Causal Argument – gooferious

The Journey of Trauma

Trauma comes in many shapes and sizes. Trauma can lead to self-destructive decisions or one-sided friendships. What occurs to us when we are children or as we are transitioning into the real adult world, that hurt and pain follows us and sometimes never dissipates. Take for example, the child who witnessed their father aggressively beating their mother everyday for as long as they can remember. Every hit, smack and grunt is permanently stuck in that child’s brain. As they grow older, violence seems to be the answer to everything. That kid who took your toy train while you were in the bathroom, simply hit them when the teachers not looking because that’s what they were taught. Taught to be silent when it came to abuse, the child believes it to be okay almost normal. How this trauma would effect the child later in life cannot be described. So many different possibilities that could come out from this abusive childhood experience; many horrible, few pleasant. One way to save this child from a life filled with rage and anger is to be sent to therapy. Not many agree with therapy but it may be the only solution to the problem. Of course, as the children age they will believe nothing is wrong with them but that’s up to the therapist to decide as they are professionally trained in this field of work. Forcing young adults into therapy rather than the voluntary choice will increase the likelihood of them becoming outstanding members of society.

Society has a way of making those with mental illnesses appear to be bad, some would even go as far as to say dangerous. Who in their right mind would believe their child to be capable of performing unspeakable acts against another human being? It’s been proven that those who go to therapy come out with a better sense of self. Young adults who go into therapy come out rehabilitated and are ready to explore their new found ideologies. What exactly leads a person to go to therapy though could be one of many things: either a traumatic abusive childhood, a vehicle accident that permanently scarred someone, overwhelming long periods of stress and list goes on. Various authors came together to write the article titled: Delivering Cognitive Behavior Therapy to Young Adults With Symptoms of Depression and Anxiety Using a Fully Automated Conversational Agent (Woebot): A Randomized Controlled Trial. In said article, it is stated that up to 74% of mental health diagnoses have their first onset before the age of 24. The human brain doesn’t even finish developing until the age of 25 and already almost 3/4 of those who have mental health disorders are experiencing emotions which lead to disastrous decisions which in turn cause the not finished developing brain to damage or stunt growth in development. Among the young adults who are in college, almost half have said that they have experienced anxiety and depression symptoms so severe that they had difficulty functioning. Imagine being along at college and not being able to do basic necessities for yourself such as cooking, bathing or even getting a good night’s rest. Therapy while not everyone’s first choice has for the most part been successful in rehabilitating those who have experienced upsetting life events. Even if one believes therapy is not the option for them, research shows that for the most part it very well likely could be the answer that they are letting fly over their heads.

The result of trauma is most of the time but not always, anxiety and depression. According to the Anxiety and Depression Association of America (ADAA), anxiety disorders are the most common mental health illness in the United States effecting an estimated 40 million adults aged 18+. Going based off their statistics and research, anxiety disorders can be very well treated yet only 37% of those effected receive treatment. While some factors include: not having a therapy center nearby or cost of treatment; most of the time those effected don’t attend because of the stigma and shame they believe comes with having a mental health illness. There is of course nothing to be ashamed of when it comes to having a mental health issue but knowing that there are options out there for treatment and refusing those options simply because one is afraid of what society will think of them should be deemed shameful. In the ADAA’s article titled: Facts & Statistics, one of the leading causes of anxiety disorders arise from life events to be specific, traumatic life events. One way of life that could result in developing a mental illness comes from childhood trauma which leads to rebellion during the teen years which leads to substance abuse which then leads to substance dependency and at this point it’s significantly harder to accept the fact that therapy and rehabilitation are the answers to those suffering’s prayers.

Untreated anxiety and depression can lead some to a life filled with pain, suffering and misery. Imagine hating what you have become from the result of what has happened to you earlier in life. One could place the blame on the perpetrators that caused such ill natured experiences but after a certain age, it becomes the responsibility of those effected to seek out professional help should they need it. The article Characteristics and one-year outcome of untreated anxiety and depression written by I.M.J van Beljouw and P.F.M Verhaak used information from a study conducted by the Netherlands Study of Anxiety and Depression (NESDA) regarding untreated anxiety disorders among patients. From the study which had a huge patient experimental number of 743 patients drew the conclusion that 43% of those diagnosed received no form of treatment. Of those untreated patients: 1/4 of them did not perceive themselves as having a mental problem, another 26% stated no need for care and the remaining 49% expressed a need for care which was not met. These are people who were told they needed professional help and either willingly decided to ignore the diagnoses or simply could not obtain the professional help provided due to factors such as cost and no nearby therapy groups/centers. The study also concluded that the untreated patients with a perceived treatment need expressed higher levels of loneliness and suffered from severe symptoms than the other two control groups: the treated patients and the untreated patients who did not want therapy.

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5 Responses to Causal Argument – gooferious

  1. davidbdale says:

    You’re on the right track in that you’re gathering strong and credible information, yes. But the flow is like a whirlpool rather than a stream. I’m going to do some color coding if I can to demonstrate material that should be clustered.


  2. davidbdale says:

    That tutti-frutti effect is probably not what you’re looking for, Gooferious. A better-organized essay more closely resembles a rainbow, with broad bands of color that indicate your material has been organized into sections in which everything contributes to one main idea.

    My coding is not perfect, but I characterized your claims into categories and colored blocks of sentences that contributed to ideas as I understood them.

    GREEN: Causes of mental illness that originate in youth.

    Results of early trauma.

    PURPLE: Positive outcomes of therapy.

    PINK: Factors that prevent would-be patients from seeking or receiving treatment.

    ORANGE: Situational descriptions of the status quo.

    BOLD GRAY: Your thesis, which you saved for last instead of telling us in advance so we’d want to read what you had to say.


  3. davidbdale says:

    Consider opening NOT by describing trauma, but by letting us know FIRST that mental illness is the natural result of untreated trauma, and that left untreated, it doesn’t get better.

    Then, when you describe varieties of trauma, nicely collected into a section, we’ll recognize them as the eventual causes of illnesses that will manifest more or less later in life.

    Then you can describe the results of letting the illness go untreated.

    Once you’ve established the basic pattern: TRAUMA = ILLNESS = WORSENING SYMPTOMS IF UNTREATED, you can explore the CAUSES that prevent treatment. THEN FINALLY, you can make the bold proposal that the BEST if not the best way to prevent the most pain is to INTERVENE EARLY, by force if need be.

    Got it?


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