Causal – clementine

Here are some of my ideas for a casual argument. I am not sure if they are good arguments or if I could even make a better casual argument. If these aren’t good enough, I might need a little help on an idea to write about for my casual argument.

1.) Having an abortion causes many woman to have mental disorders
2.) Third trimester abortions causes physical and metal health issues
3.) Being careless about preparing for a baby if you are sexually intimate and not respecting your future could lead a mother into the decision of abortion.
4.) Being absent in sexual intimacy will decrease the chance of an unexpected pregnancy, which will lead to a lower chance for the need to have an abortion, which would also decrease the chance of mothers contracting mental disorders from the traumatic experience.
5.) Abortion is not easy as much as people say it is.

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2 Responses to Causal – clementine

  1. davidbdale says:

    1.) Having an abortion causes many woman to have mental disorders
    —Too vague to be a strong argument, but the general premise is a good place to start looking for evidence.
    2.) Third trimester abortions causes physical and metal health issues
    —Again, “physical and mental health ISSUES” is very weak, but I DO recommend concentrating on the third trimester. Narrowing the focus will help you concentrate and will make it easier for your readers to nod in agreement.
    3.) Being careless about preparing for a baby if you are sexually intimate and not respecting your future could lead a mother into the decision of abortion.
    —While this is certainly true, it will only be useful to you if you USE the mother’s GUILT about being careless as a cause of mental trauma and anguish.
    4.) Being absent in sexual intimacy will decrease the chance of an unexpected pregnancy, which will lead to a lower chance for the need to have an abortion, which would also decrease the chance of mothers contracting mental disorders from the traumatic experience.
    —Granted, but irrelevant.
    5.) Abortion is not easy as much as people say it is.
    —Once you concentrate on 2 and 3, you won’t need general claims like this one.

  2. clementine102 says:

    Thank you for your feedback! It helped me with my Causal Paper so much.

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