1. “By agreeing not [to] employ such safer alternatives, defendant and its competitors attempted to assure that those alternatives would not become ‘state of the art,’ thereby attempting to insulate themselves from liability for placing a defective product on the market” – Ryszard Wec, victim of table saw injury
2. Wec is claiming that all of the larger power tool companies as a group have access to alternatives in saw safety, such as the SawStop technology produced by Steve Gass, but that they choose instead to avoid the technology altogether in order to deflect responsibility or liability for a product that can ultimately maim its users.
3. This is a definitional claim; The power tools companies reluctance to accept regular use of SawStop technology is an attempt to “insulate themselves from liability.”
4. It is more than reasonable to say that SawStop technology is safer for all who use it and will result in a decrease in injury lawsuits against the power tools companies. But Wec’s claim that companies aren’t employing this technology because they want to save themselves from liability isn’t entirely fair because he is unclear whether or not he means that the saws themselves are the “defective product on the market,” or if he is referring to the saws enabled with SawStop technology. If it is the former, his argument places a very negative light on the saw companies, supporting his case in court, suggesting that they care more about their success than the safety of their consumers. But if it is the latter, then he is actually somewhat supporting the stand of the power tool companies — if the SawStop saws are the “defective product,” it means that the power tool companies would have to place complete faith in Gass’s product and accept any lawsuits made against them by injured consumers for failure of the technology to function properly; this is a reasonable cause for reluctance to use the technology if they are not completely sure Gass’s product will eliminate the chance of injury.
However, he also states that Robert Bosch Tool Corp. “acting through PTI, has also actively lobbied the Consumer Product Safety Commission … to prevent the adoption of flesh detection systems as a safety standard on table saws,” which shows that not only does Bosch refuse to employ the technology, but that they also actively attempted to prevent regulations for safer technology to be required by the Consumer Product Safety Commission, supporting his original claim that they aren’t as concerned about consumer safety as they are about the continued success of their company.
1. I love this claim. Can’t wait to see what you do with it!
2. “choose to avoid” and “to deflect responsibility” are very nice, Cassie. They’re not much more than paraphrases of the claim, but they reinforce rather than contradict the original. I’m in favor.
3. I’ll go with that. There’s plenty of room to entertain other choices: it evaluates the nature of their action; it claims a causal relation between their refusal and their protection; but it’s definitional too. I’m comfortable with any categorization you can defend.
4. Wow! This is novel! You dispute Wec’s claim on the grounds that it doesn’t clearly identify which saws are defective! I completely agree that the syntax of “thereby” make the claim a bit unclear, and unnecessarily so. The claim could easily be reworded to clarify that Wec means the manufacturers hoped to insulate themselves from liability by conspiring to reject SawStop technology (not be adopting it). I think we all know which claim they’re making, but you’re right to hold Wec accountable for his own clarity, Cassie.
As you yourself make clear in your last paragraph, we can deduce Wec’s claim despite his lousy syntax. Naggingly though, since you raised the question, isn’t it possible that Bosch lobbied the CPSC to prevent flesh detection because they believe it to be the more defective technology? [No, I don’t believe it either, but it’s your argument; I’m just playing in your sandbox.]
Nice work, Cassie!
Fails for Grammar Rule 3.
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Grammar violation removed. Grade revised.
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