Grammar Exercise – Mhmokaysure

Posted on November 5, 2020 by kowiklinski

If primary caretakers have a negative attitude toward their child it increases the risk that their child will grow up hostile towards others. And it’s not just aggression toward others that results from child abuse, a large amount of children raised by abusive parents also harm themselves. The reason for this negative behavior is due to children not learning appropriate techniques for handling life’s disappointments. If you aren’t raised with coping skills, you’re much more likely to act “inappropriately” than if you have developed more reasonable approaches. The effect of poor parenting as reported by Dr. Geoffrey Dahmer in “The Bully Papers”, is that all get the child they deserve.

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Grammar Exercise – gooferious

Posted on November 5, 2020 by gooferious

Original: If a primary caretaker has a negative attitude toward their child it increases the risk that they’re child will grow up hostile towards others. And its not just aggression toward others that results from child abuse; a large amount of children raised by abusive parents also harm themselves. The reason for this negative behavior is because the children don’t learn appropriate techniques for handling lifes disappointments. If you aren’t raised with coping skills, your much to likely to act ‘inappropriately’ then if you have developed more reasonable approaches. The affect of poor parenting as reported by Dr. Geoffrey Dahmer in “The Bully Papers”, is that everyone gets the child they deserve.

Revised: If primary caretaker has a negative attitude towards their child it increases the risk that their child will grow up hostile towards others. And it’s not just aggression towards others that results from child abuse; a large amount of children raised by abusive parents also harm themselves. This negative behavior occurs because the children don’t learn appropriate techniques for handling life’s disappointments. If you aren’t raised with coping skills, you’re much more likely to act ‘inappropriately’ than if you have developed more reasonable approaches. The effect of poor parenting as reported by Dr. Geoffrey Dahmer in “The Bully Papers,” is that all get the child they deserve.

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Grammar exercise- Sonnypetro

Posted on November 5, 2020 by sonnypetro29

Original: If a primary caretaker has a negative attitude toward their child it increases the risk that they’re child will grow up hostile towards others. And its not just aggression toward others that results from child abuse; a large amount of children raised by abusive parents also harm themselves. The reason for this negative behavior is because the children don’t learn appropriate techniques for handling lifes disappointments. If you aren’t raised with coping skills, your much to likely to act ‘inappropriately’ then if you have developed more reasonable approaches. The affect of poor parenting as reported by Dr. Geoffrey Dahmer in “The Bully Papers”, is that everyone gets the child they deserve.

Rewrite: If a caretakers have a negative attitude towards their child it increases the risk that their child will grow up hostile towards others. And it’s not just aggression toward others that results from child abuse; a large number of children raised by abusive parents also harm themselves. The reason for this negative behavior is because the children don’t learn appropriate techniques for handling life disappointments. If children aren’t raised with coping skills, you’re much to likely to act “inappropriately” than if you have developed more reasonable approaches. The affect of poor parenting as reported by Dr. Geoffrey Dahmer in “The Bully Papers,” is that everyone gets the child they deserve.

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Grammar Exercise-rowanstudent24

Posted on November 5, 2020 by rowanstudent24

Original:

If a primary caretaker has a negative attitude toward their child it increases the risk that they’re child will grow up hostile towards others. And its not just aggression toward others that results from child abuse; a large amount of children raised by abusive parents also harm themselves. The reason for this negative behavior is because the children don’t learn appropriate techniques for handling lifes disappointments. If you aren’t raised with coping skills, your much to likely to act ‘inappropriately’ then if you have developed more reasonable approaches. The affect of poor parenting as reported by Dr. Geoffrey Dahmer in “The Bully Papers”, is that everyone gets the child they deserve.

Revised:

If primary caretakers have a negative attitude toward their child it increases the risk that their child will grow up hostile towards others. It’s not just aggression toward others that results from child abuse, it’s also a large amount of children raised by abusive parents also harm themselves. The reason for this negative behavior is that child doesn’t learn appropriate techniques for handling life’s disappointments. If you aren’t raised with coping skills, then you’re much too likely to act “inappropriately” than if you have developed more reasonable approaches. The effect of poor parenting as reported by Dr. Geoffrey Dahmer in “The Bully Papers,” is that the parents get the child they deserve.

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Grammar Exercise — SmilingDogTheProfWants

Posted on November 5, 2020 by SmilingDogTheProfWants

If primary caretakers have a negative attitude toward their child it increases the risk that the child will grow up hostile towards others. It’s not just aggression toward others that results from child abuse; a large number of children raised by abusive parents harm themselves. The reason for this negative behavior is that the children don’t learn appropriate techniques for handling life’s disappointments. If you aren’t raised with coping skills, you’re much more likely to act ‘inappropriately’ than if you had developed more reasonable approaches. The effect of poor parenting as reported by Dr. Geoffrey Dahmer in “The Bully Papers,” is that everyone gets the child that they deserve.

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Grammar Exercise-profs22

Posted on November 5, 2020 by Jessicariccio

If primary caretakers have a negative attitude toward their child it increases the risk that their child will grow up hostile towards others. Aggression toward other children results from child abuse; a large amount of children raised by abusive parents also harm themselves. Negative behavior is because the children don’t learn appropriate techniques for handling lifes disappointments. Children that aren’t raised with coping skills are much more likely to act ‘inappropriately’ than children who have developed more reasonable approaches. The effect of poor parenting as reported by Dr. Geoffrey Dahmer in “The Bully Papers,” is that pirmary caretakers get the children they deserve.

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Grammar Exercise – clementine

Posted on November 5, 2020 by clementine102

If primary caretakers have a negative attitude toward their child, it increases the risk that their child will grow up hostile towards others. Aggression is not just a result from child abuse; a large amount of children raised by abusive parents also harm themselves. Negative behavior results from child abuse because abused children don’t learn appropriate techniques for handling life’s disappointments. If children aren’t raised with coping skills, they’re much to likely to act ‘inappropriately’ than if the children have developed more reasonable approaches. The effect of poor parenting as reported by Dr. Geoffrey Dahmer in “The Bully Papers”, is that parents get the child they deserve.

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Grammar Exercise

Posted on November 5, 2020 by oaktree1234

Original: If a primary caretaker has a negative attitude toward their child it increases the risk that they’re child will grow up hostile towards others. And its not just aggression toward others that results from child abuse; a large amount of children raised by abusive parents also harm themselves. The reason for this negative behavior is because the children don’t learn appropriate techniques for handling lifes disappointments. If you aren’t raised with coping skills, your much to likely to act ‘inappropriately’ then if you have developed more reasonable approaches. The affect of poor parenting as reported by Dr. Geoffrey Dahmer in “The Bully Papers”, is that everyone gets the child they deserve.

Rewrite: If a primary caretakers have a negative attitude toward their child it increases the risk that their child will grow up hostile towards others. Not only is aggression toward others a result of child abuse; a large amount of children raised by abusive parents also harm themselves. Children don’t learn appropriate techniques for handling life’s disappointments. Being raised with coping skills allows for much more appropriate behavior. The affect of poor parenting, as reported by Dr. Geoffrey Dahmer in “The Bully Papers,” is that everyone gets the child they deserve.

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Grammar Exercise- cardinal

Posted on November 5, 2020 by cardinal7218

Original: If a primary caretaker has a negative attitude toward their child it increases the risk that they’re child will grow up hostile towards others. And its not just aggression toward others that results from child abuse; a large amount of children raised by abusive parents also harm themselves. The reason for this negative behavior is because the children don’t learn appropriate techniques for handling lifes disappointments. If you aren’t raised with coping skills, your much to likely to act ‘inappropriately’ then if you have developed more reasonable approaches. The affect of poor parenting as reported by Dr. Geoffrey Dahmer in “The Bully Papers”, is that everyone gets the child they deserve.

Rewrite: If primary caretakers have a negative attitude toward their child it increases the risk that their child will grow up hostile towards others. And it’s not just aggression toward others that results from child abuse; a large number of children raised by abusive parents also harm themselves because the children don’t learn appropriate techniques for handling life’s disappointments. If children aren’t raised with coping skills, they’re more likely to act “inappropriately” than if they have developed more reasonable approaches. The effect of poor parenting, as reported by Dr. Geoffrey Dahmer in “The Bully Papers,” is that everyone gets the child she deserves.

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Grammar Exercise—runnerd4

Posted on November 5, 2020 by runnerd4

Original:

If a primary caretaker has a negative attitude toward their child it increases the risk that they’re child will grow up hostile towards others. And its not just aggression toward others that results from child abuse; a large amount of children raised by abusive parents also harm themselves. The reason for this negative behavior is because the children don’t learn appropriate techniques for handling lifes disappointments. If you aren’t raised with coping skills, your much to likely to act ‘inappropriately’ then if you have developed more reasonable approaches. The affect of poor parenting as reported by Dr. Geoffrey Dahmer in “The Bully Papers”, is that everyone gets the child they deserve.

Revised

If primary caretakers have a negative attitude toward their child it increases the risk that their child will grow up hostile towards others. It’s not just aggression toward others that results from child abuse: a large number of children raised by abusive parents also harm themselves. The reason for this negative behavior is that the children aren’t raised with coping skills, they’re much more likely to act “inappropriately” than if they have developed more reasonable approaches. The effect of poor parenting as reported by Dr. Geoffrey Dahmer in “The Bully Papers,” is that parents get the child that they deserve.

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