White Paper – sunshine2818

Working Hypothesis

Eliminating guns will reduce the amount of gun violence more than gun control in america because people cannot commit gun violence without a gun 

Purposeful Summaries

Getting beyond the myths: What Americans really think about mass shootings and gun legislation? 

It seems counterintuitive that most people want more legislation involving guns, however the issue of gun control is still controversial. Most Americans have a new spiked fear of mass shootings, compared to the fear of attacks from out of the country terrorist organizations. A common misconception is that Republicans are more likely to care about the gun issue, but that isn’t true. Rebulican and democrats are just as likely to solely vote for a candidate that agrees with their gun views. Even though both parties are in favor of supporting more gun legislation, more republicans are less likely to think that the legislation would even make a difference. This is attributed to the reason behind why Gun violence is so high. Most democrats believe that gun violence is so high because of poor legislation, however the republicans tend to believe that this is because of poor parenting, and violent video games. The article, written by William A. Galston and Clara Hendrickson, suggests that “It appears that the felt need to go beyond the disturbing status quo is counteracting their skepticism that government action can improve the situation”. If we change the view point of gun legislation working, maybe we can actually have gun legislation.     

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Gun control-just facts 

It seems counterintuitive to enact more gun laws when government agencies have trouble enforcing the current gun laws. Most states do have gun laws involving background checks, applicants must be over the age of 21, and so on. However the FBI responsible for registering gun owners  really deny anyone. Out of all the applicants to apply for registration only 0.5 percent were denied. 53 percent of those rejections were previous convictions, however even if you have been labeled as part of any terrorist group, you still have the ability to purchase firearms and explosives. In some states if the FBI take longer than 3 days to run a background check on the applicant, the applicant is able to be approved of having a gun automatically, despite the FBI not finishing their background checks. IN cities in Chicago for over thirty years a ban on handguns within the city was enacted in order to bring down high rates of gun Violence. However, in 2010 the supreme court ruled that it was unconstitutional and the ban was ended.   

https://www.justfacts.com/guncontrol.asp#footnotes

How The U.S. Compares With Other Countries In Deaths From Gun Violence

It seems counterintuitive that America is such a well developed country yet, we have such a high rate of gun violence. The United States average gun violence per 100,000 people is 4.43 percent. With that percent we are ranked number 28th in the world. But comparing us to other wealthier, or well developed countries our rates are much higher. In countries like the United kingdom their rate is .06; Japan, 0.04; South Korea, 0.05; and Iceland, 0.07.  These are other counties with high rates who tend to be in Central America and the Caribbean including El Salvador, 43.11; Venezuela, 42.15; and Guatemala, 29.16. But the United States is a wealthier country, strategies to properly compare counties were suggested to take into account the weather advantages of the countries and implement the factor into a formula so gun violence can be measured compared to wealth of the nations. Even with taking this into account the United States has outrageously large numbers compared to other countries.   

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How American Guns Are Fueling U.K. Crime

It seems counterintuitive to think that our gun problem would only involve us. The U.K in recent years has seen a larger influx of smuggled guns tied back to the U.S. In particular they have mostly been tracked to Florida with their less restrictive gun laws. The United States has more guns than it has people. And since the Trump administration has ‘broad support’ of the gun industry, they are actually looking to expand, and increase the world market. The problem is, if the market of selling legal guns were to increase, so would the illegal smuggling of gunsl rise as well, which would increase the homicides rates. This would not only affect the Uk, but in other countries around the world. The nytimes s“The United States is one of the biggest legal exporters of firearms in the world, but hundreds of thousands of guns also illegally leak out of the country and fuel homicides, especially in Latin America and the Caribbean.” A former gang member in the Uk stated some of the guns came in shipped boxes that also contained children’s high chairs. Guns being illegally smuggled in the Uk also get marked up in cost because of their scarcity. Which gives gangs in the Uk a larger incentive to purchase and sell. Even though knife murder have been on the rise, so has gun violence and now there is a larger aces to guns circulating. 

Handguns-smuggling-murder-us-uk.html 

States with Weak Gun Laws and Higher Gun Ownership Lead Nation in Gun Deaths, New Data for 2018 Confirms

It seems counterintuitive to have weak gun laws knowing that it is correlated to larger rates of gun violence deaths. In the states with the highest rates of gun violence, have also been correlated to have the most gun violence incidents. States like Mississippi, Alabama, Wyoming, Missouri and Louisiana have rates going from 22.80 gun deaths per 100,000 to 21.27. In contrast to that states with the most stricter laws have the lowest gun violence deaths. States like Rhode island, Massesttucetts, Hawaii, New York, and New Jersey have restes going from 3.50 to 4.71. It is also interesting that along with lower gun violence correlated to strict gun laws, there are less individuals registered to have guns.

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White Paper – gooferious

Working Hypothesis: Forcing young adults into therapy rather than the voluntary choice will increase the likelihood of them becoming outstanding members of society.

Purposeful Source Summaries

Stigma as a barrier to recognizing personal mental illness and seeking help

Multiple authors come together to explain what stigma in the mental health community is and why it’s so important to bust this barrier down. Having a mental illness is not uncommon yet many people don’t realize they could have one. Recognizing one’s own mental illness however could be clouded due to the lack of knowledge regarding mental health, prejudice and discrimination. Stigma is defined as a mark of disgrace upon a person or group. Stigma has been identified as a huge barrier in the help-seeking process. Studies have shown one’s own stigmatizing attitude plays a far more important role for making the decision not to seek help. The complex process for seeking help has been broken down into four steps: 1) Self-identifying as having a mental health problem, 2) Need for treatment, 3) Help-seeking intentions & 4) Help-seeking. One way recommended to start the process is by assessing personal complaints as potential signs of a mental illness.

https://adaa.org/about-adaa/press-room/facts-statistics

Facts & Statistics

According to the Anxiety and Depression Association of America (ADAA), anxiety disorders are the most common forms of mental illnesses. Anxiety disorders effects around 40 million adults/18.1% of the American population. Even though these disorders are highly treatable only around 36.9% of adults receive treatment. Social anxiety disorder has been proven to be equally common among men and women and generally begins around the age of 13. Some treatment options for these mental illnesses include: therapy, medication, alternative treatment and transcranial magnetic stimulation (TMS). TMS creates a magnetic field to induce small electric currents in specific parts of the brain; this method has been tested and is FDA approved.

https://acamh.onlinelibrary.wiley.com/doi/abs/10.1111/j.1469-7610.2009.02092.x

The developmental course of anxiety symptoms during adolescence

The transition from childhood to early adolescence comes with many new opportunities to become anew yet other dilemmas also arise. This very transition is said to come with low levels of anxiety. However starting around middle adolescence, these levels of anxiety start to increase. Going into young adulthood provides a sense of worry and doubt about one’s abilities. Young adults become insecure with the new higher expectations from adults around them. It has been studied that girls actually have higher anxiety scores than boys; this observation has remained stable throughout all of the teenage years.

https://www-clinicalkey-com.ezproxy.rowan.edu/#!/content/playContent/1-s2.0-S0924933810702212?returnurl=null&referrer=null

Characteristics and one-year outcome of untreated anxiety and depression

A study conducted by the Netherlands Study of Anxiety and Depression (NESDA) with the help from the Composite Interview Diagnostic Instrument (CIDI) could successfully diagnose 743 patients with an anxiety or depressive disorder. Of these patients 43% of them received no treatment. Of the untreated patients: 25% did not perceive a mental problem, 26% perceived no need for care and 49% expressed a need for care that was not met. According to the study, untreated patients with a need for treatment showed equal severity symptoms and disability to those patients that were in fact treated. The untreated patients even expressed a greater sense of loneliness than those patients who did receive treatment.

https://ajp-psychiatryonline-org.ezproxy.rowan.edu/doi/full/10.1176/appi.ajp.2010.09081132

The Role of a Prescription in Anxiety Medication Use, Abuse and Dependence

In recent years, the need for anxiety prescriptions have substantially gone up. With this increase though comes an increase of nonmedical use of prescriptions. Some examples of nonmedical use of prescriptions include: taking drugs without a doctor’s prescription, a use of the prescription in greater amounts, more frequently or longer than prescribed. Individuals with anxiety disorders are prone to a higher risk of nonmedical use of prescriptions. Other groups of people who can fall victim to this obstacle are men, the younger generation and those apart of the White race. College students who partake in illicit drug use and intoxicated driving are also associated with nonmedical use of prescriptions. The one thing all these groups of individuals can all unfortunately go through is being dependent on these medications after long battles fighting against not using them.

Current State of Research Paper

So far I feel a high level of certainty that I chose a good topic to write about. The research process has been difficult but I’m sure that only means I’m doing what I’m suppose to be doing. While I have had moments where I wanted to give up and start with a totally different topic, I’m actually glad I stuck with this option. I am learning so much more about these mental illnesses that I feel it’s an obligation in a way to try to spread awareness about them. Overall this topic was definitely the right choice for me.

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White Paper — SmilingDogTheProfWants

  1. Childhood obesity
  2. The blame for childhood obesity
  3. The parents fault of giving their child fast food
  4. If parents were more responsible they wouldn’t give their kid fast-food several times a week
  5. If parents didn’t buy fast food for their kids they wouldn’t be obese
  6. Children are to blame for their own obesity because of their heavy desire for the most stimulating things which include fast food, video games, viral videos, YouTube content and (possibly) avoiding situations where others may insult them.

Working hypothesis: Regardless of parents trying their best, if it weren’t for children choosing heavy desires for the most stimulating things like video games, tv, Avoiding situation that could cause insults, and fast food over listening to their parents and playing outside they wouldn’t be obese.

Sources:

Institute, O. M., Board, O. H. P. A. D., Food, A. N. B., & Committee, O. P. O. O. I. (2005). Preventing childhood obesity : Health in the balance. ProQuest Ebook Central https://ebookcentral.proquest.com 

The idea that preventing Childhood obesity is a claim that practically everyone believes in. Just telling your child to go out and play or take away their devices and console, is always the solution presented, but this doesn’t solve any issues. Most children would rather watch their favorite cartoon than go play outside or go for a walk with their family. It only makes sense that the child wants to do some of these things over the more physically demanding aspects of childhood.

A child would much rather eat mcDonalds or KFC because they know how delicious it is compared to the bitter vegetables their parents force on them and will begin to ask over and over for these nice treats to the point the parent might have little choice in the matter. 

Parents just can’t keep up with their children with so much stimuli in today’s environment and find it extremely difficult to have their kid not resent vegetables or have them play outside when it’s hot out over watching a cool video or playing a fun computer game. Parents can’t watch and dictate every move the child makes and the choices the child will make will almost every time be that of pleasure over a future investment

Smith, C. (1999). Understanding childhood obesity. ProQuest Ebook Central https://ebookcentral.proquest.com

“since the early 1960s, [up to the mid 1990s when this statistic was collected] the number of American children, adolescents, and adults who have become overweight or obese has increased dramatically.” Along with the drastic increase of weight we also see the drastic increase of entertainment and convenient food, starting around 1967, Mcdonalds began to expand across the United States, in 1972 the first video game console was released, and since the 1950 television has been the rising star in entertainment; all of these have only improved over time and have their own teams designated to attracting consumer’s attention.

Charansonney, O. L., & Després, J. (2010). Disease prevention–should we target obesity or sedentary lifestyle? Nature Reviews.Cardiology, 7(8), 468-472. doi:http://dx.doi.org.ezproxy.rowan.edu/10.1038/nrcardio.2010.68

Obesity is the avoidance that the parents wish upon their children, but the distractions are all a part of first world countrie’s “sedentary lifestyles.” No one would pick exercising over watching tv if they ignored the benefits and harmfulness of one another so those with weak resolve and bad future management like almost every young child would not see any issues enjoying themselves over working hard.

Institute, O. M., Food, A. N. B., & Committee, O. P. I. P. C. (2007). Progress in preventing childhood obesity : How do we measure up?. ProQuest Ebook Central https://ebookcentral.proquest.com

We hear more and more about how funding is needed to put forth educational and physical programs outside and inside schools to try to prevent, alleviate, and solve the obesity issues in our youth, yet the only thing that is foucused on is the need for more funding and the correct targeted auydience, if you send in a representative of a program to talk to kids in a classroom about the issues of obesity and how to fix it most kids are going to ignore it because most aren’t obese, statistaclly only about 1-4 are in a class around 20 students large. The targeted audience is ignored because the leaders can’t claim a kid is overweight and group him with a bunch of overweight and obese children to talk to them, because other students will make fun of them and parentsd would be angry that a random person acclaimed their kid is overweight. But these programs are relatively good for the  child and should at least be explored, however, the child doesn’t want people to make fun of them so they lose out on their opportunity. (other children may be to blame but it’s still the child’s choice).

Committee, O. O. P. P. F., Institute, O. M., & Early, C. O. P. P. (2011). Early childhood obesity prevention policies. ProQuest Ebook Central https://ebookcentral.proquest.com

For better or for worse, parents can’t force their kids to do too much anymore and their children find it more and more acceptable to disobey their parents and go against their wishes. (though this sounds like a different argument my point is) These children disobey because they can get away with it and the parents either lose patience or run out of time before they need to do other things, perhaps leaving up to schools to handle these situations, but those same kids will ignore teachers and find ways to do as little as possible. Though I believe these children are extremes and somewhat stereotypical I find that they branch off to kids that don’t wanna play outside because its too hot but listen to their parents when they are told to eat their vegetables. The child may not be to blame because their parents could have made them go outside if they forced the child to do it, but by today’s standards this would be slightly cruel and uncaring-like (the point is the child would rather do something else than go outside (sedentary actions more than likely) which cause obesity because of their choice to avoid what is healthy whether they understand the concept of overweight/unhealthy or not they’ve made up their minds making it hard to get them healthy).

Topics for smaller papers: 

Definition argument: I could explain the history and evolution of the sedentary lifestyle for a better understanding of long term issues and the effects it has on different ages and even nationalities to define an actual problem vs one unthought of aspect which I’m trying to cover in my paper.

Cause/effect argument: My paper covers some causes and effects of obesity but mainly focuses around how this is a child’s fault rather than the action they perform leading to it, so a smaller paper could easily be made outline what things in particular cause a majority of obesity in children

Rebuttal Argument: A simple rebuttal argument is that the child could be forced to do anything the parent wants them to do as long as it’s not harmful or impossible for the child (possible mentally damage could occur in that circumstance), but my paper is a result of different ideologies of raising a child and that as a result of the several split ideologies the issue my paper covers is a partial reality.

State of the paper research paper: I’m rather content with the current state of my paper as I find myself able to write all of this in just an hour and a half (including looking up and reading through the sources). However, I believe my hypothesis is restricted in its wording but not its idea and I must figure out a way to word it that covers the general basis of my work that follows it. I believe it to be possible for rewording in my works but I fear that I will need more articles to make my claim as it is a very bizarre one that I feel people will immediately disregard; I do not fear it because I need to find more sources, but because with too much citational information it may appear overwhelming and a relatively boring read, so I may need to change my hypothesis altogether to keep a reader entertained or risk the paper being disregarded as nonsense. I am happy about my current sources and about the information I’ve laid out for later use when I reform and construct the foundation of the paper. 

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White Paper – l8tersk8ter

Working Hypothesis 1

Requiring teenagers during their first year at a high school to be an active member of a competitive team or club will result in increased self-esteem of teenagers.

Purposeful Summaries

Team Sports Achievement and Self-Esteem Development Among Urban Adolescent Girls

Pederson and Seidman investigated the effect of team sports on the developing adolescent self-esteem. It was hypothesized and proven that the self-perception of success in a team sport can be connected to the global self-esteem of teen girls. Often around the age of adolescence girls begin to drift from avid sports participation. They often try to fit a more feminine role as they are developing young girls try to find their way in fit in. They also may have a negative self-evaluation of their sports capabilities, even if they had been playing sports prior. When they teen girls did get involved in sports their self-evaluations increased to a more positive nature. This was due to many factors, such as coach appraisal, contribution to success, feelings of self-accomplishment, and things of that nature. This was a constant finding across race/ethnicity and evaluated in those of low socioeconomic status. The positive sport self-evaluation led to an increase in general positive self-esteem.

Do Youth Learn Life Skills Through Their Involvement in High School Sport? A Case Study

In the Canadian Journal of Education the claim is made that skills that come from athletic [participation also are important life skills for healthy development of adolescents. The SUPER program, Sports United to Promote Education and Recreation, was created to develop sports skills alongside the life skills that are found useful day to day. This intervention resulted in increased positive thinking, among other things. High school sport participation was found to be associated with the ability to have good emotional regulation.

The study conducted follows the participation of high school soccer athletes and resulting life skill lessons. Two fieldworkers were delved into the environment the athletes were in both on the field and in their school. They observed practices and games, paying attention to the coaches interactions with players and specific incidents that platers seemed to learn life lessons from. One evaluated aspect was the athletic codes that everyone had to follow. These codes often pertained to proper sportsmanship and encouraged positive involvement in the sport. Theses codes of conduct spoke to the character of the players and indirectly taught them lessons of proper behavior. Another focus was on the coaches approach and philosophy towards coaching. The coach in this study worked towards developing personal relationships with the players. He found it important to know that even when one cannot change a situation, they can change their attitude about the situation. Lessons that were observed to be learned through the team sport are initiative, respect, and teamwork/leadership.

Social Anxiety Among Adolescents: Linkages with Peer Relations and Friendships

Adolescent anxiety is a new age topic that still has a lot of investigating warranted. This topic is investigated in a study done by Annette M. La Greca and Nadja Lopez. Prior anxiety measures were based off of an adult population, which varies from teenagers in many ways. A major important factor in development of adolescent social functioning is having close friendships. These relationships result in emotional support, intimacy, and expression of emotions, to name just a few, that are essential in the emotional development of a teenager. Having someone that you are close with makes you feel like you are not an outsider and will help prevent shying away from social interactions. Among girls, it was found that anxieties stem from wanting to be accepted and supported by peers. Most other anxieties were found pertaining to social perceptions. Boys were found to be less vulnerable to the anxieties.

The Social and Psychological Importance of Self-Esteem

Mark R Leary states in his chapter of the book The social psychology of emotional and behavioral problems: Interfaces of social and clinical psychology that there are three assumptions made by psychologists across the board about self-esteem. It is universally accepted that people want to enhanced self-esteem, it is more desirable to have a high self-esteem, and raising a low self-esteem can improve the well mental wellbeing of a person.

It is human nature to want to maintain a positive self-esteem. No one enjoys feeling bad about themselves or like they are lesser than another. People take actions towards elevating their self-esteem even in times of failure when it could be most negatively impacted. Low self-esteem is more associated with psychological difficulties instead of the favored psychological wellbeing. People that have a high self-esteem have been found to have better social skills, be more adaptive, and have overall more socially acceptable interactions.

A School-Level Analysis of Adolescent Extracurricular Activity, Delinquency, and Depression: The Importance of Situational Context

In an analysis of adolescent extracurricular activity, Andrew M. Guest and Nick McRee state that around seventy-five percent of youths 7-12 grade participate in at least one extracurricular during the school year. This is a large percentage of kids, and while these activities may not all be competitive, that’s only twenty-five percent that would have to change from doing nothing to being involved. As to everything in life there can be good and bad sides to being involved, and the variation can rely on social context. There’s is a contradictory nature between extracurricular activities and delinquency, in which the first can both increase and decrease the latter. The same is applied with the connection to depression, where both positive and negative outcomes are situationally created.

This study looked into these connections between extracurriculars and both delinquency and depression. There was found to be no consistent measure and the variance was highly context based. It is not about what activity is being participated in, but rather how it is being conducted. There needs to be caution because these activities have the opportunity to seriously have a negative impact on adolescence. This can be combatted by aiming focus towards positive youth development. If activities are carefully constructed and supervised they can maximize the positive outcomes. Making sure to eliminate factors that can cause problems can be effective. This also includes teaching how to deal with hurdles that may need to be overcome and not necessarily just making sure everything is prefect one hundred percent of the time.

Topics for Smaller Papers

Definition/Classification

Discuss the emotional/mental vulnerability at the ages of adolescents, a time where they find who they are and the importance of falling onto a positive path of development.

Cause/Effect

The effect of a team environment on teen self esteem

The different factors of being part of AND contributing to a team

How competition can increase a positive self image

Rebuttal

A possible argument that can be made against my hypothesis is that forcing adolescents into a social situation could have detrimental results for those that have social anxiety, disabilities, or other factors that may cause them stress in that situation.

Another possible argument could be that there are other clubs/activities that promote social development and positive self esteem that are not competitive in nature.

Current State of Research

I think I have a good start on my research. Sources are a little difficult to find, but I know that there’s a lot more out there that will be beneficial to me. I did change my hypothesis from what I was originally planning and I am very happy I made that decision. I think this current topic is already revealing aspects to me that I want to expand on that I was not originally thinking about. There is a big psychology side to this topic so I just want to make sure to check myself and not delve too deep-down unrelated rabbit hole. Overall, I’m happy with the progress that I made and look forward to finding more research to both support and refute my hypothesis.

Revised Hypothesis

Requiring adolescents to participate in a competitive team activity will benefit their mental health and teach life and social skills

Self-Esteem

Team Sports Achievement and Self-Esteem Development Among Urban Adolescent Girls

Sara Pederson, Edward Seidman

This case study evaluates the effect of team sports on the developing adolescent self-esteem. This is a topic of investigation because reports of self-esteem are particularly low during early adolescence for girls. Sports participation among girls is also seen to drop when they reach the age of adolescence. The first hypothesis is that team sports achievements in early adolescence will lead to higher global self-esteem later on. The second hypothesis is that association of achievement and self-esteem will come from the participants self-evaluation. The authors emphasize that the team aspect is a big contributor because it offers more characteristics that can help develop the girls self-evaluation and eventually self-esteem. The study focused on low-income girls, girls only to have limited variables, and low-income because this population is at high risk for falling involvement in sports once adolescence is reached. These girls were chosen from attending urban public schools with a high percentage of free/reduced lunches. Self-esteem was measured using a “test” with a scale in which the girls measured how opposing statements applied to them. The results are consistent with the hypotheses. Higher levels of achievement in team sports led to high self-reported self-esteem in general. They found a relationship between the nature of the team and the positive evaluation, rather than just the girls physical ability. The racial and ethnic backgrounds of the participants were found to be a non-variable. Some mechanisms that influenced the girls are awards, being team captain, and being successful. But while that didn’t happen for everyone, another mechanism that they did all experience is coaching. The positive affirmation from a coach or just having an adult mentor was beneficial to the girls enjoyment of the sport. This study found significant links between adolescent girls participating in team sports and their improvement of their self-perception and self-esteem.

The Social and Psychological Importance of Self-Esteem

Mark Leary

Psychologists across the board have three main assumptions about self-esteem. The first is that it is universally accepted that people want to enhance self-esteem. Human nature pushes us towards wanting to feel good about ourselves. The second is that it is more desirable to have a high self-esteem, once again wanting to feel good rather than bad. The third is that raising a low self-esteem can improve the well mental wellbeing of a person. Having a positive self-view can lead to a more positive mindset and improved mental health. People will take actions towards elevating their self-esteem even in times there is a risk of failure when it could be most negatively impacted. Low self-esteem is more associated with psychological difficulties instead of the favored psychological wellbeing. People that have a high self-esteem have been found to have better social skills, be more adaptive, and have overall more socially acceptable interactions.

Vulnerability

Assessing Mental Health in Vulnerable Adolescents

Holly R. Farley

Mental illness in adolescents has become a serious public health concern in the US as there has been shift in 21st century adolescent behaviors. Teenagers are 12% of the population, and 30% of them have reported symptoms of depression each year. Suicide is now the second leading cause of death between ages 10 and 24. The well-being of adolescents is increasingly important, making them a vulnerable group. Adolescence brings on psychological and physical changes that heighten the risk of mental illness.

A vulnerable population typically include ethnic minorities, low economic status, the LGBTQ+ community, people with a disability, or someone with a family history of mental illness. The group of adolescents fits into this because they are in a stage of development that affects their decision making and has increased reliability on others for support. There may always be never before experienced pressures from family and peers. Common mental health disorders that could emerge may be risk factors for suicide, such as anxiety and depression. Interaction with peers, or the lack of, are influencing factors. Discovering sexuality may come with confusion or stress that leads to negative behaviors. They also may be less willing to come forward about mental health issues that they are having.

Defining and Measuring Vulnerability in Young People

Deeraj Shah, et al.

This article defines vulnerability as the state or condition of being weak or poorly defended. It also establishes the age group of adolescents to be from 10 to 19 years old. During this time they explore new aspects of life, such as sexual identity and practices, which put them at risk for injury or violence. Young people become more vulnerable if they are at the hands of race, gender, socioeconomic status (SES), deprivation, violence, neglect, abuse, and other factors that aren’t listed. The most vulnerable are those susceptible to misfortune. There is more chance for something going wrong if their life isn’t the best to begin with. Some adolescents can be more at risk than their peers.

Social Anxiety/Phobia & Treatment

Social Anxiety Among Adolescents: Linkages with Peer Relations and Friendships

Annette La Greca

Social anxiety has been evaluated mainly in adults and their interpersonal behaviors as well as social functioning. There is even research behind the anxiety in children. But social anxiety among adolescents is more of a new age topic that still requires a lot of investigating because there is great disparities between the age groups. The goal of the study was to evaluate the adolescent links between interpersonal functioning and their peers. Two aspects focused on were general peer acceptance and close friendships. Close friendships taking on important roles for adolescents. Examples are companionship, emotional support, intimacy, and a means to express emotion and results conflicts. A lack of this could result in social fear and avoidance. Adult to teen relationships were also evaluated, though not expected to have much influence.

The study contained 250 high school students. These participants were interviewed at home and measured with social scales and self-perception profiles, and as demographic information was taken down as well. It was found that those with higher social anxiety felt less accepted by peers and less romantically fit, for both boys and girls but stronger in girls. This has led to missing out on social opportunities, which may contribute to social functioning impairments. For girls that were more socially anxious there were reports of lacking close friendships and low quality of the ones they do have. For boys quality was not a factor but lack of close friendships was linked with higher social anxiety and avoidance.

Recent Advances in the Understanding and Treatment of Anxiety Disorders

Steven Shearer

This article talks about treatments for various kinds of anxiety disorders. It claims that everyone experiences some sort of anxiety, whether episodic or situational. Anxiety disorders are the most commonly diagnosed mental health issue. These can affect social function, health care, and general well-being. They can also lead to other mental illnesses, primarily depression. The focus is on specific phobia, social anxiety disorder, generalized anxiety disorder, and OCD.

Social anxiety, also called social phobia, has higher impairment of functioning and less consistence in treatment as compared to other psychiatric disorders. The diagnosis is persistent fear of social situations that have a risk for scrutiny or disapproval by others. Basic shyness can lead to the development of social phobia. One can become consumed with worrying about what others think and constantly stressing about if they’re doing the right thing, preventing them from interacting normally. It can be specific, like public speaking, or generalized, like going to parties. There is a deliberate avoidance of social interactions, which can lower academics, achievement, and lead to an overall low quality of life. This can be treated with medications but will usually be paired with a therapy as well. Exposure therapy is used to treat phobias. Skills to combat the anxiety are taught as the distress is brought on. This works on combating the anxiety head on instead of trying to escape or distract oneself from it. Cognitive behavioral therapy has a focus on accepting the anxiety and working through it rather than trying to suppress it.

Analysis of Social Behavior in Individuals with Social Phobia and Nonanxious Participants Using a Psychobiological Model

Kenneth S Walters, Debra A Hope

This article defines social phobia as an “excessive fear of social situations” that have an expected result of embarrassment and humiliation. This results in a fear of most social situations, such as drink, eating, conversation, and observation by others. About 13% of people experience it at some point in their life. The coping system is socially anxious people is geared towards defense and safety, which are found under a competitive frame of view. They see the social hierarchy while those that aren’t socially anxious don’t actively see competition. The anxious person views themselves as the submissive and tries to prevent interaction with the dominant. They do whatever it takes to avoid rejection and try to remain in the situation, but if needed will focus on how to escape the situation or avoid it all together.

When the authors tested non-anxious against anxious individuals, the main finding was that the fear cones from verbal interaction. Their physical actions in a conversation, such as eye contact or having a relaxed posture, were normal. It is the act of carrying a conversation and verbally interacting that the disparity between the anxious and non-anxious is seen. That is when the socially anxious start to decline and want to escape the situation.

High School Enrollment

K-12 Enrollment Statistics [2020]: Totals by Grade Level + More

Jaleesa Bustamante

This organization gives statistics on number of students enrolled in schools of all ages from the year 2019. There are 15.3 million attended high school (9-12th grade). 3.3 million graduated in 2018, and it was projected that 3.7 million would graduate in 2020, so the numbers are increasing. In 1980, there were 13.2 million students attending secondary/high schools. This increased in 2000 to a total of 13.5 million enrolled. However, the number of high schools decreased from 27,575 in 2000 to just 26,727 in 2018. Individual school enrollment is increasing. Progress of these students can vary based on demographics, socioeconomic status, politics, economies, and general services.

Life Skills

Do Youth Learn Life Skills through Their Involvement in High School Sport? A Case Study

Nicholas L Holt

This study was conducted to determine if and how life skills are learned through sports, specifically a male high school soccer team. Interviews were conducted with 12 of the student athletes and the head coach. The claim is made that skills that come from athletic participation also are important life skills for healthy development of adolescents. The SUPER program, Sports United to Promote Education and Recreation, was created to develop sports skills alongside the life skills that are found useful day to day. This intervention resulted in increased positive thinking, among other things. High school sport participation was found to be associated with the ability to have good emotional regulation.

During the study two fieldworkers were in the environment the athletes went through each day, both on the field and in their school. They observed practices and games, paying attention to the coaches interactions with players and specific incidents that seemed to impact players and be possible opportunities for life lessons to be learned. One evaluated aspect was the athletic codes that everyone had to follow. These codes often pertained to proper sportsmanship and encouraged positive involvement in the sport. Theses codes of conduct spoke to the character of the players and indirectly taught them lessons of proper behavior. Another focus was on the coaches approach and philosophy towards coaching. The coach in this study worked towards developing personal relationships with the players. He found it important to know that even when one cannot change a situation, they can change their attitude about the situation. Lessons that were observed to be learned through the team sport are initiative, respect, and teamwork/leadership. While not directly taught, the study found that the players themselves generated those results from their own experiences.

A School-Level Analysis of Adolescent Extracurricular Activity, Delinquency, and Depression: The Importance of Situational Context

Andrew Guest, Nick McRee

Around seventy-five percent of youths 7-12 grade participate in at least one extracurricular during the school year. This analysis observes those students that are doing extracurriculars and the impact the activities have on levels of delinquency and depression. As with everything in life there can be benefits and down sides to being involved with these extracurriculars, and the variation in outcomes can rely on social context. There is a contradictory nature between extracurricular activities and delinquency, in which the activities can both increase and decrease the presence of delinquency. The same goes with depression, where both decreases and increases in the presence of the illness are situationally created.

The results come from 120 schools that were analyzed. The administrators filled out questionnaires describing their districts. The adolescents from these schools were able to participate in interviews about involvement and self-evaluated delinquency and well-being. This showed that there was not a consistent measure of the connection between variables, but rather it was high context based. What mattered was how activities were being conducted. When they are carefully constructed and supervised, they can maximize positive outcomes, which would be decreases in delinquency and depression. They should not necessarily be perfect all the time, but make sure to address handling problems that do arise effectively. But if the activities aren’t carefully constructed there can be adverse effects and increases in the two negative variables.

Definiton/Categorical Sources Used

Bustamante, JaleesaK-12 Enrollment Statistics [2020]: Totals by Grade Level + More. 6 Sept. 2019, educationdata.org/k12-enrollment-statistics.

Farley, Holly R. “Assessing Mental Health in Vulnerable Adolescents.” Nursing, vol. 50, no. 10, 2020, pp. 48–53., doi:10.1097/01.nurse.0000697168.39814.93.

Shah, Dheeraj, et al. “Defining and Measuring Vulnerability in Young People.” Indian Journal of Community Medicine, vol. 40, no. 3, 2015, p. 193., doi:10.4103/0970-0218.158868.

Causal Sources Used

Guest, Andrew M., and Nick McRee. “A School-Level Analysis of Adolescent Extracurricular Activity, Delinquency, and Depression: The Importance of Situational Context.” Journal of Youth and Adolescence, vol. 38, no. 1, 2008, pp. 51–62., doi:10.1007/s10964-008-9279-6.

Holt, Nicholas L., et al. “Do Youth Learn Life Skills through Their Involvement in High School Sport? A Case Study.” Canadian Journal of Education, vol. 31, no. 2, May 2008, pp. 281–304. EBSCOhost, search.ebscohost.com/login.aspx?direct=true&db=eue&AN=508035517&site=ehost-live.

Leary, Mark R. “The Social and Psychological Importance of Self-Esteem.” The Social Psychology of Emotional and Behavioral Problems: Interfaces of Social and Clinical Psychology., American Psychological Association, 1999, pp. 197–221. EBSCOhost, doi:10.1037/10320-007

Pedersen, Sara, and Edward Seidman. “Team Sports Achievement and Self-Esteem Development Among Urban Adolescent Girls.” Psychology of Women Quarterly, vol. 28, no. 4, 2004, pp. 412–422., doi:10.1111/j.1471-6402.2004.00158.x.

Rebuttal Sources Used

La Greca, Annette M., and Nadja Lopez. “Social Anxiety among Adolescents: Linkages with Peer Relations and Friendships.” Journal of Abnormal Child Psychology, vol. 26, no. 2, Apr. 1998, pp. 83–94. EBSCOhost, search.ebscohost.com/login.aspx?direct=true&db=eue&AN=507634802&site=ehost-live.

Shearer, Steven. “Recent Advances in the Understanding and Treatment of Anxiety Disorders.” Primary Care, vol. 34, no. 3, Elsevier Inc, 2007, pp. 475–504, doi:10.1016/j.pop.2007.05.002.

Walters, Kenneth S., and Debra A. Hope. “Analysis of Social Behavior in Individuals with Social Phobia and Nonanxious Participants Using a Psychobiological Model.” Behavior Therapy, vol. 29, no. 3, 1998, pp. 387–407., doi:10.1016/s0005-7894(98)80039-7.

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White Paper- Pardonmyfrench

  1. Social media and suicide
  2. Social media platforms are based on likes which can cause suicide
  3. Digital content receives likes and can cause users to commit suicide
  4. Number of likes on social media content determines social status which can lead to suicide
  5. Social status which can be built up on social media platforms can determine self-worth and therefor cause suicide.

Working Hypothesis: If social media sites get rid of allowing the amount of likes a user gets on to be shown on their uploaded digital content, suicide rates will lower, and self-worth will improve all due to a more equal appearance of social status.

Sources

“How many likes did I get?”

Positive feedback on social media allows for people, especially teens, to develop a greater self-worth. Included in this article is a study that was conducted to test just that, with Facebook profile pictures and likes. Positive feedback is proven to increase self esteem among users in this study and even shown to make people feel like they have a purpose. This article highly supports the theory I have, and even gives analytical data that was conducted in an experiment to support it.

https://www.sciencedirect.com/science/article/pii/S0022103116303377

“Social Media and Suicide”

Social media is highly linked to suicide in teens and young adults who use the platform. This article aims to show what affect social media can play on someone’s behavior, especially when linked to suicide. Positive and negatives of social media interaction are discussed as well as what approaches the public should be taking to mitigate these risks. Also touched on in this article is how social media can play as a positive in peoples lives if it is in a good light. (need to get access through library) https://ajph.aphapublications.org/doi/abs/10.2105/AJPH.2011.300608

“Impact of Social Media on Self Esteem”

The main issue that we run into with social media is how we feel after the likes and comments. Over the last few years social media has become increasingly popular with teens and in turn plays a part in their everyday emotions. This paper specifically shows how self esteem has lowered among social media users. The paper gives specific data on self esteem and how much it lowered when used for an hour a day. An astounding number of people are present on social media and with the interactions taking place on these sites daily, self esteem scores are only decreasing. The link between social media and self-esteem proves to be negative from the research gathered.

https://papers.ssrn.com/sol3/papers.cfm?abstract_id=3030048

“Self Esteem Levels and Selfies”

Self esteem and selfies that are posted online have a strong correlation. If the picture gets a good reaction with a lot of comment’s and like’s, this can lead to gratification in someone’s life. Strange the way your mood can now be determined by something completely online. Someone who has higher self esteem is able to post and take more selfies, opposed to someone who is less confident in themselves. In addition, the user’s sexual orientation, age, and gender all play a factor into self-verification on social media as well. (This paper pulls a lot of good other sources to check out later down the line).

https://jewlscholar.mtsu.edu/handle/mtsu/4760

“The effects of Instagram”

Social media among college students is increasingly popular as we already know. The psychological wellbeing of a student can be strictly determined based on what’s happening in their social media aspect. Cognitive function is being affected due to social media presence and specifically effecting anxiety levels, self-esteem, and memory. An experimental group was put to the test to prove these true and in fact, the evidence of using Instagram heightened users’ levels of FOMO, and anxiety. The question now becomes how we get this under control. Do we do away with social media completely? Is that even possible in this century? Would showing images without likes on them make a difference?

https://digitalshowcase.lynchburg.edu/utcp/114/

Topics for Smaller Papers

(Definition/Classification Argument)

I could devote a smaller topic of what specific social media sources play the highest roles in self-esteem. I could even dive into what age group is most effected or education level. I’m having a little trouble with what else I could go into specifically.

(Cause/Effect Argument)

My argument already is cause and effect. I could say social media decreases self-esteem in college students and therefor increases the risk of suicide. I could also link it to the number of likes someone gets playing a role in how they feel and if they post to social media frequently or not. Another cause and effect that could be looked at is the demand for social media will never go away so neither will the platforms nor likes completely.

(Rebuttal Argument)

A counterargument of my essay could be don’t use social media if you don’t like how it makes you feel. Someone could easily say to stay off it or don’t make an account. This is flawed because it is the social norm, and everyone has access to electronics. With this being said, someone who is younger will be affected and parents or guardians really don’t have a way to make sure children aren’t on the sites for sure.

Current state of research paper

I feel like I am making great progress. The meeting with you helped and I was able to find a huge number of sources available to me. I have not found any papers with my ex act hypothesis yet so that is a good thing. However, I have found plenty of evidence that points to social media being detrimental to teen development and playing a negative role in a cognitive abilities. From here I hope to keep digging and find sources. I haven’t looked at Wikipedia yet to find further sources. My views have solidified from all of the findings and writing the purposeful summaries helped to give me a road map of each source specifically. I anticipate my outcome to be writing my thesis on this topic. I am super interested in it and found a lot of good information. I hope I can keep working on this and find even more thing to put a good argument together.

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Working Hypothesis: Animal Abuse appears to be more common in dysfunctional homes where people are uneducated in the area of caring for animals properly.

5 Sources plus Purposeful Summaries:

Nelson, D. (2011, October 31). The Cruelest Show on Earth. Retrieved from https://www.motherjones.com/environment/2011/10/ringling-bros-elephant-abuse/

It seems counterintuitive that circus’ would treat their show animals with cruelty, however it is more common than people think. These animals are constantly chained up and are not taken care of when they are ill. They are even shocked and whipped constantly. They are even put on 3 day train rides without any breaks.

For example, an elephant named Kenny was a show animal in “The Greatest Show on Earth” put on by the Ringling Bros. but unfortunately one day he had fallen sick. He had stomach problems after the morning show and after the afternoon show, he began bleeding from his bottom. He also started to struggle to even stand up. Under law, animals are supposed to get medical attention and a veterinarian’s approval before performing again. After looking at Kenny, the Vet said that he was not able to perform the evening show and prescribed him antibiotics. Unfortunately, they made Kenny perform anyway but he couldn’t do any stunts because he was too weak. After the show, they gave him some fluids and put him in his stall. Hours later, they sadly found his body in his stall. The U.S. Department of Agriculture charged Feld Entertainment with 2 violations for making Kenny perform when he was sick and could barely stand.

This was just one of many examples of how elephants are mistreated. There are tons of videos showing them being shocked and whipped. It takes a lot for the USDA to do something about it. Even that isn’t much by just fining them tons of money.

Denham, B. E. (2014). Intermedia attribute agenda setting in the new york times: The case of animal abuse in U.S. horse racing. Journalism and Mass Communication Quarterly, 91(1), 17-37. Retrieved from http://ezproxy.rowan.edu/login?url=https://www-proquest-com.ezproxy.rowan.edu/docview/1515694974?accountid=13605

It seems counterintuitive that people in horse racing would treat the horses extremely poor however it happens more than people think. The horses are whipped constantly whipped and treated with disrespect. For example, in 2012, the New York times published a lot of investigative reports, news articles and editorials addressing the problems with U.S. horse racing. Deceased and injured horses, equine drug use and the way trainers handled the horses was all written about by the times. Other news stories caught on to this topic as well. They treat their animals that make them lots of money like they’re nothing.

Mcphedran, S. (2009). Animal abuse, family violence, and child wellbeing: A review. Journal of Family Violence, 24(1), 41-52. doi:http://dx.doi.org.ezproxy.rowan.edu/10.1007/s10896-008-9206-3

Family violence and Animal abuse tend to exist in the same household more often than people think. A poor childhood can result in bad parenting and bad care of pets. This leads to animal abuse which causes injured pets and maybe even deceased. Pets are often thought as other family members so if family violence is present within the house then you can assume that animal abuse should be present as well. As stated within the article, Animals can become victims within a troubled household because some people think of them as property.

Reporting cases of animal abuse. (2019). The Veterinary Record, 185(17), 524. doi:http://dx.doi.org.ezproxy.rowan.edu/10.1136/vr.l6294

It is counterintuitive that Vet’s wouldn’t report all suspected cases of animal abuse, however they don’t report it as much as people think. It’s not proven but it is strongly suspected by these vets from the owners. For example, in a study, they found that a third of vet’s have had at least one case of suspected animal abuse in the past year but only half of them reported it. Vet’s only receive two hours of training on this topic which really isn’t enough. This is an important part of caring for animals. The vet’s are only making their job a lot harder and causing more pain for the animal if in fact it is being abused.

Laurent Bègue. (2020) Explaining Animal Abuse Among Adolescents: The Role of Speciesism. Journal of Interpersonal Violence 36, pages 088626052095964. https://www-tandfonline-com.ezproxy.rowan.edu/doi/full/10.1080/01639625.2019.1595373?scroll=top&needAccess=true

Animal Abuse can be caused to a variety of different things. Social scientists have tied it to interpersonal violence, illegal gun possession, substance use, and anti social behaviors as well. The FBI did a study to gather more data about animal abuse and the big broad topic that was picked was “other” for reasons why they chose to abuse the animal. It shows that people still really don’t know much about this topic and why it happens. All the topics listed previously however, are some of the main reasons.

Current State of Research: I actually found my first article within the purposeful summary assignment. When I read the article about elephant abuse, it helped me decide that I wanted to write my paper about some form of animal abuse and what causes it and why it happens. This is the first time I have really gotten into my research though. All these articles I have found I believe can help convey my hypothesis throughout my research process.

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my hypothesis

  1. Coroa virus has affected college students changing the college process for them forever 
  2. Many students believe that canceling in person class is good thing 
  3. Many student who learn well in a classroom are not doing well because they are not adjusting well to this new learning environment 
  4. With the adjustment of online college many people are having a hard time keeping up with the workload
  5. There should be more things like online tutoring for the students at this time 
  6. Integrating an online tutoring program would greatly help everyone all together.
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notes

Notes
A hypothesis is a reasonable theory that you are trying to find evidence to prove it. you use it in the writing process is made for you to experiment and test your hypothesis and in the process, you may find that you find things that may or may not change your hypothesis along the way. Do background research to give more strength to your claims. your first draft may not be the best however you can work on it as time progress. you also have to ask yourself is it a strong hypothesis or does it not have a strong enough base.
Even in the reading “Give Directly” their hypothesis was proven wrong although they were proven wrong it doesn’t directly correlate with failure.
Takahi Carter

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Tcarter101

while this summary is short and it is a good example of qualitative work the detail matter in the issues he was discussing. He needs to be more specific in his purposeful summary to avoid leaving his readers confused

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mirror paradox

The mirror paradox is knowing that mirrors flip from front to back not from right to left. We often mix up that it is flipped from right to left. We have a hard time getting over this because when we look in the mirror because it looks flipped

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