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There is a huge problem in Vancouver with heroin addicts committing crimes to support their habits. The “free heroin for addicts” program is doing everything they can to stop the addicts. The problem is that there is a large crime rate due to the addicts. It is obvious that addicts have a hard time getting through their day to day lives. Daily activities such as jobs, interactions, and relationships are hard to maintain because of the fact that they are using. By heroin users being addicted, they will do whatever they have to do to get their hands on the drug. The types of crimes committed are those of breaking and entering as well as stealing. There are no limits to where they will go to retrieve this drug so that they can feed their addiction. The problem with this program is that it won’t help to ween these addicts off using heroin. It is only trying to save the city from rising crime rates that they’re up to. By providing the drug, these addicts will be off the streets, which in turn will prevent them from committing minor street crimes. This will also keep the heroin users out of the hospital. It is pointless that the hospitals have to deal with people that want to use bad drugs or unsanitary needles and find themselves being unable to afford hospital bills and hard to cope without the drug. This program gives people free heroin in the cleanest way possible. This will in turn fix the city  but not the addiction that these people face.

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In Vancouver, heroin addicts have been committing crimes to support their habits which has grown into a major problem. The program, “Free Heroin for Addicts,” is doing their best to help the addicts with their problem. The crime rate is large due to the addicts. The addicts day to day lives are challenging. Heroin users will do whatever it takes to get drugs because of their addiction. Breaking and entering and stealing are the types of crimes being committed. The addicts will go through a lot to feed their addiction. Unfortunately, “Free Heroin for Addicts” doesn’t help the addicts to stop using heroin. The program is only trying to decrease the crime rate. They provide the drug to the addicts to keep them from off the streets and committing minor street crimes. Keeping the heroin users out of the hospital is also one of their objectives. This plan from the program will decrease the crime rate but will not help the heroin users with their addiction.

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