Casual Essay Revision- Aime Lonsdorf

 

After the Surgeon General announced in 2001 that Americans had the highest body mass index (BMI) rating internationally, much of American culture has changed. Instead of ordering a super sized big mac meal ad McDonald’s, customers are opting for low-calorie options such as snack wraps or salads. Some Americans have given up fast food all together. Along with government and non-profit organization attempts to help Americans become less obese, many people have begun their own personal attempts at lowering their BMI. These efforts include but are not limited to going to the gym, changing their diet, and helping to influence the health habits of others. While these efforts have been well under way for over a decade, it appears that America’s obesity rankings have remained the same and even increased. But, like the attempts made by people to conquer smoking, concurring the obesity epidemic is going to take time and change.

 

Although many aspects of American society are getting healthier: McDonald’s has become a considerably healthy establishment, the last fifteen years or so has seen a spike in the organic and natural foods industry and, in part due to First Lady Michelle Obama’s “get fit” programs, it has become increasingly more important for Americans to exercise and consume healthier foods and yet, in 2011, obesity rates increased in 16 states and the rates did not decline in any state (F as in Fat). According to F as in Fat: How obesity threatens America’s future 2011, a report from Trusts for Americans Health (TFAH) and the Robert Wood Johnson Foundation (RWJF), 12 states  now have obesity rates above 30 percent; merely four years ago, only one state had a percent ranking that high. Shocked by these statistics the report examined exactly how obesity has grown over the  past two decades (F as in Fat).

 

Twenty years ago, no state had an obesity rating of above 15 percent. This year, in contrast, 38 out of the 50 US states produced obesity ratings of over 25 percent. For the 7th year in a row, Mississippi has maintained its leading spot as the number one state with the highest level of adult obesity (F as in Fat). The report noted that the fastest growing obesity levels reside in the south: Alabama and Tennessee have experienced intensified rates; this year, the slowest growing levels occurred in Washington DC, Colorado and Connecticut. The highest obesity rates remain in racial and ethnic minority adults, along with low-income families (F as in Fat).

 

While American’s might be seemingly be increasingly getting fatter, many public health experts are claiming that it might be too soon to see an increase in American obesity levels due to the fact that the nations efforts to slim down have only begun in recent years (Rochman). The fact that obesity rates are not reclining has nothing to do with the fact that public health programs are not promoting healthier diets along with more physical activity. Or, that an individual’s personal goals and efforts to obtain their dream weight are not working. Dr. William Dietz, director of the division of nutrition for the CDC, claims that efforts to ward off obesity are in fact working fine. Comparing the anti obesity efforts to the 1950 anti-smoking efforts when medical professionals released the conclusive evidence about the link between smoking and cancer, the doctor asserts that for approximately 15 years, smoking rates remained at a plateau and even increased for sometime (Rochman). It is the same concept with tackling the issue of obesity in America: it needs time and further developed tactics to achieve reduced levels.

 

Ironically, these medical professionals are basing their evidence off of a faulty scale for evaluating a person’s body fat percentage. The BMI system, which is a ratio of height to weight uses criteria that is neither gender or age specific in men and women over the age of 15. The system also fails at identifying the difference between a person’s muscle mass with their actual body fat; since muscle weighs more than fat, a physically fit and healthy human would appear obese. Based on the fact that the nation’s current obesity levels were raked based on a system that is not accurate, it is impossible to accurately identify weather or not Americans are actually getting fatter or fitter.

There needs to be an alternative system to the BMI. According to a 2004 study conducted by The American Journal of Clinical Nutrition, calculating a persons’ waist circumference (WC) as opposed to their BMI is a better predictor of obesity risk and illnesses that come with being overweight than the BMI system. LiveStrong.com article Alternatives to BMI confirms this theory by stating that measuring the natural waist can give an almost accurate indication of the amount of abdominal fat a person contains. Women with WC of 35 inches or more and men with a WC of 40 inches or more are considered to be risk factors (Holley, Casey). People who are in the “risky range” are more likely to develop side effects of obesity such as diabetes and heart failure. The WC is as simple as measuring a person’s belt size; to make it more accurate, doctors factor in other elements of a patient’s medical history. This enables them to find out what diseases each individual person is capable of developing. WC is more effective than the BMI because it calculates a person on an individual scale, not the wide ranged scale that is used for the BMI. Although these studies are not yet widely approved by national medical professionals, they are quickly on their way to being approved and providing a better method of calculating how obese a person is.

 

If Americans are to truly end the obesity epidemic a few things need to take place. First, we need to give it more time. Although ten years might seem like enough time to impact an entire nation, that is not the case. It took almost 15 years for people to acknowledge that smoking cigarettes is dangerous; the fight against smoking is still a current struggle. The fight against obesity will not be quick, but eventually, America’s obesity rates will decline. Second, we need to alter the system by which doctors and medical scientists are measuring obesity. The BMI system has proved to be unreliable and all other plausible systems are not yet universally accepted. Medical scientists should focus on finding the most accurate system of measuring how overweight a person actually is. Loosing weight does not happen over night, it takes change and it takes time. The entire American population needs the time to embrace this change not only to lower their own personal obesity level, but also the obesity level of the nation as a whole.

 

F as in Fat. “F as in Fat: How Obesity Threatens America’s Future 2011.” – Trust for America’s Health. Robert Wood Johnson Foundation, Etc. Web. 12 Apr. 2012. <http://www.healthyamericans.org/report/88/>.

Rochman, Bonnie, Maia Szalavitz, and Alice Park. “CDC: U.S. Obesity Rates Plateau Overall, But Men and Boys Are Getting Fatter | Healthland | TIME.com.” Time. Time. Web. 12 Apr. 2012. <http://healthland.time.com/2012/01/17/u-s-obesity-rates-remain-stubbornly-high

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Research Paper Revised – Aime Lonsdorf

We have all heard it: America is obese. We are an obese nation; this notion can be attributed to Surgeon General David Satcher. Satcher identified the problem of America having the largest international body mass index (BMI) in 2001. Many medical professionals believe that a person’s obesity can be calculated through their BMI, a system that calculates the ratio of a person’s height and weight (Surgeon General). But, this system’s imperfections are showing now more than ever. Its minor flaws: the system is gender and age specific in children under 15 and then uses the same criteria across the board for all men and women are appearing as not so minor. While these flaws were accepted for over a decade, current medical professionals are asserting that the ratio should not be used when evaluating a person’s obesity. The system does not accurately reflect how obese  a person is. So, medical scientists are striving to find a better, alternative method to the BMI ratio. Since the BMI system is clearly not effective, many people are beginning to wonder whether or not Americans are in fact as overweight as the BMI system said they were in 2001.

The Surgeon General and his team defined America’s obesity by the BMI system which measures the amount of fat, the flabby tissue that gives a person their out of shape appearance, a person has in comparison to their height and weight; “BMI is calculated as weight in pounds divided by the square of the height in inches, multiplied by 703. Alternatively, BMI can be calculated as weight in kilograms divided by the square of the hight in meters (The Lancet).” Although the system is faulty in some areas, medical professionals deem it an accurate method of measurement primarily based upon the fact that there is no other system of obesity measurement that has been universally accepted. A BMI over 25 is considered to be overweight, signaling that a person has more fat than he or she is supposed to have. When the Surgeon General made his announcement in 2001, Americans were considered to be overweight with a cumulative BMI of approximately 41.5.

But, the BMI system has various limitations that were not taken into account during the Surgeon General’s announcement. These limitations prevent doctors from accurately providing an exact obesity rating. In adolescents, obesity is defined as age and gender specific or, as anyone ranking above the 95th percentile range in the CDC BMI-for-age-growth charts. These charts easily identifies a child’s BMI by comparing their height and weight growth yearly. A child’s percentile ranking is relative to the ranking of other growing adolescents in the same age and gender grouping. These charts not only help assess growing children who are overweight, but also underweight. Each child is measured with these charts by their doctors during their yearly physical.

Research has proven that although the BMI measurements claim to measure body fat, it does not do so as directly as people think. For example, the system can overestimate the amount of fat in a person(s) who is muscular and underestimate the amount of a person(s) who have lost muscle mass, such as the elderly. It does not make any difference to the BMI system whether you are a 21 year-old olympic athlete or a 75 year-old, immobile man (BMI Not Accurate). Prime examples of the BMI system mistakenly classifying people are basketball star Kobe Bryant and actor Brad Pitt, none of whom appear to be overweight. Arnold Schwarzenegger, a body builder, was categorized into the highest level of obesity due to the amount of muscle mass he retains (Devlin). With clearly faulty classifications such as these, how can we trust the system?

The blatantly defective evidence that disproves the BMI system leads to the question of whether or not America really was the most obese nation in 2001 as previously stated by the Surgeon General and if it is still on the track towards chronic obesity. According to a 2004 study conducted by The American Journal of Clinical Nutrition, calculating a persons’ waist circumference (WC) as opposed to their BMI is a better predictor of obesity risk and illnesses that come with being overweight than the BMI system. LiveStrong.com article Alternatives to BMI confirms this theory by stating that measuring the natural waist can give an almost accurate indication of the amount of abdominal fat a person contains. Women with WC of 35 inches or more and men with a WC of 40 inches or more are considered to be risk factors (Holley, Casey). People who are in the “risky range” are more likely to develop side effects of obesity such as diabetes and heart failure. The WC is as simple as measuring a person’s belt size; to make it more accurate, doctors factor in other elements of a patient’s medical history. This enables them to find out what diseases each individual person is capable of developing. WC is more effective than the BMI because it calculates a person on an individual scale, not the wide ranged scale that is used for the BMI. Although these studies are not yet widely approved by national medical professionals, they are quickly on their way to being approved and providing a better method of calculating how obese a person is.

Regardless of the actuality of the Surgeon General’s announcement in 2001, Americans have begun to work towards becoming less obese. Government programs have tried to make sure the US does not remain the world’s fattest nation. The government has involved itself by helping maintain and lower obesity levels in Americans. There has been an increase in the amount of private intervention being put out by privately owned companies and non-profit organizations. This is commonly known as government intervention, or actions taken by the government in order to affect the decisions made by individuals on either economic or social matters.

However, due to the fact that people highly value their privacy and ability to make their own decisions, government intervention into the personal lives of the public is constantly being questioned. Many people do not like government officials telling them what is good for them, how to enforce good eating habits to their children, and even telling school systems what can or cannot be served for lunch. The government has already involved itself into the lives of Americans; they have done this so much and so well that people hardly notice it anymore. For example the federal government constantly intervenes in the lives of Americans by installing traffic lights, setting curfew laws, and creating school curriculums. But, when the Surgeon General made his announcement about obesity, many people rejected early attempts of regulating the nations obesity levels. Weight, is a personal issue and for a while, a great deal of people felt that it was too personal for government intervention they do not want to be told that they are too fat by someone who is not a doctor. However, over time, people have become more aware and accustomed to the obesity epidemic, primarily to both government and private intervention.

One major issue with the government trying to reduce and maintain the current levels of obesity in America is the fact that their intervention would have to surpass the economic states of some areas of the countries. People residing in low-income areas tend to maintain higher obesity levels due to the simple fact that eating healthy is expensive. In most low-income places, a 12 pack of Cosmic Brownies is equivalent to the price of about two packages of grapes. So, naturally, to save money, people tend to eat more fattening foods.  In places such as this, there is also less money being given to school districts where there are less healthy alternatives for students to eat during lunch and snack time. The government, along with many private companies and non-profit organizations have been pushing for more natural grown foods in schools, such as fruits and vegetables, and healthier options to be provided for students, pretzels as opposed to cookies. Many companies have been donating money to get healthier options for students to eat and providing money for these options to become more accessible and affordable. Leading Medical Journal, The Lancet, states the government should be responsible for making healthy foods cheaper and affordable stating that they should be easily accessible at both private and public schools along with public universities. So, a possibility to increase health the over all health in the general public would be to produce cheaper produce and for the government to fund more home-grown produce, such as establishing new farms and giving money to already existing ones. If fresh produce is more affordable, there is a possibility that they will become more desirable and regularly consumed. An issue with this would be that this idea would be opposing foreign trade and would be slightly more costly.

One of the toughest forms of intervention is trying to influence the private sphere of people. The private sphere is a space known only to the person who possesses it; it contains their thoughts, desires and knowledge. Republicans feel that there should be little to no government involvement into this realm while Democrats feel that there should be a great deal of intervention. But with an issue such as obesity, something needs to be done. Bureaucrats cannot sit down with every family during every meal to make sure good eating habits are being enforced and proper exercise routines are being followed.  One possible way of doing this, according Kersh and Monroe, is to create an even stronger sense of social disapproval. The idea is to alter the current social atmosphere and have fast food chains, and other fattening foods, be thought of as highly unacceptable and even detrimental to the overall health of a person. Supersize Me, a documentary study about McDonald’s and other fast corporations, has already given out a simple form of social disapproval: fast food makes you fat. Since the documentary was released, there has been a dramatic chance in the way the fast food industry was run.

Almost immediately after the documentary was released, it became a common belief that eating at restaurants such as McDonald’s and Taco Bell were one of the key factors that played a role in American obesity. Contrary to this popular and often substantive belief, not all fast food restaurants are as detrimental to a person’s weight as previously believed. McDonald’s is a prime example of this. Ever since the movie Super Size Me was released in 2004, exposing the dangers of a “super sized (Super Size Me),” or extra-large, meal, McDonald’s has moved away from its long, publicly given title of the most unhealthy fast food establishment. While the movie helped change a great deal about McDonald’s and numerous other fast food establishments, they did not do all the work that has ranked McDonald’s 8th out of the top ten healthiest fast food establishments, according to a consensus produced by Health Magazine (Health Mag.). Other fast food chains such as Wendy’s or Taco Bell do not even make the cut. The magazine sent out a team of researchers to survey 100 fast food places, and scored them on factors such as the use of healthy fats and sodium counts, the availability of nutritional facts (which was previously hard to find in fast food chains), and the use of organic and natural produce. The article states that the once thought of as unhealthy restaurant is paving the way for other fast food industries in the currently “heart- and waist-friendly (Health Mag.)” society. One of the establishment’s most popular new techniques that has been incorporated into other establishments is the option to have a side of fruit with every happy meal instead of french fries. And, if you must have the fries, their french fries are baked in CDA approved heart-healthy canola oil. Also, the chain offers low-calorie options such as snack wraps which consist of a mere 260 calories (Health Mag.).

So, they suggest that another positive form of influence to public behavior can be achieved through medical-science which means allowing people to know facts about being overweight and what it means to be physically fit. According to the two, the facts do not have to be entirely accurate; the idea is to convey the true message that being overweight is not good and will soon be socially unacceptable. Also, people should be able to get help outside of the gym, according to the authors, who want there to be group meetings similar to meetings set up for drug addicts. The demon user/ industry effect is to influence Americans to feel like people who eat poorly and industries that promote poor health habits are “demons,” or inherently bad. Surprisingly, it is easier than it seems to put a demonic spin on negative foods. In 2009, leading expert in childhood obesity Robert Lusting’s lecture, “Sugar: the Bitter Truth,” got over 800 thousand views on YouTube with a viewer growth rate of approximately 50 thousand views a month. The hour and a half long speech persuasively lists sugar as a toxin and a poison and often refers to it as evil. Toxic sugar is not only the common white household substance, scientifically known as sucrose, but also high-fructose corn syrup, which Lusting calls the “most demonizing addictive known to man (Taubes, Gary).” Not only does sugar provide consumers with empty calories, calories that provide no nutritional value, but can cause numerous health issues such as obesity, hypertension and diabetes. However, this is not to say that people should not be eating positive sugars: the sugars that come from fruits, vegetables and whole grains that provide antioxidants, energy and often enzymes that encourage a natural boost in metabolism, leading to weight loss. Foods that contain toxic sugars, such as anything processed, from a fast food restaurant, and many desserts should be avoided. Since Americans have acknowledged their growing obesity problem, there has been a rapid increase in the over all health of the American Public and a decline in the nations average BMI.

However, most of the sugars that were attacked by Lusting in his lecture are incorporated into fast foods and other processed goods. Yet, it is not useful to place all the blame of weight gain onto one food. While Lusting suggests and enforces the idea of cutting out sugar entirely, the Dietitians Association of Australia does not recommend this at all. In their medical journal entry Sugar: not so toxic,  they state that when it comes to sugar, men and women should try to eat it in moderation and limit their intake of foods high in added sugar and low in nutritional value such as soda and candy (DAA). If you have not seen the commercials proclaiming the goodness of high fructose corn syrup, then you should. Aside from their comical attributes, they are not wrong. What was conventionally known to be bad for your body, and toxic, according to Lusting, is far from it. Promoted by the Corn Refiners Association (CRA), the attempts to get high fructose corn syrup out of the toxic range are surprisingly being supported by the American Medical Association which recently announced that corn syrup does not contribute to obesity (McLaughlin, Lisa).

According to a study conducted by one of the top medical journals, The Lancet, as a follow-up to the study produced by the Surgeon General in 2001, when modern international BMIs are compared, America is not even in the top 10 fattest nations. America has lost its perviously held number one spot to the small nation of Nauru. Over the last decade or so, the push for government intervention and personal motivation to get fit, and healthy has paid off. While American men are rated 10th on the international BMI scale, American women are ranked 36th with a BMI of 28.7. This is proof that, obesity can be sustained and maintained at its current levels and even prevented for the future. The truth is, it is very hard to influence the public and personal sphere of America. But, if it is reached, it is possible that obesity can be maintained at its current levels and even possibly decreased and one day stopped.

Although many aspects of American society are getting healthier: McDonald’s has become a considerably healthy establishment, the last fifteen years or so has seen a spike in the organic and natural foods industry and, in part due to First Lady Michelle Obama’s “get fit” programs, it has become increasingly more important for Americans to exercise and consume healthier foods and yet, in 2011, obesity rates increased in 16 states and the rates did not decline in any state (F as in Fat). According to F as in Fat: How obesity threatens America’s future 2011, a report from Trusts for Americans Health (TFAH) and the Robert Wood Johnson Foundation (RWJF), 12 states  now have obesity rates above 30 percent; merely four years ago, only one state had a percent ranking that high. Shocked by these statistics the report examined exactly how obesity has grown over the  past two decades (F as in Fat). Twenty years ago, no state had an obesity rating of above 15 percent. This year, in contrast, 38 out of the 50 US states produced obesity ratings of over 25 percent. For the 7th year in a row, Mississippi has maintained its leading spot as the number one state with the highest level of adult obesity (F as in Fat). The report noted that the fastest growing obesity levels reside in the south: Alabama and Tennessee have experienced intensified rates; this year, the slowest growing levels occurred in Washington DC, Colorado and Connecticut. The highest obesity rates remain in racial and ethnic minority adults, along with low-income families (F as in Fat).

While it might seem like Americans are becoming more obese, many public health experts disagree. Since the Surgeon General’s first analysis of American obesity, not enough time has passed to correctly analyze recent data (Rochman).  Although obesity rates are not declining, these numbers have nothing to do with the efforts made to prevent future obesity. This does not mean that an individual’s personal goals and efforts to obtain their dream weight are not working. Dr. William Dietz, director of the division of nutrition for the CDC, claims that efforts to ward off obesity are in fact working fine. Comparing the anti obesity efforts to the 1950 anti-smoking efforts when medical professionals released the conclusive evidence about the link between smoking and cancer, the doctor asserts that for approximately 15 years, smoking rates remained at a plateau and even increased for sometime (Rochman). It is the same concept with tackling the issue of obesity in America: it needs time and further developed tactics to achieve reduced levels. Ironically, these medical professionals are basing their evidence off of a faulty scale for evaluating a person’s body fat percentage.

If the BMI system is clearly flawed and there are other better and more efficient methods of measuring the percentage of a person’s body fat, why are doctors still using it? If a person cannot accurately measure their actual fat percentage, how can we assume that America was at one time the world’s fattest nation? While it is clear that alternative methods to the BMI system are not yet medically accepted, it is also clear that to keep using the BMI system would not be beneficial towards the medical community in any means. The only absolute proof that has come from the realization that the BMI system is heavily flawed is the notion that America may in fact not be as obese as though of by the world’s populations. It is important that medical professionals continue to test alternative theories so that the public can be provided with a more reliable method of calculating a person’s body fat percentage. Based on the fact that the nation’s current obesity levels were raked based on a system that is not accurate, it is impossible to accurately identify whether or not Americans are actually getting fatter or fitter.

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Definition Essay Rewrite – Jesse Samaritano

Since the controversy of music piracy via file sharing started, the many lawsuits and case against people who have shared and downloaded illegal music have raised a very good question: Is peer-to-peer file sharing sharing or is it stealing? When someone shares an MP3 file via a peer-to-peer file sharing program on the internet, that person is not just lending out material to others in the same sense as lending a friend down the road a CD to burn to their music library, but committing a crime allowing people all over the world are able to steal music.

Starting with the Bulletin Board System, file sharing came to be in the late 1970s, but it was not used by the general public. Not until the 1990s did computers start to become household items, so the internet was not available to everyone till the revolution of the personal computer. Soon after this in June of 1999, the first peer-to-peer file sharing program called Napster was released. Napster was a centralized unstructured peer-to-peer system, requiring a central server for indexing and peer discovery, and many other programs followed it. In July of 2001, Napster was sued by multiple recording companies for unauthorized use of the companies’ intellectual property, a claim Napster never denied, holding Napster Liable for contributory infringement and vicarious infringement of the plaintiffs’ copyrights (History.com, “Death of Napster”).

The story of how file sharing of pirated music came to be shows that it was first used in innocence’s because the creator of Napster was not fully aware of the effect it would have on the music business. There had never been any situation like it before, so there were no immediate laws that he was aware of that he was breaking. Once he had a lawsuit against him, he changed Napster into a program in which you had to pay for the music. The definition of music piracy is any form of unauthorized duplication and/or distribution of music including downloading, file sharing, and CD-burning. The fine for music piracy can be up to 5 years in prison or $250,000 in fines (Wikipedia, “File Sharing”). This is obviously a crime and it is stealing, so the question lingers; why do so many people think that it is okay to download music illegally off the internet?  Surely the users of Napster were not fully aware of the effect of file sharing at first, but present day users of other peer-to-peer programs know the effect and consequences of music piracy and still do it.

Those who are in favor of file sharing and music piracy argue that it is not a bad thing and that it is not stealing. One argument is that CDs are not worth buying due to lack of good songs, price, quality of music in present times, and the fact that they might not buy the CD anyway if they could not get it for free. They say that many people, such as college students, who have low incomes or not a lot of money to spend are not able to buy as many CDs as they would like, and file sharing allows them to discover more music for free. Another argument is that peer to peer networks are very useful for reasons other than file sharing, such as files that are public domain. File sharing networks should not be shut down because file sharing in general is not illegal, file sharing of pirated music and other unauthorized media is illegal. People in favor of music piracy also say that it is a good way to preview songs before purchasing them or buying the CD. The boldest argument (in my opinion) is that MP3 files are not physical property, so it is not stealing because there is no value lost in downloading it (Jenci, Keith. “File Sharing: A Debate.”).

Those who are arguing against file sharing and music piracy have many arguments to counter the opposing view. These people argue that music is worth buying and that CDs are not too expensive, but reasonably priced. Also, they say that just because some people think CDs are overpriced does not justify stealing them on the internet. Another argument is that there are many places to buy music legally, such as Napster 2.0 and iTunes, so the convenience of getting the music off peer to peer networks is not a valid excuse for not buying the music. You can also buy single songs on these online stores, so people don’t even need to buy the entire CD by an artist if they do not wish to. Those opposed to music piracy also argue that file sharing hurts the music industry and all the individual workers involved with producing the artists’ music. The loss of record sale also hurts the entire economy (Jenci, Keith. “File Sharing: A Debate.”).

The most valuable opinion would be from those who are looked at as the victims of music piracy and file sharing: the artists. Contrary to what most people would think, even the artists who have made a stand on the issue are split by the subject. Some artist, like Metallica, Bob Dylan, U2, Lily Allen, and James Blunt, argue that music piracy impose on their intellectual property, while other artists, like Nine Inch Nails, Radiohead, Foo Fighters, and 50 Cent, support or find nothing wrong with file sharing because it allows more people to enjoy their music. Dave Grohl of the Foo Fighters said in an interview for dotmusic.com (Napster Inc. “Speak Out”):

“I think it’s a good idea because it’s people trading music. It has nothing to do with industry or finance, it’s just people that want music and there’s nothing wrong with that. It’s the same as someone turning on the f****** radio, it’s the same as someone putting a cassette in a cassette deck when the BBC plays a special radio session. I don’t think it’s a crime, it’s been going on for years. It’s the same as people making tapes for each other. The industry is more threatened by it because it’s the worldwide web and it’s a broader scope of trading, but I don’t think it’s such a f******* horrible thing. The first thing we should do is get all the f****** millionaires to shut their mouths, stop bitching about the 25 cents a time they’re losing.”

– Dave Grohl (Foo Fighters), dotmusic.com, 9/15/2000

All these arguments from opposing sides contradict or counter each other, but the bottom line, with all due respect to Dave Grohl, is that it is considered stealing if you download music illegally on the internet regardless of the opinions on either side.

Regardless of whether people think peer to peer file sharing and music piracy is right or wrong, the bottom line is that music piracy is illegal, and file sharing of pirated music is illegal. But this does answer the question if file sharing is sharing or stealing. The definition of file sharing is the practice of distributing or providing access to digitally stored information, such as computer programs, multimedia, documents, or electronic books, so technically there is nothing illegal about file sharing, therefor it is not stealing, only sharing. Although it is not stealing, file sharing is frequently used to share pirated music which is considered stolen, so it is a common misconception to consider file sharing as stealing.

References

Napster | Speak Out | Artists.” Circolo Sing Sing. Napster, 2001. Web. 24 Apr. 2012.

The Death Spiral of Napster Begins.History.com. A&E Television Networks, 6 Mar. 2001. Web. 24 Apr. 2012.

Pollock, Rufus. “P2P, Online File-Sharing, and the Music Industry“ P2P, Online File-Sharing, and the Music Industry. CC Attribution License, 31 Mar. 2006. Web. 19 Apr. 2012.

File Sharing.“ Wikipedia. Wikimedia Foundation, 19 Apr. 2012. Web. 19 Apr. 2012    (Only for brief information and definition on File Sharing)

Peoples, Glenn. Researchers Change Tune, Now Say P2P Has Negative Impact Billboard. June 22, 2010.

Jenci, Keith. “File Sharing: A Debate.” Mredkj.com. 21 Oct. 2011. Web. 24 Apr. 2012

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White Paper Polio Rewrite- Aime Lonsdorf

In the early 2000s, a British study was released, announcing that there was a link between the measles and mumps (MMPR) vaccination and autism. The study concluded that being vaccinated could either cause autism in children who did not have it prior to being vaccinated, trigger a latent condition or worsen an already active condition of autism. This lead many parents to stop vaccinating their children for MMRP, increasing the amount of MMPR cases there were in the developed world.

However, recent studies by Columbia University researcher Ian Lipkin and Irish pathologist and co-author of the British study released in the 2000s have proved that the MMPR vaccination does not affect children with autism. The original study is now believed to have been misrepresented. Unfortunately, while the vaccination might not cause autism, many parents still shy away from getting their children vaccinated for MMPR.

The overall conclusion is that the fear of vaccinations caused a rise in both the MMPR; there is no link between the vaccine and autism. So, while autism rates might be rising on their own, the spike in the number of recent autism cases is completely unrelated to the amount of vaccinations for MMPR. The only risk from not being vaccinated is the disease its self which could lead to death.

This is a definitional claim– it changes the way people can look at vaccinations and autism compared to popular thought.

http://www.cnn.com/2011/HEALTH/01/06/autism.vaccines/index.html

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Saw Stop Revision- Aime Lonsdorf

1.

“By agreeing not [to] employ such safer alternatives, the defendant and its competitors attempted to assure that those alternatives would not become ‘state of the art,’ thereby attempting to insulate themselves from liability for placing a defective product on the market,’ Ryszard Wec claims in Cook County Court.”- Injured Man Says Bosch Tool Lobbied Feds to Keep Safer Power Saws off the Market

2. Ryszard Wec claims that because Bosh Tool attempted to assure that the “alternatives” would not become state of the art, they are trying to deny their liability to any person who is injured while using their products. Previously in the article, it was stated that there were alternate, current, state of the art technologies that would prevent saw users from severely injuring themselves. This technology is called the saw stop, which is able to detect the electromagnetic difference between a person’s fingers and a piece of wood; if a finger or another body part were to come into contact with the saw it would immediately stop. So, by refusing to install the saw stop technology that could potentially save many people hospital trips due to detached limbs, Ryszard Wec asserts that Bosh Tool has every right to be sued for their refusal to install this technology and any injuries that come as a result of their neglect. Bosh Tool’s claim against this is that if nobody offered the saw stop technology, than there would be no reason to sue for unsafe saws. However, the technology is offered and available to consumers who wish to purchase it.

3. It is an evaluation claim.

4. Wec’s claim does not weight out the costs and benefits of the saw stop technology but it can be assumed that Bosh Tool and other saw producing companies did when they decided not to instate the new advancement. And, that the costs and benefits were also weighed by Bosh Tool when the company denied its liabilities for accidents that occurred as a result of their saws: the cost-the law suit; the benefit; denying plausible liability.

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Causal Essay Revised – Tabitha Corrao

Alternative Prison Programs are more Beneficial than Prison

In 1990, District Attorney Charles J. Hynes created a program called the Drug Treatment Alternative Prison (DTAP). The program was established to help nonviolent drug offenders with their drug addictions. Other than helping drug offenders with their addiction, the program has also reduced crime and is half the cost of an individual being sent to prison. When DTAP participants were compared to a group of individuals who were placed into prison, instead of the DTAP program, evaluations have shown that DTAP participants and graduates were less likely to be rearrested, re-convicted, and replaced back into prison. Making programs like DTAP are more beneficial for an individual than prison (Program).

According to the National Center on Addiction and Substance Abuse at Columbia University, “participants who completed the program and graduated were 33 percent less likely to be rearrested [when compared to prison comparisons]” (Innovative). In a two-year study fifty-eight percent of prisoners were rearrested in the second year. Only forty-three percent of DTAP participants were rearrested in the second year. DTAP graduates were even less likely to be rearrested with only thirty-nine percent of them being rearrested after completion (Crossing the Bridge, 6). The DTAP program is successful because the DTAP program is about three times longer compared to other residential drug treatments. Unlike most drug treatments, DTAP provides fifteen to twenty-four months of residential drug treatment. The DTAP program is longer because studies have shown the longer a participant stays in treatment; the more likely they maintain being sober (Innovative).

Not only were the DTAP participants less likely to be rearrested but they were also less likely to be re-convicted. In fact, forty-five percent of DTAP participants were less likely to be re-convicted when compared to prison comparisons. In the two-year study, forty-seven percent of prisoners, thirty percent of DTAP participants and twenty-six percent of DTAP graduates were re-convicted (Crossing the Bridge, 6). A reason why DTAP participants might be less likely to be rearrested is because the DTAP program was designed for drug offenders to succeed. In fact, the fear of going to prison rather than a treatment center is a factor why DTAP participants complete the DTAP program successfully. DTAP participants rather be a part of the program than be sent away to prison (Innovative).

Lastly, DTAP participants and graduates were less likely to be placed back into prison. Again according to the  National Center on Addiction and Substance Abuse at Columbia University,” [of participants who completed the program and graduated] 87 percent [are] less likely to return to prison, than the comparable prison group” (Innovative). Fifteen percent of prisoners, five percent of DTAP participants and two percent of graduates were given new prison sentence (Crossing the Bridge, 6).

In conclusion, prisoners were more likely to be rearrested, re-convicted, and replaced in prison when compared to DTAP participants. DTAP graduates are the least likely to be rearrested, re-convicted, and replaced in prison. With that being said, programs like DTAP are more beneficial to drug offenders than prison. The DTAP program helps people live drug-free lifestyles.

Crossing the Bridge: An Evaluation of the Drug Treatment Alternative-to-Prison(DTAP) Program.“ CASAColumbia. TheNationalCenter on Addiction and Substance Abuse atColumbiaUniversity. Web. 11 Apr. 2012.

INNOVATIVE DRUG TREATMENT ALTERNATIVE TO PRISON PROGRAM REDUCES CRIME, PRISON COSTS”TheNationalCenter on Addiction and Substance Abuse atColumbiaUniversity, 2003. Web. 02 Apr. 2012.

Program Description.” KCDA HOMEPAGE.District Attorney KingCounty. Web. 11 Apr. 2012.

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Sources 6-10 -Jesse Samaritano

6. The Recording Industry Association of America (RIAA)

The Recording Industry Association of America (RIAA) is the trade organization that supports and promotes the creative and financial vitality of the major music companies. Its members are the music labels that comprise the most vibrant record industry in the world. RIAA® members create, manufacture and/or distribute approximately 85% of all legitimate recorded music produced and sold in the United States. (From Website)

How I will use it: The RIAA website has a lot of information regarding the negative affects of music piracy and also have an entire page of information entitled For Students Doing Reports.

7. FightPiracy.org

This website is set up to inform readers on what exactly music piracy is and ways to take action against it and report piracy.

How I will use it: This is a helpful website to support arguements on exactly who music piracy effects.

8. Time Magazine U.S – The Battle Over Music Piracy

This article taken from Time Magazine talks about the attempt to stop music piracy through online MP3 sellers like Amazon and discusses pros and cons on music piracy.

How I will use it: Time magazine is a reliable source of information on any subject it covers, and reading through what a journalist of this well respected magazine will hopefully share some intellectual insight on the subject.

9. The RIAA Music Downloading Controversy: Both Sides of the Record

This article seeks to explain the roles of various agencies and to present different faces of the issue in an unbiased yet informative manner. The views expressed by sources for this article are not necessarily those of the author or of musicbizadvice.com; we just want to bring the topic to the table for discussion. (From Article)

How I will use it: This article covers a lot of the background of both sides who are arguing about music piracy and the controversies about lawsuits and other events that have happened in the recent past.

10. The Music Industry on (the) Line? Surviving Music Piracy in a Digital Era.

Abstract: The article presents an analyis of the prevalence of piracy in music trade which has affected global sales of CDs. It points out that technological developments such as file sharing, MP3 players, and CDRs have increased music piracy. Accordingly, most common forms of music piracy are Internet piracy and compact disc (CD) piracy. It discusses the association between music piracy and organized crime, which is defined as profit-driven illegal activities motivated by profit maximization. It explores the vulnerabilities of music trade which include the nature of the product, degree of law enforcement, and pricing. It suggests that it is necessary for music companies to change their business plan through music online marketing in order to minimize the incidence of music piracy.

How I will use it: This source shows sufficient evidence of the financial effects on the music industry through accurate statistics.

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Research position paper-Sam Sarlo

The war on drugs, declared by President Richard Nixon in 1971, is a failed attempt at protecting the people of America from the harms of intoxicating substances. Though surely it was meant to save lives and improve the health of our society, the effect has been opposite, the prohibition policies on which the war on drugs is built cost tens of thousands of lives and billions of dollars each year. Though the laws against the possession, use and sale of drugs had already been in place for years, the comprehensive drug abuse prevention and control act of 1970 marked the legislative beginnings of the war on drugs,  categorizing (and often miscategorizing) drugs based on their potential for abuse and medical uses.

There never really was much logical thought behind the war on drugs. President Nixon came up with the idea, and he was motivated mostly by fear and preconceived prejudice that anyone who uses drugs must be harmful to society. He never considered any other measures than making more prohibition laws and throwing money into their enforcement.

The worst part about the war on drugs is that it kills tens of thousands of Americans every year. Surprisingly, most drug-related deaths, especially those resulting from drug-related violence, are caused at least in part by drug prohibition. Since the beginning of the war on drugs, drug-related deaths have steadily increased. Every day, there are people killed by drug users, drug users killed by police, police killed by drug users/dealers, drug dealers killing each other in territorial disputes, drug-funded gangs killing each other, deadly riots in prisons overcrowded with drug offenders, and that’s not even considering what’s happening outside U.S. borders. Even more tragic than the deaths of dealers, addicts and inmates are the innocent lives lost in the crossfire- drug dealers and gang members don’t seem to care whether their stray bullets end up lodged in an innocent child’s head. If drugs had never been outlawed, there would be no drug dealers to fight over turf, users would not have the fear of incarceration that drives them to fight the police, law enforcement would have no justifiable grounds to break down random doors and start shooting, and the cartels would never have become so powerful.It seems that the harder our government tries and the more money they spend to enforce drug laws, the more people die. Just as was the case with alcohol prohibition, drug prohibition has inflamed the drug problem by forcing the drug trade underground where it is run by violent criminals.

Violence isn’t the only way the drug war kills. As black market products, there is no standard for quality of drugs, and they are often mixed with toxic chemicals to increase profits. Most heroin overdoses occur because the user must approximate their dosage based on the last time they injected, and it is impossible for them to know the potency of drugs they bought on the street. Pesky customers or suspected informants are often poisoned by dealers. Users die of severe allergic reaction from fillers added by dealers to increase profits. Addicts, some of them prostitutes, spread blood-borne diseases such as HIV and Hepatitis-C because they can’t get clean needles. People jump from buildings because they underestimated the potency of their hallucinogens.

Another deadly consequence of the drug war is the raucous amount of power it gives our government and law enforcement to strip anyone of their civil liberties.  For example, Jose Guerena Ortiz, a US marine combat veteran who suffered from PTSD, was fired upon 71 times in front of his wife and toddler by a SWAT team who broke down his door because he was “suspected of involvement in drug trafficking,” although nothing illegal was found in his home and to this day there is no evidence that Ortiz had ever been involved in any illegal activities. Because of the fear tactics our government has used to weaken our civil liberties in exchange for protection from the underground drug culture which they created, senseless murders like this go unpunished, and will continue to occur. None of the officers involved in the slaying of Ortiz have been disciplined, they are still out there kicking down whatever doors they please, brandishing the license to kill that is the drug war.

As if the roughly 16,000 deaths it causes per year were not a high enough price to deem the drug war counterproductive, consider the financial cost- at least $52.3 billion per year  (Richardson). That’s $21.9 billion spent by federal and state governments on drug law enforcement, then another $30.4 billion on incarcerating drug offenders. One would think that for all this money, we would be making some progress, but the truth is that the trillions of dollars we have spent over the past four decades have been wasted. Drug use, addiction and sales have increased by almost every possible measure. Even worse than the monetary cost is the millions of nonviolent drug offenders wasting their lives in prison on the taxpayers’ dime. 55% of federal prison inmates are there for drug offenses, and we paid law enforcement to hunt down and arrest every one of them. Coincidentally, $52.3 billion is only a couple billion dollars short of the estimated yearly cost of universal health care (Richardson). This means that we are allowing sick and injured citizens to die so that we can fund an uphill battle that victimizes and often kills our own countrymen.

The fact is that there will always be demand for drugs in this country, and where there is demand supply will follow. Before they were illegal “street drugs”, marijuana, cocaine, heroin and amphetamines were over-the-counter medicines available at any drug store. Before coca-cola was America’s most famous soft drink, it was a medicinal cocaine solution that could be bought in a pharmacy. The prohibition of drugs not only caused the value of drugs to skyrocket, it stigmatized what had been medicine as dangerous intoxicants, spurring even more demand from young people, kickstarting the illegal drug trade.

Our only hope to remedy our nation’s drug problem is to legalize everything. Although decriminalization has improved situations in other countries, it only solves half of the problem by keeping drug offenders out of jail. The real danger of drugs is the outlaw culture that surrounds them. If we legalized drugs and regulated their sale and usage, the drug dealers would be put out of business, and demand for illegal drugs of questionable composition and potency would disappear.

-http://www.npr.org/templates/story/story.php?storyId=9252490

http://www.esquire.com/the-side/richardson-report/drug-war-facts-090109
“A Radical Solution to End the Drug War: Legalize everything” by John H. Richardson

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Research Position Paper – Dale Hamstra

Walk Straight? I Can do That…

Anyone who has ever played pin the tail on the donkey knows how hard it can be to walk in a straight line while blindfolded. Now imagine doing that over a distance of fifty yards, or even a few miles. It has been proven that, while blindfolded, people tend to walk in circles even though they think they are going straight. In a NPR article written by Robert Krulwich he states that “Jan Souman, a research scientist in Germany, co-wrote a paper…about…human tendency to walk in circles” (Krulwich). The main reason for this is believed to be that people need to have a visual landmark of some kind to be able to navigate in a straight path. When someone is blindfolded, that visual landmark has been taken away.

While researching this topic, I found it very beneficial for me to perform my own experiments. In my original experiments, there will be more variations later, the goal of the participant was to walk in as straight of a line as possible. The distance they walked was fifty yards. I told them to stop once they had reached the extended line of where the target was. It was then measured how far to the left or right the walker was from the target. The average miss was by forty yards, with one participant walking in a complete circle. This, again, proves that people have a much harder time navigating when there is an absence of a visual landmark.

Animals actually use many of the same techniques we do to keep on a straight path. It is proven that many migrating birds use the sun as a navigation tool, and many migrating land animals use visual landmarks. For example, in an article for the website How Stuff Works, Ed Grabianowski says “whales traveling in the Pacific Ocean near the North American coast use…their landmark…the entire continent of North America” (Grabianowski). However, many animals will migrate using scents or magnetic fields. In these cases they can be easily drawn off course by a similar scent or a man made magnetic field that may replicate the magnetic fields of the planet. There was a study done at the University of North Carolina by Dr. Kenneth Lohmann in association with his wife and two graduate students with sea turtles that make their eight thousand mile migration route the first time that they ever see it. The turtles were first intentionally moved off course, and using the magnetic fields of the planet they were easily able to get back on track. However, a second experiment was preformed where the turtles were introduced to many man-made magnetic fields throughout their journey. The turtles went off course and were unable to find their way to their normal migration spot. In an article in Science Daily, it was written that “when exposed to a magnetic field like the one that exists in northern Florida, most of the reptiles swam eastward, a direction that would carry them out to the north-flowing Gulf Stream” (Lohmann, Lohmann and Cain). It might be possible that when we lose our sense of sight, we might be able to tap into our other senses and navigate in a different way.

Knowing that people can easily end up going in circles without a visual landmark, and that there are other ways to navigate other than with a sense of sight. The question is raised of how ancient sailors were able to navigate the open ocean without going in giant circles. Well, the most popular among the ancient sailors was to use the sun and stars as a navigation tool to stay on as direct of a path as possible. However, there were times when the sun or stars weren’t out and the navigators had to use different methods of navigation. Written on a PBS site, NOVA, Peter Tyson states that the ancient Norsemen “One method they relied on was watching the behavior of birds…If the beak of this seabird is full, sea dogs know, it’s heading towards its rookery; if empty, it’s heading out to sea to fill that beak” (Tyson). There were also ancient compasses and maps that they could use although they were not thought to be as reliable.

I also decided to test a theory that someone can use auditory clues to replace a visual landmark in navigation. To test this, I took the same participants and had them run the same experiment over again, however, this time with the noise. The noise that was used was a loud and continuous beeping similar to that of an alarm clock. It was placed at the target area. The walker was told to stop when they had walked the fifty yards and was even with the extended line of the target. All of the participants hit the target perfectly. However, they all took a curved path in getting there. This leads me to believe that the auditory clue can effectively replace a visual landmark, although it is not the most efficient way to navigate.

There have been other tests that are similar to the one that I have conducted, most notably at the Helsinki University of Technology. In their experiment the “test task [of the participants] was to find a sound source in a dynamic virtual acoustic environment” (Lokki, Grohn and Savioja). They were testing to see if sounds could help someone navigate through a virtual environment, and eventually find the source of the sound in the virtual world. In the results they found that “in most cases subjects did find the target area.” and that “over half the subjects made less than three errors” (Lokki, Grohn and Savioja). This provides substantial evidence that someone can walk in a straight while blindfolded, so long as there is a noise to guide them.

Next I looked into what Jan Souman calls “reorientation techniques” (Souman, Neth and Engel). Reorientation is the ability for the walker to have realized that they have gone off path, and to be able to correct themselves into a straight path. Jan Souman researched this in a virtual environment, and had two possible methods of returning the walkers to a straight path. One was a freeze turn, where the walker turned one hundred and eighty degrees but it looked to them that they went three hundred and sixty degree. In the other method he would have the walker turn a full three hundred sixty degrees, and have the virtual world stay still. However, all of the methods he tried to use had no success.

In my own experiment I attempted to try a reorientation technique that consisted of me telling the participant if they missed to the left or the right and by how much. I then allowed them to walk again and see if they were able to fix their previous mistakes. I found that if the participant made any corrections it was always an over compensation. For example, if they failed to the right, they would over compensate for their mistakes and end up missing to the left.

I then looked into if the walker would listen to direction while walking. To perform this I walked behind each participant, telling them if they were going left or right. The participant listened one hundred percent of the time. Through the directions given, each person was able to correct their minor mistakes, and find their way to the target area in a relatively straight path. So, even though the participants were not able to learn from their mistakes and correct themselves on their own, they were able to take direction from a third party and respond to feedback.

Walking in a straight line while blindfolded is impossible. However, when there is a distinct noise for the walker to follow they are able to get to the target area, even though they may not take the straightest path in getting there. It seems that people are unable to teach themselves how to correct their own mistakes while they are blindfolded, but at the same time can respond to feedback.

Works Cited

Grabianowski, Ed. How Animal Migration Works. 18 March 2012.

Krulwich, Robert. A Mystery: Why Can’t we Walk Straight. 7 march 2012.

Lohmann, Kenneth, et al. Baby Sea Turtles Use Earth’s Magnetic Field To Navigate Across Atlantic Ocean And Back. 12 October 2001. 16 April 2012.

Lokki, Tapio, et al. A Case Study of Auditory Navigation in Virtual Acoustic Enviornments. 3 April 2012.

Souman, Jan, et al. Velocity-Dependent Dynamic Curvature Gain. 8 March 2012.

Tyson, Peter. Secrets of Ancient Navigators. 6 October 1998. 8 March 2012.

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Research Position – Marty Bell

Letting Baseball Evolve

The most prominent issues in professional baseball is anabolic steroid abuse. There are many critics who want steroids completely out of baseball for good. But, what they do not understand is that allowing steroids in baseball would result in a multitude of benefits for baseball as a sport and for each individual who plays the game. It will increase the popularity of Major League Baseball. The reasons for why steroids should be allowed in baseball far outweigh the reasons why they should not be. Allowing the use of anabolic steroids in baseball will make it a more flashy and interesting sport. There are numerous reasons why athletes take steroids. Along with these reasons comes all the effects of using anabolic steroids and arguments against these effects from critics.

“The never-ending expectations of audience and the desire to enjoy an invincible winning streak has allured many sportsmen to take steroids” (“Athletes Using Steroids”). The pressure put on athletes by their fans and managers causes them to seek any means to enhance their abilities. It is no different then the pressures that young students face everyday that cause them to stoop to cheating. Sometimes the pressure from their parents causes them to study, and when studying is not enough they resort to cheating to get the approval of their parents. This is similar to what is happening to many athletes. Professional athletes practice and practice, but sometimes they still can’t seem to achieve success the at such a high level so they resort to steroid abuse. These athletes believe they need the help of anabolic steroids in order to excel in their area of expertise. The steroids will allow these athletes to break through their plateau. Even those athletes who do reach the top of the game may have to resort to using steroids in order to stay in the spotlight.

If the pressure of advancing to the spotlight is not the cause of anabolic steroid abuse then it may just be simply that they work in making them a better athlete and in turn cause them to earn more money. “Teams reward players for performing well in the immediate past, ignoring other evidence of a player’s quality from his earlier performance” ( Jacobs). This means that by taking steroids and performing better before an athlete signs a new contract with a team will allow them to earn more money  no matter how they did before their recent success. Using steroids will cause an athlete to gain mass, strength, and speed faster than normal. With these increased attributes the athlete may  be able to make it to the top of their sport. This will earn them a larger salary in the future. Like Ralph Kiner said “Home run hitters drive Cadillac’s, and singles hitters drive Fords” (“Home run hitters”). Not all athletes play for their love of the game. Some play for money and prestige. The athletes that are the most successful generate the greatest incomes. For instance, Barry Bonds made millions and millions of dollars because of the popularity he gained by hitting so many home runs. He would have still been an extremely talented baseball player and maybe even one of the best without the strength he gained from steroids. But, he would have never beaten the home run record without the help of steroids, therefore he would have not made nearly as much money as he did. Meaning that the desire to excel is one of the main reasons for steroid abuse. Imagine someone having the opportunity to put their talents over the top and become one of the greatest athletes in the world. If this could be achieved by taking anabolic steroids there is not many athletes, who have worked hard their whole life to achieve this goal and be the best, that will say no to steroids. People doing whatever it takes to make money and be successful is not something new in our society. It is hard for some fans to grasp the fact that even some athletes that are supposed to be role models for children and teenagers all over the world are willing to do anything to enhance their performance.

It is no secret that an increase in the home run production in baseball will excite the fans increasingly. Anabolic steroids could make this happen if they became legal. Taking steroids will cause someone to gain more muscle mass when combined with a good work out routine. Alan M. Nathan has proven that a gain in muscle mass results in faster bat speed (2). A batter taking steroids has a faster bat speed that causes the batted ball speed to increase (Nathan 2). It is obvious that an increased batted ball speed will cause the ball to go farther off the bat. Which in turn means more home runs.  This increased home run production will allow fans to see more of what that want. Anyone who has watched sports center recently and seen all the home runs they should every day would know that home runs are the most popular aspect of baseball. If this is not enough to convince someone of the importance of home runs they could watch any recent home run derby and notice that the stands are nearly packed with fans wanting to only see home runs. This makes it nearly impossible to argue against the popularity of home runs in Major League Baseball.

A critic to allowing anabolic steroids in baseball may say that it won’t increase the number of home runs hit because it will allow pitchers to throw harder, making them harder to make hit. But, this is not the case for all pitchers. In order for a pitcher to be effective at such a high level they need more than just a lot of muscle. Even with steroids a pitcher needs high quality mechanics and pin point execution to throw the ball harder and accurate. This means that steroids will not necessarily make every pitcher more difficult to hit. These critics may only be right for the already top-notch pitchers that have great mechanics. For an average, run of the mill pitcher taking steroids and throwing a little harder will not solve their problems. Nobody is an amazing pitcher at that level by just throwing hard and wild. In order to be among the best a pitcher needs control and an arsenal of pitches they can throw well. It is even reasonable to say that pitchers on steroids could result in more home runs. The harder the ball comes in, the faster it goes out. The increased bat speed that steroids cause will allow hitters to capitalize on every mistake a pitcher makes. The quick bat speed will make up for the increased speed of the pitches. Although, it may be different for highly skilled pitcher on anabolic steroids.

With all the benefits anabolic steroids bring to the sluggers of baseball comes the benefits to the prized aces of baseball. A pitcher can gain from taking anabolic steroids. Upper tier pitchers have even more to gain than other pitchers because of the skills they already possess. Taking steroids will allow pitchers to throw harder than they could without steroid use. This increase in speed combined with what they already bring to the table will give some pitchers an edge over most batters. For instance, Cliff Lee on steroids could be virtually unhittable. With some pitchers being almost unhittable it would result in more no hitters or even some perfect games. These spectacular achievements would surely result in more excitement from the fans.

Increased speed in their pitches is not the only benefit a pitcher receives from taking anabolic steroids. Throwing a baseball is extremely straining and unnatural on a pitcher’s arm. Using steroids will enhance tissue repair so a pitcher will feel better the day after pitching and could result in less injuries (Olney). This would be a huge benefit to pitchers and could allow some of the best pitchers to be able to throw more often with the reduce soreness to their arms. Having the more prized pitchers throwing more often would benefit the club and the fans. Everyone wants to see their ace throw a good game and help their team win.

An argument from a critic of allowing anabolic steroid use in baseball is that home runs being hit more often will make them less exciting and rare. This is not true considering the fact that a home run hit in a close game is always thrilling. This is like saying that game winning goals in the NHL would be less exciting if there were more close games. No one complains about someone hitting too many home runs. More home runs will just result in more intense home run races that bring millions of fans to baseball. Anabolic steroids will make the chances of having another epic home run race like Sammy Sosa and Mark McGuire had more likely.

Anyone who says a home run race would be less exciting with hitters on steroids because it is like cheating is completely wrong. This argument would not be relevant if steroid use was legal in baseball because then it wouldn’t be cheating at all. Also, if the majority of baseball fans actually had a serious problem with steroids they would have all ready stopped being a fan since it has become apparent that many of baseball’s recent all-stars have used steroids. Critics may say that even if it was legal it is still cheating and would take fans away from the sport. But, is evening the playing field really cheating? According to Jose Canseco, up to 85% of MLB players currently playing today are using performance-enhancing drugs (Anderson). This is coming from someone who was in the locker rooms of major league baseball for many years. This shows that even though steroid use in baseball was illegal many players were willing to risk it to enhance their performance. This makes it necessary to allow everyone in the league to have the opportunity to enhance their performance the same way. If those who obey the rules had the chance to take steroids like most of the players already do it would allow the players with greater natural talent to shine and become the stars they should be (Anderson). There is an immense pressure to use performance enhancing drugs in baseball. Allowing anabolic steroids in the sport is actually the way to get rid of cheating and even the playing field for all of the athletes. Evening the playing field for all of the athletes in professional baseball will do nothing but benefit the sport as a whole and satisfy the players.

The tons of players that brought thousands of fans to baseball and have used steroids add to the proof that allowing steroid’s benefits baseball. Manny Ramirez, suspended for steroid use, brought tons of fans to baseball for years before he retired(“Linked to Steroids”) . Jason Giambi and Gary Sheffield, who both admitted to using steroids, brought interest to baseball and were many people’s favorite baseball players for a long time(“Linked to Steroids”). These are just a few examples of players who have used steroids and have added to the popularity of Major League Baseball. Critics may say that they brought fans  to baseball before it was known that they cheated by using steroids. This is not the case for many players. When Barry Bonds first got drafted he was skinny and stole bases. Later in his career Barry was significantly bigger and even his head seemed to grow. Anyone who had seen him early in his career would be able to tell that he took steroids. Regardless he still brought millions of fans to baseball because of his amazing accomplishments. This shows that many fans ignored the fact that he took steroids and watched him dominate the sport anyway. This is proof that either fans don’t care about steroids or they’re not devoted fans and just want to see something spectacular.

When not talking about the performance based effects of anabolic steroids the strongest argument against allowing them into Major League Baseball is that it is harmful to the athletes. This claim has virtually no evidence to support it. The possible effects of steroids are vast but nearly none of the serious effects are proven. Anabolic steroid use is associated with hypogonadism, testicular atrophy, baldness, acne, gynaecomastia (Payne, Kotwinski, Montgomery). Hypogonadism is when sex glands produce little or no hormones (“Hypogonadism”). Testicular atrophy is when a male’s testes shrink. Baldness and acne are common in many people and not serious at all.  Gynaecomastia is when a male’s breasts are enlarged (“Gynaecomastia”). None of these effects result in any serious health risk to the athletes. They are all minor effects and should not be enough to have steroid’s banned from the sport. “The potentially serious risks to health of androgenic-anabolic steroids (AAS) use are still unresolved” (“Endocrine aspects”). This means no one really knows if steroids have serious long-term negative effects at all. That is more than you can say for other substances like alcohol and cigarettes that we know both have serious long-term negative effects. These are all things that no one is forced to take, but people take anyway for personal benefits. “The long-term consequences and disease risks of AAS to the sports competitor remain to be properly evaluated” (“Endocrine aspects”). Considering the fact that the negative effects of steroids are not even known you can not argue that steroids shouldn’t be allowed in baseball because of the possibility of them being harmful.

Having a ban on anabolic steroid use in baseball is hurting the sport’s popularity and potential. By lifting the ban it will bring countless additional hours of excitement to Major League Baseball. The use of anabolic steroids by the athletes will increase the number of home runs, no hitters, and possible perfect games. These are all incredible feats that fans want to see. For all the arguments critics make against anabolic steroid use there is a stronger argument for anabolic steroid use. Until there is substantial evidence that steroids are actually severely dangerous to someone’s health there is no reason for a ban. They should allow the player’s, who are all adults, to make their own decisions on whether or not to indulge in anabolic steroid use and let the sport evolve into something even greater than it all ready is today.

 Works Cited

Anderson, M. “Why the Use of Steroids Is Bad for Baseball.” Get Red Socks Tickets. Web.

Athletes Using Steroids.” E-Steroid. Web.

Endocrine Aspects of Anabolic Steroids.” Clinical Chemistry. Web.

Home Run Hitters Drive Cadillacs and Singles Hitters Drive Ford.” The Big Apple. Web.

Hypogonadism.” PubMed Health.U.S. National Library of Medicine, 18 Nov. 0000. Web.

Jacobs, Tom. “Baseball Whiffs When Setting Salaries.” Pacific Standard. Web.

List of Players Linked to Steroids & HGH.” Baseball’s Steroid Era. Web.

Nathan, Alan M. “The Possible Effect of Steroids on Home Run Production.” Webusers.University ofIllinois. Web.

Olney, Buster. “WHY PITCHERS USE.” ESPN The Magazine. Web.

Payne, J.R., P.J. Kotwinski, and H.E. Montgomery. “Cardiac Effects of Anabolic Steroids.” Heart and Education in Heart. Web.

What Is Gynaecomastia?” NHS. Web.

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