Robust Verbs- pomegranate

Original Paragraph

There is a huge problem in Vancouver with heroin addicts committing crimes to support their habits. The “free heroin for addicts” program is doing everything they can to stop the addicts. The problem is that there is a large crime rate due to the addicts. It is obvious that addicts have a hard time getting through their day to day lives. Daily activities such as jobs, interactions, and relationships are hard to maintain because of the fact that they are using. By heroin users being addicted, they will do whatever they have to do to get their hands on the drug. The types of crimes committed are those of breaking and entering as well as stealing. There are no limits to where they will go to retrieve this drug so that they can feed their addiction. The problem with this program is that it won’t help to ween these addicts off using heroin. It is only trying to save the city from rising crime rates that they’re up to. By providing the drug, these addicts will be off the streets, which in turn will prevent them from committing minor street crimes. This will also keep the heroin users out of the hospital. It is pointless that the hospitals have to deal with people that want to use bad drugs or unsanitary needles and find themselves being unable to afford hospital bills and hard to cope without the drug. This program gives people free heroin in the cleanest way possible. This will in turn fix the city  but not the addiction that these people face.

Revised Paragraph:

In Vancouver, a huge problem rose when heroin addicts were committing crimes simply to fuel their addiction. The “free heroin for addicts” is doing everything they can to stop these addictions by giving addicts free heroin in the cleanest way possible. The problem is the large crime rate due to the addictions. Crimes to fuel their addiction include breaking and entering and stealing. Addicts see no limit in how far they will go for these drugs. The addicts have a hard time getting through their day to day lives without these drugs which is obvious. Daily activities include jobs, interactions and relationships which become hard to maintain because of drug usage. By the program providing the drug, addicts will be off of the streets, preventing them from committing minor street crimes. However, it doesn’t ween addicts off heroin. The program helps in keeping these users out of the hospital, which is helpful because helping people who cannot afford their hospital bills is pointless for the employees. The program will fix the city, but not the addiction these people face.

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Robust Verbs–Daphne Blake

The Original Paragraph:

There is a huge problem in Vancouver with heroin addicts committing crimes to support their habits. The “free heroin for addicts” program is doing everything they can to stop the addicts. The problem is that there is a large crime rate due to the addicts. It is obvious that addicts have a hard time getting through their day to day lives. Daily activities such as jobs, interactions, and relationships are hard to maintain because of the fact that they are using. By heroin users being addicted, they will do whatever they have to do to get their hands on the drug. The types of crimes committed are those of breaking and entering as well as stealing. There are no limits to where they will go to retrieve this drug so that they can feed their addiction. The problem with this program is that it won’t help to ween these addicts off using heroin. It is only trying to save the city from rising crime rates that they’re up to. By providing the drug, these addicts will be off the streets, which in turn will prevent them from committing minor street crimes. This will also keep the heroin users out of the hospital. It is pointless that the hospitals have to deal with people that want to use bad drugs or unsanitary needles and find themselves being unable to afford hospital bills and hard to cope without the drug. This program gives people free heroin in the cleanest way possible. This will in turn fix the city  but not the addiction that these people face.

The Revised Paragraph:

The “free heroin for addicts” program is attempting to reduce Vancouver’s ongoing problem of increased crime rates due to the extensive demand of addicts trying to support their habits. These habits negatively impact the day to day lives of addicts by restricting them from participating in day to day activities such as jobs and relationships and even subjecting them to endanger others by breaking and entering and stealing. While the fact stands that the program won’t rid people of their heroin addiction, it will significantly reduce crime rates and avoid hospitals the troubles of dealing with addicts that can’t even afford their hospital bills. By giving addicts free, clean heroin, Vancouver will be ensuring safer streets and less populated hospitals.

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Robust Verbs-Chavanillo

There is A huge problem in Vancouver with heroin addicts committing crimes to support their habits. The “free heroin for addicts” program is doing everything they can to stop the addicts. The problem is that there is a large crime rate due to the addicts. It is obvious that Addicts have a hard time getting through their day to day lives. Daily activities such as jobs, interactions, and relationships are hard to maintain because of the fact that they are using. By heroin users being addicted, they will do whatever they have to do to get their hands on the drug. The types of crimes committed are those of breaking and entering as well as stealing. There are no limits to where they will go to retrieve this drug so that they can feed their addiction. The problem with this program is that it won’t help to ween these addicts off using heroin. It is Only trying to save the city from rising crime rates that they’re up to. By providing the drug, these addicts will be off the streets, which in turn will prevent them from committing minor street crimes. This will also Keep the heroin users out of the hospital. It is pointless that The hospitals have to deal with people that want to use bad drugs or unsanitary needles and find themselves being unable to afford hospital bills and hard to cope without the drug. This program gives people free heroin in the cleanest way possible. This will in turn fix the city  but not the addiction that these people face.

 

Revision Paragraph:

In Vancouver heroin addicts are committing crimes to support obsession. The program “free heroin from addicts” are trying to stop addicts. Addicts have a hard time everyday  in life with work, interaction and relationships. Addicts of heroin will do anything to get the drugs. The kinds of crime they do are stealing, breaking and entering places. This program not helping addicts with obsession, but reduces crimes. Giving free heroin will reduce crime rate, fixing the city, but not the addicts. The well of the city is more important then the addicts.

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Robust Verbs-rowanstudent

In Vancouver, heroin addicts are adding to the vast crime rate. These addicts use crime to support their habits. The “free heroin for addicts” program is doing everything they can to stop the addicts. The heroin user find it hard to maintain jobs, interactions, and relationships. The most common crimes performed by them are breaking and entering as well as stealing. Addicts will do anything they can to feed their addiction. The program won’t help to ween these addicts off using heroin, but to save the city from rising crime rates. By providing the drug, the program will prevent these addicts from committing minor street crimes and keep the users out of the hospital. The hospitals find it pointless to have to deal with people that want to use bad drugs or unsanitary needles and find themselves being unable to afford hospital bills and hard to cope without the drug. This program gives people free heroin in the cleanest way possible to fix the city, but not the addiction that these people face.

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Robust Verbs-nousernamefound1

Heroin addicts committing crimes to support their habits is a huge problem in Vancouver. The “free heroin for addicts” program is doing everything they can to stop the addicts. Addicts have a hard time getting through their day to day lives. Daily activities such as jobs, interactions, and relationships are hard to maintain when they are using. Addicts will do whatever they have to do to get their hands on the drug. Breaking and entering as well as stealing are the common crimes committed by addicts. When trying to feed their addiction, they show no limits to where they will go to retrieve this drug. The program will not ave the addicts off using heroin, only prevent the rising crime rates. Providing the drug to these addicts will make them be off the streets. In fact, will prevent the addicts from committing minor street crimes. The hospitals should not have to deal with people that want to use bad drugs or unsanitary needles. This program gives people free heroin in the cleanest way possible, which will fix the city but not the addiction.

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Robust Verbs- doorknob9

In Vancouver, heroin addicts commit crimes to support their habits. The “free heroin for addicts” program is doing everything they can to stop the addicts. Due to the addicts, the city faces a large crime rate. Addicts have a hard time getting through their day to day lives because of such habits. Daily activities such as jobs, interactions, and relationships are hard to maintain because of the fact that they are using. Since heroin users are addicted, they will do whatever they have to do to get their hands on the drug. The types of crimes committed are those of breaking and entering as well as stealing. Heroin addicts have no limits to where they will go to retrieve this drug so that they can feed their addiction. Such habits won’t help to ween these addicts off using heroin. Only trying to save the city from rising crime rates that they’re up to. While providing the drug, these addicts will be off the streets, which in turn will prevent them from committing minor street crimes. This will also keep the heroin users out of the hospital. It seems pointless that the hospitals have to deal with people that want to use bad drugs or unsanitary needles and find themselves being unable to afford hospital bills and hard to cope without the drug. This program gives people free heroin in the cleanest way possible. This will in turn fix the city  but not the addiction that these people face.

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Counterintuitive Predictions

Counterintuitive Predictions

1. True or False. What occurs in the world is not always reasonable, logical, or right. Even so, it might be true. You’ll decide whether the Premises below are True or False.

2. Reasonable or Unreasonable. People act for reasons other than logic; among them sympathy, loyalty, hope, fear, vested interest, greed, and ineptitude. You’ll decide whether the Premises below are Reasonable or Unreasonable.

3. Right or Wrong. Decisions based on logic or reason can be ethical and moral, unethical or immoral. You’ll decide whether the Premises below are Good or Bad, Ethical or Unethical, Moral or Immoral.

Your Predictions

Before hearing about the Mammogram team at Kaiser Permanente Hospital or reading the associated article, respond in three ways to the Premises below.

First: declare whether the statements made appear to be True or False (you could also answer Likely or Unlikely).

Second: declare whether the statements appear to be Reasonable or Unreasonable (or if you prefer: Batshit Crazy, or Not Insane).

Third: Declare the statements’ moral or ethical position to be Good or Bad. (If the statement doesn’t permit a moral judgment, you could still pronounce it a Good thing, or fundamentally Just Wrong.)

Respond in three ways for each Premise.

1. Likely / Batshit Crazy / Bad
2. False / Reasonable / Good
3. Unlikely / Unreasonable / Wrong
4. True / Not Crazy / Right

Of course, in paradise, the Reasonable would always be True and Good, and the Crazy would always be Untrue, and universally recognized as Bad. But we know better, don’t we? At the end of class, return to your predictions. How many of your expectations were met?

The Article

Mammogram Team Learns from its Errors

The Premises

1. Women who find out how many cancers their doctors miss in routine mammograms stop getting mammograms.
2. Radiologists who perform mammograms are held accountable for the accuracy of their readings.
3. A doctor who finds hundreds of tumors in a year and a half, but who misses 10, is almost always fired.
4. Doctors who read only a few mammograms a month are removed from film-reading teams so that they read none at all.
5. Publishing the failure rates of radiologists improves their accuracy to the best the discipline can achieve.
6. The best technique for improving diagnosis accuracy has been adopted by almost no radiology departments.
7. Congress demands that radiologists be held accountable for their accuracy at detecting tumors in mammogram films.
8. The 20,000 US doctors who read breast X-rays are trained to do so; their accuracy is known and tested.
9. The medical profession accepts that, to varying degrees, all doctors make the same mistakes.
10. Doctors who do mammographies follow up with those patients to discover whether their diagnoses were correct.
11. Doctors appreciate knowing whether they missed actual tumors or misread the “shadows and swirls” of a mammogram as a tumor.
12. The “shame” of confronting an incorrect diagnosis is a valuable teaching tool for doctors who diagnose cancers from mammograms.
13. An accuracy rate of 80% in detecting cancers from mammograms is something to brag about.
14. The best doctor to head a radiology department is a squeamish physician who trained as a lawyer and prefers not to deal with patients “and their blood.”
15. Radiology can be tracked well statistically because patients either have tumors or they don’t.
16. When the director of the radiology department discovers a way to improve the accuracy of cancer diagnoses, his method is immediately embraced by hospital administrators.
17. When New York hospitals began to publish their surgeons’ heart surgery successes and failures, the death rate fell by 40%.
18. The falling death rate meant that heart surgeons were doing more careful work.
19. Hospitals that reduce their false diagnoses proudly advertise that they “make 20% fewer errors” than their competitors.
20. Publishing the error rates of mammography radiologists results in an uncertain but significant number of cancer deaths in women who avoid testing.
21. A radiologist who is known to have missed a tumor is likely to have missed a dozen out of 3000 he declared to be tumor-free.
22. Out of those 3000, when 250 were scanned again, and 30 were biopsied, 10 were found to have cancers he had missed.
23. Finding those 10 cancers was reported as a front-page medical scandal instead of a triumph of an enlightened new technique for avoiding missed diagnoses.
24. Many of the 250 women who were told they needed followup were angry.
25. Of the ten whose cancers were missed by the first doctor but discovered in followup screenings, most sued the hospital for malpractice.
26. The doctor who missed the 10 tumors felt he had been treated unfairly, that only 3 of the cancers could be blamed on him, and that his error rate was acceptable.
27. After being fired, he was hired as a fill-in radiologist in five states bordering North Carolina.
28. The radiologists on the terminated doctor’s team supported him, not the hospital, and resent having their work scrutinized and their failure rates published.
29. While some doctors read 14,000 films a year, and others fewer than 500, failure rates are very similar.
30. Doctors who read just 500 films a year get re-assigned to other work since their sample size is too small to determine their accuracy.
31. Doctors who are “fired” from film reading based on low volume are relieved to have the diagnostic responsibility taken from them.
32. Doctors would rather bring a patient back for a second look or a biopsy than miss a tumor.
33. Doctors are much happier to find evidence on the film of a cancer that has “been around for awhile.”
34. Routinely experiencing the shame of missed diagnoses in tests every four months builds confidence in radiologists.
35. Most hospitals send out lists of actual missed tumors or “false negatives” to their radiologists every year so they can study the films they misinterpreted.
36. The Kaiser Permanente department has learned to detect various “presentations” of tumors on film by studying films of actual missed tumors after the fact.
37. In North Carolina, for every two cancers radiologists find, they miss one.
38. If the results at Kaiser Permanente were replicated nationwide, better than 80% of cancers would be found and 10,000 more cancers would be correctly detected each year.
39. False positives are easy to track, but almost nobody tracks false negatives (missed tumors that show up in later mammograms).
40. There is no routine followup for women who, on the basis of their mammograms, are determined to be tumor free.
41. Holding radiologists to a higher standard of competency results in reduced access to quality care.
42. Making failure rates public increases the likelihood of malpractice claims, which in turn drives up insurance rates, which in turn drives good doctors from the field.
43. Having two doctors instead of one review every film improves accuracy and drives down costs.
44. A nationwide 70% effectiveness rate is considered the best that can be achieved practically and politically.
45. Government oversight of physician performance to standardize techniques nationally has actually reduced accuracy.
46. Dr. Adcock, who improved effectiveness in his radiology department by 25%, took himself off the team when his volume dropped.
47. The most conscientious doctors, who agonize over the presence or absence of tumors on every film, are by far the most effective.
48. When they have a choice, women are best served by the doctors who send the largest percentage of women for biopsies because they miss the fewest cancers.
49. The best indicator of whether a doctor is competent to read mammograms is the number of times she’s been sued.
50. A good day for mammograms is Mother’s Day, when many clinics offer free or discounted exams.

The Blind Summary.

When you finish classifying the claims for Truth/Reasonableness/Goodness, in one paragraph, try to summarize the article you have not read. Use the heading “BLIND SUMMARY.”

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Casual Argument-Jets1313

The Unjust Justice System

As many people know, the criminal justice system is not always fair, considering that everyone is supposed to have the same rights when it comes to the law. However, I believe that one major problem with the criminal justice system is that high profile lawyers give celebrities special treatment in the court of law, which causes the criminal justice system to be unfair and unjust. While it is understood that celebrities probable pay their lawyers more than an average person, it is not lawful that celebrity criminals are treated better in court than an average person with a public defender.

Many high profile lawyers try to cheat the system and try to keep the press from knowing what is going on, however, this is not fair considering the people have the right to think and say what they want. Fancy lawyers ensure their clients are protected from media backlash, but, this is why “media advocates say today’s unmatched effort at secrecy cheats the public out of its First Amendment right to observe and criticize the system through its surrogates in the press. Ideally, public oversight is supposed to keep the system honest.” (44). It isn’t right that some people are protected from this especially. because it is a first amendment right. This is creating unequal treatment between criminals with money and expensive lawyers and regular criminals.

Although I do believe that special treatment of celebrities by lawyers is creating an unjust criminal justice system. An article titled “Dealing with the Press in High-Profile Cases, How to neutralize the 13th Juror” by Ellen C. Brotman helped me to understand that “high-profile cases have high-profile clients whose reputations can be ruined no matter what the outcome” (43) But, does this mean that the average persons reputation can’t be ruined as well? Definitely not. So why is it fair that high profile criminals with high profile lawyers are so easily protected from ruined reputations and the media, but regular criminals are not?

Another reason that I believe high profile lawyers cause there to be an unjust criminal justice system is because when a celebrity or lawyer of a high status is in the media, it can change the worlds perception towards the case. It is possible that people can find ways to side with this celebrity or lawyer based on their status or past reputation, “this combination of a susceptible jury, a strong media influence, and celebrity presence can cause the jury to render a judgment that is biased by the media at the expense of a fair judicial preceding…”(1 Carroll) This article shows how corrupted the system is by high profile cases.

In addition to the worlds perception being warped by the media, the world is also not shown the reality of the cases in many situations, this causes “the image [to become] as important as the substance-a bizarre and unsettling state of affairs to those of us who value reality.” (511 Furman). The best way to protect high profile cases being broadcasted in an untrue manner is by keeping these affairs in the courtroom and not manipulating a case to make the best story. As Furman states, “it is fine in Hollywood but not in a real courtroom.”(511). High profile cases cause the lawyers to sometimes not handle their cases in a professional manner due to media attention, “these [cases] are also precisely the cases which are most likely to tempt us into behaving out of character and unprofessionally.” (512) This is a cause of an unfair justice system because these high profile lawyers are actually not doing their jobs correctly and still usually getting justice for their clients. While lower payed lawyers and public defenders are doing their job regardless of distraction, which makes their job harder. This is unfair that people who are being paid more than others can just get away with things and have more privacy in their cases.

If the lawyers in our criminal justice system would find ways to make high profile cases be treated the same way as normal criminal cases then maybe the system would be equal. Celebrity criminals are able to protect their reputations while criminals that are represented by public defenders, other lawyers, etc… are forced to take on the media and public backlash with no defense. It is also heard that some judges will actually decide to make a deal with a celebrity criminal or high profile lawyer so that the case is kept out of the public eye as much as possible. Although there are so many advantages that these cases have, there are also disadvantages. Media coverage doesn’t always work in the criminals defense. Many of these criminals are destroyed by the medias stories and many opinions of people have been swayed in the opposite direction that is intended. These media stories can be manipulated and can cause jurors to have warped opinions on the case, also creating an unfair system. These high profile criminals aren’t the only ones that receive bad press, however, regular criminals, most of the time are also shown in the media in a terrible light. So, while criminals with more money are mostly protected by their fancy lawyers from a lot of the media backlash, normal people do not have this luxury. Regular criminals are forced to have their faces plastered on social media with untrue headings and have absolutely no one to pay these people to stop.

The criminal justice system was supposed to be built on amendments that protect the rights of every person, criminal or not, and we are all supposed to be treated equally in a court of law. So, why is this not happening? High profile lawyers cause our criminal justice system to be unjust by creating what seems to be a whole new government just for wealthy people, where they can be treated with more respect and privacy than the common person. People with a public defender, other lawyer, etc… should have the same treatment as these celebrity criminals. Just because they pay their lawyers more doesn’t mean that they are above the law. This is not how the criminal justice system is supposed to work as there should be one unified government that represents all people equally regardless of the amount of money they have in their bank account.

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Causal Argument- NYAJ32

Players Using PED’s in the 60’s and 70’s are Why Players in the Modern Era Who Use Steroids are Banned from Baseball

Many players used some type of PEDs in the 60s and 70s. It was a very common thing that more than half the players were using it. Have any of them ever been suspended or banned from the Baseball Hall of Fame? The answer is no. Much less players have used PEDs in the modern Era (Last 25 years). Some still do, but almost nothing compared to the 60s and 70s. Have any of the modern players been suspended or banned from the Baseball Hall of Fame? The answer is almost all of them. It is clear that there is something that caused the MLB to take a stand and start disciplining their players for using PEDs. What could have been the trigger? Why did Major League Baseball ignore it for so long and then all of a sudden start taking charge and giving players consequences?

I believe that they did not ignore it at all. It is very possible that the MLB had no idea it was going on. THere would have definitely been suspicions in the 60s and 70s, but nobody really knew what PEDs were so they did not investigate. As time went on, and more players were inducted into the hall of fame, guys like Hank Aaron and Tom House admitted to using “Greenies,” a form of PEDs that made a player more focused. They were amphetamines. Tom House said, “If other guys were beating you with what they were using, then you moved up and found something better.” It is known that more than half of the Braves team and most likely most of many other teams were all utilizing some form of PEDs at the time. With this information, it is prevalent that many guys that are in the Baseball Hall of Fame have used things like “Greenies” or other forms of PEDs. Yet there has never been any kind of sanction for them. THey are allowed to be in the Hall of Fame, yet guys from the Modern Era who have used PEDs are not allowed into the Hall of Fame. It does not make much sense to allow the older guys, but not the newer ones who all cheated. Why is it like this? Why are the newer guys no longer allowed in?

I believe that the older guys that used PEDs ruined it for the new Guys. The baseball hall of fame is chock full of guys who cheated their way along, but not a lot of that is known by the general public. That is because media was not as big and easy to access back then as it is now. The media make the newer guys who used PEDs look much worse than the older guys. THe MLB does not want a bad rep on themselves or the Hall of Fame so the baseball writers do not want the newer guys who used PEds to be in the Hall of Fame. A lot of people believe that it should be s clean as possible so the known PED users should not be in the Hall. It is sad that the older guys ruined it for the new ones. Guys like Jim Thome and and Trevor Hoffman are in, but guys But the two guys who combined for 15 MVP and Cy Young awards – 13 more than the combined total of the six previous inductees 2 years back  – will be sitting home for the sixth and seventh consecutive years, “ (Nightengale USA Today).

I am a strong believer in that if someone completed an accomplishment are achieved a milestone than it should be recognized. THe MLB is in a weird spot where they are counting records like Bond’s home run record, yet they will not allow him to be in the Hall of Fame. Many people believe that Hank Aaron’s home run record should be the real record, buy he used PEDs as well as Bonds did. People just do not know very much about Hank Aaron’s because he is a beloved player so the media decides to rip on Bonds and ARod and Clemens instead of admit the truth that so many players that are already in the Baseball Hall of Fame are known cheaters just like guys like Bonds, ARod, and Clemens. It is evident that the media plays a factor and that the guys who used PEDs in the 60s and 70s may very well have ruined it for the newer guys because Major League Baseball does not want anymore known users in the Hall of Fame. They want to keep it as clean as they possibly can. And at this point, it is just wrong to segregate them from other players who have also used PEDs.

https://www.usatoday.com/story/sports/mlb/columnist/bob-nightengale/2018/01/22/barry-bonds-roger-clemens-hall-fame-steroids/1053787001/

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Definition Essay- NYAJ32

What Classifies Someone as Being Hall of Fame Worthy?

Many people believe that the Hall of fame is only for people who did not use Performance enhancing drugs and people that were all natural all the way throughout their career. Those are the same people that have not done their complete research. They believe that the Hall of Fame is exclusively for clean players and that it will stay that way forever. And part of players who used PEDs not being in the hall of fame is focused on the criticism they they get for doing it and the hatred they have acquired by many others. The Baseball Hall of Fame is not what many people think it is. Yes, it is mostly full of great accomplishments and legendary players and performances and it is something every baseball fan should see at least once in their life, but there is more underlying all of it than most people may believe.

The Baseball Hall of Fame is not totally clean like many people believe it currently is. It actually has multiple players who are known to have used substances to improve their performance on the field. One great example is in the article, How Should the Baseball Hall of Fame be dealing with PED users. Guys like Whitey Ford, Don Sutton, and even Gaylord Perry all fiddled with the rules a little during their playing time. Ford once said, “I didn’t cheat in 1964 when I won 24 games….. Well, maybe a little,”(Kelly 2017). The article also states, “Sutton joked that he’d used so much sandpaper in his career that he “ought to get a Black & Decker commercial out of it,” (Kelly 2017). Sandpaper was not allowed to be used to increase the grip on the ball for a pitcher. THe only thing you were, and still are, allowed to use is rosin. Sandpaper was a huge advantage that made those pitchers so great. It is probably able to give you even better grip than pine tar which is how some pitchers try and cheat now. Those players that cheat with pine tar aare suspended for a big portion of the season, yet some legends who have done worse are beloved and praised and put into the Hall of Fame and they have done even worse than some of these other guys.

Someone else who who cheated is Tom House. This one is a little worse than the other pitchers because House used something similar to PEDs. He used something called greenies. Greenies are amphetamines. Players utilize them to be more alert and aware of what is going on. It makes players be more focused in on the game. The article from USA Today titled, “Former major league pitcher Tom House used steroids during his career and said performance-enhancing drugs were widespread in baseball in the 1960s and 1970s,” states, “House, 58, estimated that six or seven pitchers per team were at least experimenting with steroids or human growth hormone. He said players talked about losing to opponents using more effective drugs. “We didn’t get beat, we got out-milligrammed,” he said. “And when you found out what they were taking, you started taking them,” (USA Today). This proves that many players were taking some type of PEDs  at that time and many of those players are now in the hall of fame.

It almost seems like the only thing that proves whether some players are Hall of Fame worthy is if they are frowned apon b y the general public. Hank Aaron is someone that is beloved by almost everyone, yet he almost certainly used PEDs. He once come out saying that he did in fact use greenies, but he said it once he was already in the hall of fame and it did not matter anymore. So many people believe that the baseball hall of fame is a totally clean environment and that is why they do not think that guys like Barry Bonds, Alex Rodriguez and Roger Clemens should be inducted. Meanwhile, It is a known fact that it is not a clean environment and there are many, many player in the Hall of Fame who used PEDs and cheated in other ways such as pitchers using sandpaper to get a better grip on the ball when pitching. The Hall of Fame is not all rainbows and unicorns like people think it is. It is easy to see the conclusion that it is not the fact that they used PEDs that keeps them out, but instead it is the fact that they have acquired so much public hatred that they are not in the Hall of Fame. They have literally done no worse than so many other players in the Hall of Fame, but because they are hated by the general public for their actions, which is generated by the media, they are not in the Hall of Fame.

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https://www.theglobeandmail.com/sports/baseball/how-should-baseballs-hall-of-fame-be-dealing-with-ped-users/article37043700/

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