugs or unsanitary needles and find themselves unable to afford hospital bills and hard to cope without the drug. This program gives people free heroin in the cleanest way possible, and this will, in turn, fix the city but not the addiction that these people face.

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Robust Verbs- cardinal

Posted on October 27, 2020 by cardinal7218

There is a huge problem in Vancouver with heroin addicts committing crimes to support their habits. The “free heroin for addicts” program is doing everything they can to stop the addicts. The problem is that there is a large crime rate due to the addicts. It is obvious that addicts have a hard time getting through their day to day lives. Daily activities such as jobs, interactions, and relationships are hard to maintain because of the fact that they are using. By heroin users being addicted, they will do whatever they have to do to get their hands on the drug. The types of crimes committed are those of breaking and entering as well as stealing. There are no limits to where they will go to retrieve this drug so that they can feed their addiction. The problem with this program is that it won’t help to ween these addicts off using heroin. It is only trying to save the city from rising crime rates that they’re up to. By providing the drug, these addicts will be off the streets, which in turn will prevent them from committing minor street crimes. This will also keep the heroin users out of the hospital. It is pointless that the hospitals have to deal with people that want to use bad drugs or unsanitary needles and find themselves being unable to afford hospital bills and hard to cope without the drug. This program gives people free heroin in the cleanest way possible. This will in turn fix the city  but not the addiction that these people face.

Revised:

Heroin addicts in Vancouver contribute much to the city’s crime rate in trying to support their habits, so the city came up with the quickest fix it could: give the addicts free heroin. While the “free heroin for addicts” program has lowered Vancouver’s crime rate, it doesn’t help the addicts. Vancouver decided that keeping heroin addicts off the streets and out of hospitals was more important than helping heroin addicts beat their addiction. Truthfully, it is an effective solution. The city would have to put a lot of time and money into a rehabilitation effort without any guarantee that the addicts want to be rehabilitated. Instead, Vancouver enables the addicts, achieving the desired lower crime rate.

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Robust Verbs – cfriery

Posted on October 27, 2020 by cfriery

Vancouver is fraught with heroin addicts committing crimes to support their habits. The “free heroin for addicts” program is doing everything they can to stop the addicts, and their large crime rate. Sadly, it is harrowingly obvious that addicts have a hard time getting through their day to day lives; daily activities such as jobs, interactions, and relationships become hard to maintain because of the fact that they are using. Being addicted, users will do whatever they have to do to get their hands on the drug. The types of crimes committed range from breaking and entering to stealing. There addiction has no limit. The biggest problem with this program is that it encourages usage instead of getting addicts off using heroin, but it’s only trying to lower the cities crime rates. By providing the drug, these addicts will be off the streets, which in turn will prevent them from committing minor street crimes. This will also keep the heroin users out of the hospital. It is counterintuitive to think that the hospitals should have to deal with people that want to use bad drugs or unsanitary needles and find themselves being unable to afford hospital bills and hard to cope without the drug. This program gives people free heroin in the cleanest way possible. This will fix the city, but not the addiction that these people face.

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Robust Verbs – Bigblue821

Posted on October 27, 2020 by bigblue821

There is a huge problem in Vancouver with heroin addicts committing crimes to support their habits. The “free heroin for addicts” program is doing everything they can to stop the addicts. The problem is that there is a large crime rate due to the addicts. It is obvious that addicts have a hard time getting through their day to day lives. Daily activities such as jobs, interactions, and relationships are hard to maintain because of the fact that they are using. By heroin users being addicted, they will do whatever they have to do to get their hands on the drug. The types of crimes committed are those of breaking and entering as well as stealing. There are no limits to where they will go to retrieve this drug so that they can feed their addiction. The problem with this program is that it won’t help to ween these addicts off using heroin. It is only trying to save the city from rising crime rates that they’re up to. By providing the drug, these addicts will be off the streets, which in turn will prevent them from committing minor street crimes. This will also keep the heroin users out of the hospital. It is pointless that the hospitals have to deal with people that want to use bad drugs or unsanitary needles and find themselves being unable to afford hospital bills and hard to cope without the drug. This program gives people free heroin in the cleanest way possible. This will in turn fix the city  but not the addiction that these people face.

Revised:

There is a huge problem in Vancouver with heroin addicts committing crimes to support their habits. The “free heroin for addicts” program is doing everything they can to make sure the addicts get help. The problem is that the addicts are committing crimes at an alarming rate. It is obvious that addicts have a hard time getting through their day to day lives. Daily activities such as jobs, interactions, and relationships are hard to maintain if one of the participants is only worried about getting high. Heroin users are addicted to the ugly drug; they will do whatever they have to do to get their hands on it. The types of crimes committed are those of breaking and entering as well as stealing. There are no limits to where they will go to retrieve this drug so that they can feed their addiction. The problem unfortunately will not help the addicts with the addiction that they are struggling with. The concept of getting help is still on them. It is only trying to save the city from rising crime rates. By providing the drug, these addicts will be off the streets, which in turn will prevent them from committing minor street crimes. This will also keep the heroin users out of the hospital. It is pointless that the hospitals have to deal with people that want to use bad drugs or unsanitary needles. They often find themselves being unable to afford hospital bills. This program gives people free heroin in the cleanest way possible. This will in turn fix the city but not the addiction that these people face.

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Robust Verbs– SmilingDogTheProfWants

Posted on October 27, 2020 by SmilingDogTheProfWants

“There is a huge problem in Vancouver with heroin addicts committing crimes to support their habits. The “free heroin for addicts” program is doing everything they can to stop the addicts. The problem is that there is a large crime rate due to the addicts. It is obvious that addicts have a hard time getting through their day to day lives. Daily activities such as jobs, interactions, and relationships are hard to maintain because of the fact that they are using. By heroin users being addicted, they will do whatever they have to do to get their hands on the drug. The types of crimes committed are those of breaking and entering as well as stealing. There are no limits to where they will go to retrieve this drug so that they can feed their addiction. The problem with this program is that it won’t help to ween these addicts off using heroin. It is only trying to save the city from rising crime rates that they’re up to. By providing the drug, these addicts will be off the streets, which in turn will prevent them from committing minor street crimes. This will also keep the heroin users out of the hospital. It is pointless that the hospitals have to deal with people that want to use bad drugs or unsanitary needles and find themselves being unable to afford hospital bills and hard to cope without the drug. This program gives people free heroin in the cleanest way possible. This will in turn fix the city  but not the addiction that these people face.”

Vancouver has a major issue with the crime rates that come from the numerous heroin addicts in the city. One solution to this problem is a program called “free heroin for addicts” and aims to lower the crime rate by giving the heroin users a safe place to use so they don’t steal and destroy property to feed their addiction. However, the daily intake of these addicts are not changing, the program only monitors the users and supplies them with clean supplies to use. This program does a good job at keeping the streets clean but the issue of people being addicted to heroin remains in Vancouver.

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