Not Because-Hailthegreat8

  1. Coats was fired from his job for using a legal drug even though it was prescribed to him.
  2. An employer isn’t allowed to fire an individual dealing with anxiety or taking prescribed medication to help deal with it. 
  3. An employee won’t get fired for going out sometimes to have a few drinks because it’s legal in Colorado; neither is marijuana.
  4. Coats didn’t deserve to be fired. He was only trying to treat his treatment every day. 
  5. You shouldn’t discriminate against an employee because they use marijuana to help their pain. 
  6. Coats never smoked during his job hours. He did it on his hours.
  7. The secret service agents were able to stop Omar Gonzalez from infiltration the white house. 
  8. Government officials are looking into how Omar Gonzalez breached into the white house because the secret service isn’t explaining anything.
  9. Secret service chief Julia Pierson might be fired because she couldn’t do her job right.
  10. The secret service agents chose not to use deadly force against the intruder. 
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1 Response to Not Because-Hailthegreat8

  1. davidbdale says:

    In almost every case, HailTheGreat8, you fail to eliminate the NOT portion of the verb. No matter what you say afterwards, you send the wrong message to readers with the first words of your sentences.

    They didn’t fire coat (yes, they did)
    A business can’t fire an individual (but it does)
    Employees don’t get terminated (yes, they do)
    Coats shouldn’t have been terminated (but he was)
    Omar Gonzalez didn’t enter into the White House due to the quick activities of Mystery Administration operators. (Then why did he?)
    The Secret Service isn’t being constrained to clarify its activities (yes, it is)
    Secret Service boss Julia Pierson won’t be terminated (yes, she will)
    Secret Service operators didn’t utilize destructive power against the interloper since he conveyed a 4-inch sharp edge blade. (Then why did they?)

    You should fix them all.

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