Bibliography- Pardonmyfrench

Annotated Bibliography

1. Burrow, A., & Rainone, N. (2016, September 14). How many likes did I get?: Purpose moderates links between positive social media feedback and self-esteem. Retrieved November 29, 2020, from https://www.sciencedirect.com/science/article/pii/S0022103116303377

Background: The article discusses that positive feedback on social media allows for people, especially teens, to develop a greater self-worth. Included in this article is a study that was conducted to test just that, with Facebook profile pictures and likes. Positive feedback is proven to increase self-esteem among users in this study and even shown to make people feel like they have a purpose.

How I used it: I used this article to further prove my hypothesis and through the various essays in order to show social media users are deeply affected by likes. I used this source to also show that not everyone is equally affected by likes the same way and in fact that younger users with low sense of life purpose were most affected. Also used some of the data in this article to give extra evidence of this data.

2. Luxton, D. D., June, J. D., & Fairall, J. M. (2012). Social media and suicide: a public health perspective. American journal of public health102 Suppl 2(Suppl 2), S195–S200. https://doi.org/10.2105/AJPH.2011.300608

Background: This article describes how and why social media is highly linked to suicide in teens and young adults who use the platform. This article aims to show what affect social media can play on someone’s behavior, especially when linked to suicide. Positive and negatives of social media interaction are discussed as well as what approaches the public should be taking to mitigate these risks.

How I Used it: I used this source in my rebuttal argument to touch on the positives of social media and how it can be seen in a positive light instead of negative. I also used this source in my definition essay when I was specifically talking about the teen and young adult age group.

3. Jan, M., Soomro, S. A., & Ahmad, N. (2017). Impact of Social Media on Self-Esteem. European Scientific Journal, ESJ13(23), 329. https://doi.org/10.19044/esj.2017.v13n23p329

Background: This source specifically shows data that supports the claim that self-esteem has lowered among social media users. Several questionnaires were given out before and after using social media and scores of self esteem were established. Astounding numbers of users had decreasing scores. This paper claims even an hour of social media use can effect a persons psyche.

How I Used it: I used this article in all of the essays to show that self- esteem has a growing correlation with social media use. I used this information to develop my paragraphs further and give more information on why social media plays a role in teens emotions.

4. Larry, B. (2016). Self-Esteem Levels & Selfies (dissertation). Retrieved from http://jewlscholar.mtsu.edu/handle/mtsu/4760

Background:  The study found a significant relationship between low self-esteem levels and posting selfies to boost self-confidence. Someone who has higher self-esteem is able to post and take more selfies, opposed to someone who is less confident in themselves and will post far less because they are scared of ridicule from peers. This source also say that a younger age plays a big role in self-verification on social sites.

How I Used it: I used this study when referring back to which age group is most effected by social media and selfies; teens. Because of this article, teens became the main age focus of the essay which I had originally not intended to do.

5. Destino, A. (2019). The Effects of Cognitive Stimulation of Instagram on Anxiety, Fear of Missing Out, Memory, and Self-Esteem. Digital Showcase @ University of Lynchburg. https://digitalshowcase.lynchburg.edu/utcp/114/.

Background: This article talks about how cognitive function is being affected due to social media presence and specifically effecting anxiety levels, self-esteem, and memory. The article had several research studies done in order to prove cognitive function was being affected and an experimental group was put to the test. The evidence of using Instagram heightened users’ levels of FOMO, and anxiety several times higher than the group that hadn’t looked at social media.

How I Used It: This article helped me to explain that not only is self-esteem being affected, but anxiety and memory were also being affected by social media use. Seeing others engaged in activities that some teens aren’t a part of can start a downward trend which I ended up talking about several times throughout the essays.

6.Tierney, L. (2019, March 29). Perspective | Why it’s a mistake to ban social media – and what to do instead. The Washington Post. http://www.washingtonpost.com/news/parenting/wp/2018/06/12/why-its-a-mistake-to-ban-social-media-and-what-to-do-instead/.

Background: This article by the Washington Post discusses how parents are banning social media and that it can be detrimental to a child’s development and why. The article gives solutions and alternatives to banning social media for teens. The idea of the article is to improve communication between parents and teens to lead to a safer social media experience.

How I Used It: This article was used several times in my rebuttal argument to give example of how teen users could get around being “banned” by their parents. In my argument I stated that forbidding social media would do nothing positive because it wouldn’t actually stand a chance. Teens have access to social sites in many different ways including friends houses and school; which is further talked about in the article.  

7.Bonds, D. (2019). Cyberbullying Defined [web log]. https://socialmedia160wrt.weebly.com/cyber-bullying.html.

Background:  This site gave an ample amount of data and statistics about cyber bullying and social media usage. The article goes into deep details about research on socioemotional factors of social media and how cyberbullying could be stopped.

How I Used It: This site revealed the statistics behind how many people use social media and how many of those users had been cyberbullied. I used this in my definition and rebuttal essay. The statistics played a large role in my rebuttal essay to send a message of just how big the issue is when shown through numbers.

8.King University. (2019, September). The Psychology of Social Media. King University Online. https://online.king.edu/news/psychology-of-social-media/.

Background: This source discusses the psychological addiction of social media. The website specifically goes into details about self-perception on social media and how there is enormous social pressures through social media to try and fit in. There are also many pros and cons of mental health that are mentioned throughout.

How I Used It: I used this source in my definition essay to show why users post to social media in the first place. The different tiers of posting motivations was brought into the definition essay to prove that the psychology of posting will always be relevant and can possibly continue to grow.

9.Healy, M. (2019, June 18). Suicide rates for U.S. teens and young adults are the highest on record. Los Angeles Times. https://www.latimes.com/science/la-sci-suicide-rates-rising-teens-young-adults-20190618-story.html.

Background Info: This article by the LA Times, talks all about how suicide rates for teens in the U.S is at an all time high. Suicide is now the second leading cause of death between people of 10 and 34. The article gives reference to many studies and statistics about teen suicide and gender differences, with males leading this horrid statistic.

How I Used It: This article was useful in my definition essay when talking about how social media leads to suicide. I also used this article for communicating that teens are not the most levelheaded and make irrational decisions quickly; suicide being an example of this.

10.Ruder, D. B. (2008, October 16). The Teen Brain. Harvard Magazine. https://harvardmagazine.com/2008/09/the-teen-brain.html.

Background Info: This source focuses on different parts of the teen brain. It goes into specifics about how the teenage brain is different than that of an adult, how information is processed and brain development difference in genders. There is a lot of scientific evidence that is introduced including all of the technology that was used in order to get the results of this study.

How I Used It: I used the evidence of this source to demonstrate that teens are the most easily influenced by their environment and social media. This can be seen in my definition essay when I spoke on how the frontal lobe (which is responsible for decision making and judgment) is nowhere close to maturity and can lead to negative interactions with social media. Teens can be reckless, and I put this into how they can make social media a living hell for some people or be easily influenced by what others say online.

Posted in Bibliography, pardonmyfrench, Portfolio PardonMyFrench | Leave a comment

Bibliography-shadowswife

  1. Patti Tamara Lenard, P. B. (n.d.). What is (the wrong of) cultural appropriation? – Patti Tamara Lenard, Peter Balint, 2020. Retrieved from https://journals.sagepub.com/doi/abs/10.1177/1468796819866498?journalCode=etna

Background: This article gets in-depth with what it means to be culturally appropriating and challenges if it is wrongful. The author, Patti Lenard, explains why it is an essential social and political topic to be debated on and breaks down the fundamentals of what cultural appropriation is, why it is wrong, and what someone must do to appropriate something. However, Lenard also questions if cultural appropriation is a bad thing because it contributes to cultural interaction.

How I Used It: This article gave me more information on understanding cultural appropriation and how it significantly impacts a country’s interaction with another culture and its evolution. However, I used cultural appropriation information to discuss the inconsideration of using elements from an oppressed culture to become a commercial success.

  1. Weiss, B. (2017, August 30). Three Cheers for Cultural Appropriation. Retrieved from https://www.nytimes.com/2017/08/30/opinion/cultural-appropriation.html?smid=em-share

Background: The author of The New York Times article argues that many great ideas come from culturally appropriating. She uses various examples of the many things and ideas stolen by countries, celebrities, and activists that were either deemed as appropriating culture or wholly disregarded because of the impact it left behind.

How I Used It: I used the article as evidence to point out that even if Korean artists use a different genre for their music, there is evidence of them using Black hip hop culture to create new concepts when promoting their songs as an aesthetic for their pop songs.

  1. Oh, C. (2014, September). Performing Post-Racial Asianness: K-Pop’s Appropriation of Hip-Hop Culture. ResearchGate. Retrieved November 16, 2020, from https://www.researchgate.net/publication/279274576_Performing_Post-Racial_Asianness_K-Pop%27s_Appropriation_of_Hip-Hop_Culture

Background: The article argues that Korean pop is not making fun of American or Black hip hop culture. The author tries to indicate the “Asian-ness” of K-pop, a blend of gender neutrality, and all cultures’ adaptation.

How I Used It: The article gave me a good list of things Korean artists have done with the hip-hop genre that is considered cultural appropriation. This article gives good evidence on their lack of understanding of the significance of the genre.

  1. Ramsey, F., Warren, J., & Owerka-Moore, A. (n.d.). Cultural Appropriation [PDF]. https://bento.cdn.pbs.org/hostedbento-prod/filer_public/whatihear/9-Cultural_Approp-Viewing_Guide.pdf

Background: This article discusses what it means to culturally appropriate and how cultural exchange and assimilation are associated with it. The article also gives examples of people culturally appropriating from Black culture to demonstrate how it is a problem that people can exploit an oppressed culture.

How I Used It: This article was the first article I have read that gave me a better understanding of cultural appropriation. It was used to explain the definition of cultural appropriation in order to clarify how it differs from cultural appreciation.

  1. Rogers, R. A. (2006, November). From Cultural Exchange to Transculturation: A Review and Reconceptualization of Cultural Appropriation. ResearchGate. Retrieved November 16, 2020, from https://www.researchgate.net/publication/227630287_From_Cultural_Exchange_to_Transculturation_A_Review_and_Reconceptualization_of_Cultural_Appropriation

Background: The article’s author, Richard A. Rogers, explains the four categories of cultural appropriation: exchange, dominance, exploitation, and transculturation. In addition, he discusses the underlying impact appropriation has on culture, its power structure, and the political and ethical implications.

How I Used It: The author contextualizes the complexities of societal struggles for power and the subterfuge of oppressed communities. This comparison provided the basis for an overview of the terms and a comprehensive overview of the societal dilemmas of cultural exploitation and cultural dominance.

  1. Tummons, J. P. (2008).  Cultural Assimilation, Appropriation and Commercialization: Authenticity in Rap Music, 1997–2004. ProQuest Dissertations Publishing, 2008. Retrieved from https://search.proquest.com/docview/304448031?pq-origsite=summon

Background: This article by Jonathan Tummons discusses the authenticity in the lyrics in rap music has changed from 1997-2004. It mentions that Africans have used music to express their oppression and to maintain their cultural identity. However, rap music’s authenticity has changed because cultural appropriation made it a part of popular culture.

How I Used It: I used this article to provide supportive evidence that Black music is exploited and commercialized for economic gain. The article supports black artists’ heightened concerns and the blatant use of black culture as a means of economic gains without attribution.

  1. Eun-byel, I. (2018, February 23). [Weekender] Dress down to be hip, hop on fashion stage. The Korean Herald. Retrieved from http://www.koreaherald.com/view.php?ud=20180223000497

Background: The article talks about hip hop’s clothing style becoming a popular street fashion in South Korea. It mentions how Koreans would try to take any clothing piece to emulate other hip hop artists’ style.

How I Used It: The article provides another example of the implications of economic benefits from selling hip hop inspired clothing for more affordable prices. The article also highlights examples of Korean citizens’ use of hip hop clothing style as a fashion statement when the symbolism behind this style involves a culture’s oppression.

  1. de Luna, E. (2020, July 20). ‘They use our culture’: The Black creatives and fans holding K-pop accountable. The Guardian. Retrieved from https://www.theguardian.com/music/2020/jul/20/k-pop-black-fans-creatives-industry-accountable-race

Background: The article discusses the lack of consideration the Korean music industry continuously has for Black lives and their culture. It mentions that the industry has little contribution towards supporting Black lives, and it is ironic that Korean artists heavily rely on Black artists and their culture for their success.

How I Used It: The article was used as an example of cultural exploitation to demonstrate Korea’s music industry’s lack of consideration for Black culture. The author provides evidence of the economic exploitation of music moguls. It explores the plight of western black artists. Lack of cultural attribution and economic remuneration creates conflict between the Korean music industry and western hip hop artists.

  1. Matthes, E. (2018). Cultural appropriation and oppression. Philosophical Studies, 176(4), 1003–1013. Retrieved from https://doi.org/10.1007/s11098-018-1224-2

Background: The author of this article, Matthes Erich Hatala, argues that people are not only culturally appropriating, but they prey on minority groups that are incapable of advocating for themselves.

How I Used It: This article highlights the inequalities and oppressive nature of cultural oppression. The article was used to argue that cultural appropriation preys on those who have less power.  

  1. Han, H. (2019). Moving From Cultural Appropriation to Cultural Appreciation. Art Education (Reston), 72(2), 8–13. Retrieved from https://doi.org/10.1080/00043125.2019.1559575

Background: This article discusses what it means to both culturally appropriate and appreciate multiple modalities of art forms. The author highlights unacceptable art practices that identify cultural appropriation elements. Instead, teachers attempt to celebrate diversity respectfully.


How I Used It: This article is used to demonstrate appropriate ways of providing accurate attribution in a respectful manner whereby cultural appreciation is the antithesis of cultural appreciation.

Posted in Bibliography, Portfolio ShadowsWife, shadowswife | 2 Comments

Bibliography — SmilingDogTheProfWants

1. Institute, O. M., Board, O. H. P. A. D., Food, A. N. B., & Committee, O. P. O. O. I. (2005). Preventing childhood obesity : Health in the balance. ProQuest Ebook Central https://ebookcentral.proquest.com 

Background: Covers a broad spectrum of ideas and reasons for the “epidemic” of childhood obesity in the U.S. and provides suggestions as to what can be done to prevent and alleviate the issues causing it.

How I Used It: The article briefly covers a part of human history that states life expectancy to rise and in general we see a better future for mankind but then obesity becomes an issue and the increasing line begins to head towards stagnation and eventually negatives. This information should be useful to my readers because it puts into perspective the idea that obesity is a serious issue that should be dealt with as early as possible.

2. Smith, C. (1999). Understanding childhood obesity. ProQuest Ebook Central https://ebookcentral.proquest.com

Background: This source covers the statistics and similarities of obesity in children and how they’re raised. The statistics point heavily to childhood obesity running rampant and the urgency that scientists and doctors are rushing to comprehend. This source does not pick a side, but the information presented supplies the reader with information that leaves one questioning what the best course of action is.

How I Used It: This source has a lot of statistics and different studies that cover different aspects of childhood obesity with the benefit of not eradicating obesioty but understanding why it happens and the best ways to stop it to treat obese individuals in an affect manner. Information that says that comprehension of something that is relatively new to society is crucial to determining what course of action is to take place and how treating obesity outweighs its costs.

3. Charansonney, O. L., & Després, J. (2010). Disease prevention–should we target obesity or sedentary lifestyle? Nature Reviews.Cardiology, 7(8), 468-472. doi:http://dx.doi.org.ezproxy.rowan.edu/10.1038/nrcardio.2010.68

Background: This article brings on the grim aspects of being obese and what issues arise from long term obesity. The source has several studies that conclude on major health issues that obesity results in.

How I Used It: I used the more grim and awful imagery of health issues in this article to convey a sense of urgency in the reader that the issue needs to either be addressed quickly or they must take action into their own hands and advocate for the discussions to take place. It also provides a reader to understand the importance of having their kids exercise and eat healthy.

4. Institute, O. M., Food, A. N. B., & Committee, O. P. I. P. C. (2007). Progress in preventing childhood obesity : How do we measure up?. ProQuest Ebook Central https://ebookcentral.proquest.com

Background: Mainly discusses the lack of preparation the world has for the obesity “epidemic.” Discusses several failed attempts made by different organizations and groups and blames most of it for a lack of money.

How I Used It: This article contains a lot of what I intend to talk about throughout each topic in the paper and is important for me to rely on some of the information in this article to ensure I don’t add any bias opinions on how situations and “solutions” would play out, as well as giving me something to argue against.

5. Committee, O. O. P. P. F., Institute, O. M., & Early, C. O. P. P. (2011). Early childhood obesity prevention policies. ProQuest Ebook Central https://ebookcentral.proquest.com

Background: focuses on the effects of obesity from a child’s birth to about 5 years old and what issues arise from it because doctors believe that the first few years of life are the foundation for the rest of it.

How I Used It: This article is important because it pushes the idea of setting guidelines for your kids or they will destroy their own life before it begins and way before you or them realize the consequences that are wrought from it.

6. Brotman, Laurie & Dawson-McClure, Spring & Huang, Keng-Yen & Theise, Rachelle & Kamboukos, Dimitra & Wang, Jing & Petkova, Eva & Ogedegbe, Gbenga. (2012). Early Childhood Family Intervention and Long-term Obesity Prevention Among High-risk Minority Youth. Pediatrics. 129. e621-8. 10.1542/peds.2011-1568. https://www.researchgate.net/publication/221812327_Early_Childhood_Family_Intervention_and_Long-term_Obesity_Prevention_Among_High-risk_Minority_Youth 

Background: family intervention to promote effective parenting in early childhood affects obesity in preadolescence. Participants were 186 minority youth at risk for behavior problems who enrolled in long-term follow-up studies after random assignment to family intervention or control condition at age 4. Following several follow-up-studies with these patients in order to get the most accurate reading. The end goal was to promote effective parenting and prevent behavior problems early in life may contribute to the reduction of obesity and health disparities.

How I Used It: Though it seems like another topic, the idea of behavior affecting the child’s weight is important, especially when I’m saying the child is to blame. The study yields that one group had better control of their weight and stayed at a healthy level compared to the other so this isn’t a wasted idea. That child has their own thinking process and idea of wrong or right so I am going to use this source to show that if a child is in the right mind set they will be less likely to be obese becasue they are aware of what is good or bad.

7. Carters, J. (2009). TV, food marketing and childhood obesity. Nova Science Publishers. https://ebookcentral.proquest.com/lib/rowan/detail.action?pq-orgsite=primo&docID=3019665 

Background: Shows how children can be targets for businesses that don’t care for a child’s well being over turning a profit. Goes into detail about how everything a corporation does to a product is extremely important to advertise to the adults and get the attention of the kids.

How I Used It: The article provides a perfect way for me to fight against the opposing idea of it not being a kids fault they’re obese. I am able to express that a child has control over their actions and should come to understand the issues of gorging themselves in life’s temptations. I state that a child is not expected to understand that they are being marketed to but rather, that they should understand that what they see is not a necessity and isn’t worth spending their life chasing.

8. Emery, S. (2007). Public health obesity-related TV advertising: lessons learned from tobacco. American Journal of Preventive Medicine, 33(4 Suppl), S257–S263. https://www-clinicalkey-com.ezproxy.rowan.edu/#!/content/playContent/1-s2.0-S0749379707004291?returnurl=null referrer=null 

Background: This article seeks to compare the issues of obesity with that of smoking. It outlines the same issues as other sources on this list but again, compares it to tobacco.

How I Used It: I briefly cover the idea that obesity is similar to tobacco to provide my readers with an understanding to the severity of the situation. If we saw as much attention being brought to obesity as we did with tobacco we’d be better off (this includes parents shaming or not supporting the unhealthy habit). I don’ t want to spend too much time on this source because it may confuse the reader and vere the conversation into another topic I don’t wish to discuss here. However, tobacco is both addictive and makes the person feel temporarily better and an addiction to nicotine at a young age is a good sign that the kid doesn’t care what is good or bad for them.

9. Tate, U. (2015). Children’s Executive Function and High-Calorie, Low-Nutrient Food Intake: Mediating Effects of Child-Perceived Adult Fast Food Intake. Health Education & Behavior, 42(2), 163–170. https://doi.org/10.1177/1090198114547811 

Background: The article aims to convince the reader of a child inadvertently having the same or more fast food intake on an everyday basis. The article also casts blame on the parent for displaying bad behaviours of eating fast food and more blame for giving their child so much food.

How I Used It: The article contains a lot of statistical data that is good for citing and the idea of giving your child a ton of fast food is one that I was already prepared to cover with indirect sources. A child will onl;y be able to eat what they are given because they don’t know how to get food or what is good for them so it makes sense that the parent is to blame but I wish to argue the idea that because the kid loves fast food they may beg for it constantly. If a child is beginning for it constantly and is getting it everytime or every other time then we see that the child begins to understand if they complain they get what they want, but if the parent consumes a lot of fast food it may mean they dont have the time to cook so the child gets stuck with fast food and will demand more even when the parent has some time to cook, so the parent gives their kid what they want because they don’t have the time to argue with them or explain why it’s an issue to have so much fast food.

10. Kalb, L. (2003). Child Disobedience and Noncompliance: A Review. Pediatrics, 111(3), 641–652. https://doi.org/10.1542/peds.111.3.641 

Background: Covers the obedience of a child and whether or not the child is predisposed to it. Contains multiple studies outlining the belief the researchers have on the studies and how the child may turn out depending on the severity of their disobedience.
How I Used It: A child needs to listen and when they don’t that’s when the child is to blame, the whole essence of my paper right here. A child cannot understand that there are consequences to every action and that there are adverse effects they would see for years, whether that be relationships, work ethic, or in terms of this paper, their weight. It is also important to note that the child is proven to “grow out” of the disobedient faze and becomes closer to the people who raised them.

Posted in Bibliography, Portfolio SmilingDogTheProfWants, SmilingDogTheProfWants | Leave a comment

Bibliography – l8tersk8ter

Annotated Bibliography

1. Pedersen, Sara, and Edward Seidman. “Team Sports Achievement and Self-Esteem Development Among Urban Adolescent Girls.” Psychology of Women Quarterly, vol. 28, no. 4, 2004, pp. 412–422., doi:10.1111/j.1471-6402.2004.00158.x.

Background: This case study evaluates the effect of team sports on the developing adolescent self-esteem. This is a topic of investigation because reports of self-esteem are particularly low during early adolescence for girls. Sports participation among girls is also seen to drop when they reach the age of adolescence. The first hypothesis is that team sports achievements in early adolescence will lead to higher global self-esteem later on. The second hypothesis is that association of achievement and self-esteem will come from the participants self-evaluation. The authors emphasize that the team aspect is a big contributor because it offers more characteristics that can help develop the girls self-evaluation and eventually self-esteem. The study focused on low-income girls, girls only to have limited variables, and low-income because this population is at high risk for falling involvement in sports once adolescence is reached. These girls were chosen from attending urban public schools with a high percentage of free/reduced lunches. Self-esteem was measured using a “test” with a scale in which the girls measured how opposing statements applied to them.

The results are consistent with the hypotheses. Higher levels of achievement in team sports led to high self-reported self-esteem in general. They found a relationship between the nature of the team and the positive evaluation, rather than just the girls physical ability. The racial and ethnic backgrounds of the participants were found to be a non-variable. Some mechanisms that influenced the girls are awards, being team captain, and being successful. But while that didn’t happen for everyone, another mechanism that they did all experience is coaching. The positive affirmation from a coach or just having an adult mentor was beneficial to the girls enjoyment of the sport. This study found significant links between adolescent girls participating in team sports and their improvement of their self-perception and self-esteem.

How I Used It: This study finds a connection between team sports involvement and the increase in self-esteem among adolescent girls. I used this to support my hypothesis that requiring teens to participate in a team activity, a sport being one of the options, will promote a positive self-esteem. I used the examples of what can cause this increase in self-esteem. This article helped me show why participation is important and the benefit it can and will have.

2. Holt, Nicholas L., et al. “Do Youth Learn Life Skills through Their Involvement in High School Sport? A Case Study.” Canadian Journal of Education, vol. 31, no. 2, May 2008, pp. 281–304. EBSCOhost, search.ebscohost.com/login.aspx?direct=true&db=eue&AN=508035517&site=ehost-live.

Background: This study was conducted to determine if and how life skills are learned through sports, specifically a male high school soccer team. Interviews were conducted with 12 of the student athletes and the head coach. The claim is made that skills that come from athletic participation also are important life skills for healthy development of adolescents. The SUPER program, Sports United to Promote Education and Recreation, was created to develop sports skills alongside the life skills that are found useful day to day. This intervention resulted in increased positive thinking, among other things. High school sport participation was found to be associated with the ability to have good emotional regulation.

During the study two fieldworkers were in the environment the athletes went through each day, both on the field and in their school. They observed practices and games, paying attention to the coaches interactions with players and specific incidents that seemed to impact players and be possible opportunities for life lessons to be learned. One evaluated aspect was the athletic codes that everyone had to follow. These codes often pertained to proper sportsmanship and encouraged positive involvement in the sport. Theses codes of conduct spoke to the character of the players and indirectly taught them lessons of proper behavior. Another focus was on the coaches approach and philosophy towards coaching. The coach in this study worked towards developing personal relationships with the players. He found it important to know that even when one cannot change a situation, they can change their attitude about the situation. Lessons that were observed to be learned through the team sport are initiative, respect, and teamwork/leadership. While not directly taught, the study found that the players themselves generated those results from their own experiences.

How I Used It: This study reveals benefits to individuals participating in a team sport. It shows different possible outcomes that are indirectly related to the sport, but directly related to their character and life skills. I used these findings to show the benefits that adolescents would get from participating in a team sport.

3. La Greca, Annette M., and Nadja Lopez. “Social Anxiety among Adolescents: Linkages with Peer Relations and Friendships.” Journal of Abnormal Child Psychology, vol. 26, no. 2, Apr. 1998, pp. 83–94. EBSCOhost, search.ebscohost.com/login.aspx?direct=true&db=eue&AN=507634802&site=ehost-live.

Background: Social anxiety has been evaluated mainly in adults and their interpersonal behaviors as well as social functioning. There is even research behind the anxiety in children. But social anxiety among adolescents is more of a new age topic that still requires a lot of investigating because there is great disparities between the age groups. The goal of the study was to evaluate the adolescent links between interpersonal functioning and their peers. Two aspects focused on were general peer acceptance and close friendships. Close friendships taking on important roles for adolescents. Examples are companionship, emotional support, intimacy, and a means to express emotion and results conflicts. A lack of this could result in social fear and avoidance. Adult to teen relationships were also evaluated, though not expected to have much influence.

The study contained 250 high school students. These participants were interviewed at home and measured with social scales and self-perception profiles, and as demographic information was taken down as well. It was found that those with higher social anxiety felt less accepted by peers and less romantically fit, for both boys and girls but stronger in girls. This has led to missing out on social opportunities, which may contribute to social functioning impairments. For girls that were more socially anxious there were reports of lacking close friendships and low quality of the ones they do have. For boys quality was not a factor but lack of close friendships was linked with higher social anxiety and avoidance.

How I Used It: This study was able to target the importance of adolescents having and maintaining meaningful relationships. It showed that higher levels of social anxiety and avoidance were related to the lack of close friendships as well as an overall feeling of not being accepted by peers. I used this to suggest how being on a team can help combat this. Relationships form among teammates as time is spent together. Even if close relationships aren’t formed for all, the adolescents could feel increased acceptance simply by being on the team and interacting rather than avoiding doing so. This can also be used for my combat to social anxiety argument.

4. Guest, Andrew M., and Nick Mcree. “A School-Level Analysis of Adolescent Extracurricular Activity, Delinquency, and Depression: The Importance of Situational Context.” Journal of Youth and Adolescence, vol. 38, no. 1, 2008, pp. 51–62., doi:10.1007/s10964-008-9279-6.

Background: Around seventy-five percent of youths 7-12 grade participate in at least one extracurricular during the school year. This analysis observes those students that are doing extracurriculars and the impact the activities have on levels of delinquency and depression. As with everything in life there can be benefits and down sides to being involved with these extracurriculars, and the variation in outcomes can rely on social context. There is a contradictory nature between extracurricular activities and delinquency, in which the activities can both increase and decrease the presence of delinquency. The same goes with depression, where both decreases and increases in the presence of the illness are situationally created.

The results come from 120 schools that were analyzed. The administrators filled out questionnaires describing their districts. The adolescents from these schools were able to participate in interviews about involvement and self-evaluated delinquency and well-being. This showed that there was not a consistent measure of the connection between variables, but rather it was high context based. What mattered was how activities were being conducted. When they are carefully constructed and supervised, they can maximize positive outcomes, which would be decreases in delinquency and depression. They should not necessarily be perfect all the time, but make sure to address handling problems that do arise effectively. But if the activities aren’t carefully constructed there can be adverse effects and increases in the two negative variables.

How I Used It: this article for one gives a statistic on current extracurricular participation, which is relatively high. I used this to show that the number of adolescents currently not participating in any activities is low, meaning requiring them to do so won’t be a drastic change for a majority of the students. The change just may come in competitiveness and possibly teamwork. I also used this to show that activities need to be constructed in ways that are beneficial in order to combat negative effects.

5. Leary, Mark R. “The Social and Psychological Importance of Self-Esteem.” The Social Psychology of Emotional and Behavioral Problems: Interfaces of Social and Clinical Psychology., American Psychological Association, 1999, pp. 197–221. EBSCOhost, doi:10.1037/10320-007

Background: psychologists across the board have three main assumptions about self-esteem. The first is that it is universally accepted that people want to enhance self-esteem. Human nature pushes us towards wanting to feel good about ourselves. The second is that it is more desirable to have a high self-esteem, once again wanting to feel good rather than bad. The third is that raising a low self-esteem can improve the well mental wellbeing of a person. Having a positive self-view can lead to a more positive mindset and improved mental health. People will take actions towards elevating their self-esteem even in times there is a risk of failure when it could be most negatively impacted. Low self-esteem is more associated with psychological difficulties instead of the favored psychological wellbeing. People that have a high self-esteem have been found to have better social skills, be more adaptive, and have overall more socially acceptable interactions.

How I Used It: This information was used to show that self-esteem is desirable. There would be no argument for participating in activities to increase self-esteem if there wasn’t a wanting for the self-esteem to be increased. But this shows that it is human nature to want to make yourself have a positive view of oneself.

6. Bustamante, Jaleesa. K-12 Enrollment Statistics [2020]: Totals by Grade Level + More. 6 Sept. 2019, educationdata.org/k12-enrollment-statistics.

Background: This organization gives statistics on number of students enrolled in schools of all ages from the year 2019. There are 15.3 million attended high school (9-12th grade). 3.3 million graduated in 2018, and it was projected that 3.7 million would graduate in 2020, so the numbers are increasing. In 1980, there were 13.2 million students attending secondary/high schools. This increased in 2000 to a total of 13.5 million enrolled. However, the number of high schools decreased from 27,575 in 2000 to just 26,727 in 2018. Individual school enrollment is increasing. Progress of these students can vary based on demographics, socioeconomic status, politics, economies, and general services.

How I Used It: I used these statistics to give an idea of high school enrollment numbers. I showed that there is a large population of adolescents in high school that are experiencing a crucial phase of their life. There is a large number of teens vulnerable to influence from their environments, peers, and the choices they make to fit in.

7. Farley, Holly R. “Assessing Mental Health in Vulnerable Adolescents.” Nursing, vol. 50, no. 10, 2020, pp. 48–53., doi:10.1097/01.nurse.0000697168.39814.93.

Background: Mental illness in adolescents has become a serious public health concern in the US as there has been shift in 21st century adolescent behaviors. Teenagers are 12% of the population, and 30% of them have reported symptoms of depression each year. Suicide is now the second leading cause of death between ages 10 and 24. The well-being of adolescents is increasingly important, making them a vulnerable group. Adolescence brings on psychological and physical changes that heighten the risk of mental illness.

A vulnerable population typically include ethnic minorities, low economic status, the LGBTQ+ community, people with a disability, or someone with a family history of mental illness. The group of adolescents fits into this because they are in a stage of development that affects their decision making and has increased reliability on others for support. There may always be never before experienced pressures from family and peers. Common mental health disorders that could emerge may be risk factors for suicide, such as anxiety and depression. Interaction with peers, or the lack of, are influencing factors. Discovering sexuality may come with confusion or stress that leads to negative behaviors. They also may be less willing to come forward about mental health issues that they are having.

How I Used It: I used this to establish adolescents as a vulnerable population. It gives examples of environmental and social influences on the adolescent mind and the decisions that they make. It gives risks that can be detrimental if they are not addressed and treated. I used this to say why it is important they have positive experiences that can come from joining a competitive team. It can lead them in the right social and mental direction.

8. Shearer, Steven. “Recent Advances in the Understanding and Treatment of Anxiety Disorders.” Primary Care, vol. 34, no. 3, Elsevier Inc, 2007, pp. 475–504, doi:10.1016/j.pop.2007.05.002.

Background: This article talks about treatments for various kinds of anxiety disorders. It claims that everyone experiences some sort of anxiety, whether episodic or situational. Anxiety disorders are the most commonly diagnosed mental health issue. These can affect social function, health care, and general well-being. They can also lead to other mental illnesses, primarily depression. The focus is on specific phobia, social anxiety disorder, generalized anxiety disorder, and OCD.

Social anxiety, also called social phobia, has higher impairment of functioning and less consistence in treatment as compared to other psychiatric disorders. The diagnosis is persistent fear of social situations that have a risk for scrutiny or disapproval by others. Basic shyness can lead to the development of social phobia. One can become consumed with worrying about what others think and constantly stressing about if they’re doing the right thing, preventing them from interacting normally. It can be specific, like public speaking, or generalized, like going to parties. There is a deliberate avoidance of social interactions, which can lower academics, achievement, and lead to an overall low quality of life. This can be treated with medications but will usually be paired with a therapy as well.

Exposure therapy is used to treat phobias. Skills to combat the anxiety are taught as the distress is brought on. This works on combating the anxiety head on instead of trying to escape or distract oneself from it. Cognitive behavioral therapy has a focus on accepting the anxiety and working through it rather than trying to suppress it.

How I Used It: I used this in my rebuttal that brings up how social anxiety can be a big opposition to forced team involvement. There are ways to combat these social anxieties. Exposure therapy is effective in learning how to face the problem. This exposure will be found in these team environments without throwing someone right into the spotlight, because there are many other people the focus is also on.

9. Walters, Kenneth S., and Debra A. Hope. “Analysis of Social Behavior in Individuals with Social Phobia and Nonanxious Participants Using a Psychobiological Model.” Behavior Therapy, vol. 29, no. 3, 1998, pp. 387–407., doi:10.1016/s0005-7894(98)80039-7.

Background: This article defines social phobia as an “excessive fear of social situations” that have an expected result of embarrassment and humiliation. This results in a fear of most social situations, such as drink, eating, conversation, and observation by others. About 13% of people experience it at some point in their life. The coping system is socially anxious people is geared towards defense and safety, which are found under a competitive frame of view. They see the social hierarchy while those that aren’t socially anxious don’t actively see competition. The anxious person views themselves as the submissive and tries to prevent interaction with the dominant. They do whatever it takes to avoid rejection and try to remain in the situation, but if needed will focus on how to escape the situation or avoid it all together.

When the authors tested non-anxious against anxious individuals, the main finding was that the fear cones from verbal interaction. Their physical actions in a conversation, such as eye contact or having a relaxed posture, were normal. It is the act of carrying a conversation and verbally interacting that the disparity between the anxious and non-anxious is seen. That is when the socially anxious start to decline and want to escape the situation.

How I Used It: I used this to make an argument for different types of social interaction. The article showed that verbal interaction was the main trigger for the socially anxious. In the team setting there is not always a need for constant conversation, especially in sports. Due to multiple people being involved, often input is on their own terms and not generally forced.

10. Shah, Dheeraj, et al. “Defining and Measuring Vulnerability in Young People.” Indian Journal of Community Medicine, vol. 40, no. 3, 2015, p. 193., doi:10.4103/0970-0218.158868.

Background: This article defines vulnerability as the state or condition of being weak or poorly defended. It also establishes the age group of adolescents to be from 10 to 19 years old. During this time they explore new aspects of life, such as sexual identity and practices, which put them at risk for injury or violence. Young people become more vulnerable if they are at the hands of race, gender, socioeconomic status (SES), deprivation, violence, neglect, abuse, and other factors that aren’t listed. The most vulnerable are those susceptible to misfortune. There is more chance for something going wrong if their life isn’t the best to begin with. Some adolescents can be more at risk than their peers.

How I Used It: I used this article to build the vision of what it means to be vulnerable. This defines certain characteristics commonly found in vulnerable populations. It also places adolescents among people that are vulnerable. Using this information help frame teenagers as a group that needs special attention and guidance.

Posted in Bibliography, l8tersk8ter, Portfolio L8terSk8ter | 3 Comments

Bibliography- Sonnypetro

  1. Maxmen, Amy. “Self-Driving Car Dilemmas Reveal That Moral Choices Are Not Universal.” Nature News, Nature Publishing Group, 24 Oct. 2018, http://www.nature.com/articles/d41586-018-07135-0. 

Background: This article dives into the moral ethics of self driving cars. On nature.com they posted the largest ever survey done on machine ethics. They laid out a bunch of different types of scenarios that could happen and allowed people to take a survey on what people would choose. Each different scenario had an inevitable death in it and they let the people choose what happened.

How I used it: I used this article to show that there are many different scenarios that could happen with autonomous cars. I used it to show that no matter how the programmers for the car can not come up with a certain set of rules that apply to every single driver. The results from the survey helped me build a strong piece of work and allowed me to understand the information better.

  1. Andy Lau, MBA. “The Ethics of Self-Driving Cars.” Medium, Towards Data Science, 13 Aug. 2020, towardsdatascience.com/the-ethics-of-self-driving-cars-efaaaaf9e320.  

Background: This article talks about the ethics of self driving cars and what the expectations for self driving cars are. It talks about how autonomous cars will be helpful and very efficient for our world. They are said to be very safe from taking you from point A to point B. The major companies making these cars believe they are ethical and that these cars will be safe for the environment and not harm any bystanders. They talk about the different algorithms each company uses and how they will be used to make the safest car for the consumer.

How I used it: I use this article to show that the manufacturers believe they can come up with the safest way to put algorithms into their cars so they are as safe as possible. I used this article to try and counter what they were saying and how it would be hard to come up with the perfect algorithm that would satisfy each consumer.

  1. Hawkins, Andrew J. “Inside Waymo’s Strategy to Grow the Best Brains for Self-Driving Cars.” The Verge, The Verge, 9 May 2018,  http://www.theverge.com/2018/5/9/17307156/google-waymo-driverless-cars-deep-learning-neural-net-interview. 

Background:  In this article it goes into google’s side company Waymo and how they started up. Waymo has a self driving minivan, Waymo is the first company to be completely self driving and driving on public roads. They tried to make their cars drive somewhat humanly and react in some ways like humans. They have millions of miles of experience and they believe they have what it takes to have the safest car possible.

How I used it: I used this article to explain the different ways companies are evolving and what different methods they are using to make their car as safe as possible. I talked about how they are using their technology to try and mimic human actions while driving and how that could make the car safer.

  1. Monticello, M. (n.d.). Will Self-Driving Cars Make Our Roads Safer? Retrieved October 26, 2020, from https://www.consumerreports.org/self-driving-cars/will-self-driving-cars-make-our-roads-safer/

Background: In the article “ Will Self Driving Cars Make Our Roads Safer” it talks about how 90% of car accidents are caused by human error and if humans aren’t driving it will make the roads safer. It talks about different safety features in cars right now that have improved and made the roads a lot safer. It also talked about a google self-driving car that collided with a bus because the car was not programmed properly and did not take into account that there are human drivers and they don’t always drive the same way and it caused an accident. Google is fully onboard with cars becoming fully autonomous, they believe it will make the roads very safe.

How I used it:  I used this article to explain how in a perfect world everyone would wish that there would be no car accidents and maybe self driving cars could be the answer to that, but we don’t know if they will yet we can only look at statistics and what ifs. We will not know what the real answer is until the car is fully effective in our everyday lives.

  1. Reference : Johnson, C. (2018, October 24). Self-driving cars will have to decide who should live and who should die. Here’s who humans would kill. Retrieved October 26, 2020, from https://www.washingtonpost.com/science/2018/10/24/self-driving-cars-will-have-decide-who-should-live-who-should-die-heres-who-humans-would-kill/ 

Background: In this article it gives you a scenario to start off and it makes you choose between hitting a homeless man and a criminal or two cats in the other lane. It really makes you think and you are the driver and only you can make that decision, but what if it is a self-driving car driving what will your car do in that situation.

How I used it: I used this article to help further my argument that people want to know what their car will do in these types of situations. Will the car save the people and hit the cats or will it hit the people and save the cats. I looked into this article and more times than not people choose to save the human over the animals. It didn’t matter if they were homeless or a criminal, people chose to save the humans. I wanted to give the reader different difficult scenarios that go through the mind of the people making the car and show how challenging making these cars can really be 

  1. Kelkar, K. (2016, May 28). How will driverless cars make life-or-death decisions? Retrieved October 12, 2020, from  https://www.pbs.org/newshour/nation/how-will-driverless-cars-make-life-or-death-decisions

Background: In the near future there will be driverless cars and moral codes will already be decided before the cars hit the roads. It talks about how humans make many decisions each time they are driving but with the self driving cars they will be pre programmed to make the decisions for you. These cars have to take into account every possible scenario to keep the driver safe.

How I used it: I used this article to explain how self driving cars will have to make moral decisions every single second and if they don’t make the right choice everything could go terribly wrong.

  1.  May, and Katie Burke. “How Do Self-Driving Cars Make Decisions?: NVIDIA Blog.” The Official NVIDIA Blog, 7 May 2019, blogs.nvidia.com/blog/2019/05/07/self-driving-cars-make-decisions/. 

Background: This article explains in depth on how autonomous cars make decisions. It gives you a in depth analysis on what types of technology is used for these cars to make decisions. The use many types of sensors and cameras to make different decisions

How I used it: I used this article to show all of the technology used inside of the self driving cars. I also used this to show that with all of this technology there could be glitches and these glitches could cause accidents and cause harm to the occupants.

  1. DeBord, Matthew. “Elon Musk Promises an Autopilot ‘Quantum Leap’ in the next Few Weeks. Here’s How Tesla’s One-of-a-Kind Bet on Self-Driving Tech Works.” Business Insider, Business Insider, 18 Aug. 2020, http://www.businessinsider.com/tesla-self-driving-technology-compared-to-everyone-see-how-it-works-2020-7. 

Background: Elon Musk as we all know is big on autonomous vehicles, he has his own company Tesla. In this article it talks about how Musk plans to make massive strides in the autonomous vehicle industry. He wants his car to be fully autonomous in the very near future and he stats in this article that it will happen.

How I used it: I used this article to show how different competitors are making big steps in their own way to try and have their car fully autonomous first. Musk is the name we hear about most so I wanted to use him as a main tool for my work. He has the most vehicles on the road and is a very well known brand that can help relate to the audience who is reading this piece. 

  1. Schmelzer, Ron. “What Happens When Self-Driving Cars Kill People?” Forbes, Forbes Magazine, 26 Sept. 2019, http://www.forbes.com/sites/cognitiveworld/2019/09/26/what-happens-with-self-driving-cars-kill-people/. 

Background: Many people ask the question whose fault is it if a self driving car kills someone who is at fault? With self driving cars becoming more frequent it is a big topic on who is at fault if the car is in self driving mode and kills someone and the person who was in the car could not do anything to stop it the vehicle should be at fault. In this article it talks about a few crashes that caused a person to die with self driving cars. It talks about the few major companies and their accidents that caused fatalities and who was responsible and what changes the company made after the fact.

How I used it: I used this article to show the real danger behind self driving cars and to bring up the issues of who is really at fault in these accidents. I use this to show different scenarios that could happen and if pedestrians could be at fault or if the manufacturer is responsible because it is their technology that killed the person not the human in the car because they had no control.

  1. Ryan Whitwam on September 8, 2014 at 3:45 pm Comment. “How Google’s Self-Driving Cars Detect and Avoid Obstacles.” ExtremeTech, 8 Sept. 2014, http://www.extremetech.com/extreme/189486-how-googles-self-driving-cars-detect-and-avoid-obstacles. 

Background: Google is up there with tesla in their attempt to make fully autonomous cars. This article talks about how the cars can detect objects on the road and how it can detect when the car needs to move out of the way. The use of sonar radars and cameras are the main ways the car can detect when there is an object in the road and make a decision on what to do. Also a laser is used to help with object detection. 

How I used it: I used this article to show what companies are doing in order to make sure their cars can become fully autonomous.  I wanted to show that google is not as close as tesla to releasing their fully autonomous car because they want to make it as safe as possible before releasing it to the public. They don’t want to release it too early and have a lot of problems with causing a huge safety problem.

Posted in Bibliography, Portfolio SonnyPetro, Portfolios FA20, sonnypetro | Leave a comment

Bibliography-ComicDub

1. Thomas, P., & Frampton, R. (1999). Large and Small Cars in Real-World Crashes -Patterns of Use, Collision Types and Injury Outcomes. Annual Proceedings / Association for the Advancement of Automotive Medicine, 43, 101–118.

Background: This article highlights data from previous works that examined the relationship between vehicle mass and fatality rate of real world crashes. One section in particular that was important to my research was the first couple of paragraphs after the abstract, which discuss specific studies that produced data backing up the claim that vehicle mass has an effect on the fatality rate of car accidents. It then goes on to discuss other factors such as gender, age and vehicle occupancy. 

How I Used It: This article helped confirm the part of my hypothesis that vehicle size affects the fatality rate of car accidents. I used the data found in this article that explained how there is a twofold increase in the fatality risk when a car’s mass is reduced to nearly half, proving an almost proportional relationship between the two.

2. Baker, B., Nolan, J., O’Neill, B., & Genetos, A. (2007, May 22). Crash compatibility between cars and light trucks: Benefits of lowering front-end energy-absorbing structure in SUVs and pickups.

Background: This article describes how energy is absorbed in a car-to-car collision through the crushing of energy absorbing structures to minimize potential injuries to the car’s occupants. It was found that collisions between cars and light trucks end up not utilizing these energy absorbing structures because their difference in height created a mismatch in energy absorbing structures. This meant more injuries or even fatalities were occuring in accidents between the two classes of vehicles than others. Then in 2003, automakers committed to new design standards to reduce this mismatch in structures. The article mainly focuses on how much of a difference these changes in design standards made in front-to-front collisions.

How I Used It: This article helped me find the phrase “crash compatibility,” which I then used as the focal point of my definition essay. Most of the information on “crash compatibility” comes from this article.

3. Kahane, C. (1997, January 1). Relationship Between Vehicle Size and Fatality Risk in Model Year 1985-93 Passenger Cars and Light Trucks [PDF]. United States. National Highway Traffic Safety Administration.

Background: This paper goes in depth on how vehicle weight and sizes affect fatality rates of all different types of crashes including car-to-car collisions, rollovers, and collisions with objects. The paper also discusses the factors that make car to light truck collisions have such higher fatality rates than collisions between other classes of vehicles. It is also explained that a majority of motorists believe large vehicles are safer than small ones which is true for the occupant of the vehicle but is not for other drivers. Large and heavy vehicles create a hazard for smaller, lightweight vehicles on roadways.

How I Used It: I used this paper to gather more data on the relationship between vehicle weight/size and the fatality rates of car-to-car collisions. This paper also provided me with direct statistics on how collisions between large and small vehicles are more fatal and explained the reasoning behind it.

4. Karim, M., Ibrahim, N., Saifizul, A., & Yamanaka, H. (2013, July 04). Effectiveness of vehicle weight enforcement in a developing country using weigh-in-motion sorting system considering vehicle by-pass and enforcement capability.

Background: This article explains how vehicle overloading, loading more weight in vehicles than there should be, is a major problem on the roadways of Malaysia. The reason it is a problem is because vehicle overloading is one of the major contributors to road pavement damage. The article goes into detail about how Malaysia tries to enforce vehicle weight through a vehicle, weigh-in-motion (WIM) system.

How I Used It: I only ended up using this article to try to explain how vehicle weight enforcement could possibly be done on all roadways to help put my thesis into action but later found that this was the wrong approach. I will not be using this source in my final paper but this article helped me find out how I should change my thesis and put me in the right direction.

5. Bae, H., Lim, J., & Park, K. (n.d.). VEHICLE COMPATIBILITY IN CAR -TO-CAR FRONTAL OFFSET CRASH [PDF]. Korea: Hyundai Motor Company.

Background: This article showcases a series of full scale car-to-car collision tests conducted by Hyundai Motor Company in order to show the crash compatibility of different vehicles. The article discusses some of the factors of vehicle compatibility as well as all of the actual data from the crash tests. The article also uses data from FARS, Fatality Analysis Reporting System, to show the actual death ratios of collisions between different vehicle types and normal cars.

How I Used It: I used this article for its definition of crash compatibility. The article defines it as “Vehicle compatibility is defined as the ability of a car to protect both its own occupants and partner car’s occupants.”

6. Overly, S. (2019, April 17). Americans have fallen in love with little big cars.

Background: This news article from The Washington Post talks about how larger vehicles are becoming more and more popular in America. The article goes into the details of why these larger vehicles are becoming popular.

How I Used It: I used this article to help explain how more people are buying bigger cars making roadways even more dangerous for people who still drive smaller cars. I used this information to make my hypothesis seem more urgent to try to get the reader onboard with my hypothesis.

7. Forkenbrock, D. J., & March, J. (2005, September). Issues in The Financing of Truck-Only Lanes.

Background: This article is about the issues in implementing truck-only lanes and more specifically, as the title implies, it is about the issues in financing truck-only lanes. Truck only lanes would benefit all drivers as they clear up traffic on highways and make it safer for all other drivers. But the cost of a truck-only lane currently outweighs their benefit in the long run, at $10 million per mile of road. That isn’t even including other costs such as land acquisition.

How I Used It: I used this article as the main opposing claim in my rebuttal essay. I explained how expensive these lanes cost then showed how all the lives saved by constructing them reduces their cost by the amount of money saved from less fatal accidents and would continue to save money annually due to less fatalities.

8. IIHS. (2019, December). Fatality Facts 2018: Large trucks. Insurance Institute for Highway Safety

Background: This article highlights the discrepancy between the fatality rate of car occupants and large truck occupants in large truck collisions. The discrepancy is made very clear with this simple statistic, in 2018, 4,136 large truck crashes occurred and only 16% of deaths were truck occupants while 67% percent were occupants of cars. 

How I Used It: I pretty much used this source for that statistic alone and just to increase my knowledge in general about crashes between large and small vehicles.

9. Joost, W.J. (2012, August 24). Reducing Vehicle Weight and Improving U.S. Energy Efficiency Using Integrated Computational Materials Engineering.

Background: The main topic of this article is how the use of lightweight materials to reduce the weight of vehicles leads to an increase in fuel efficiency yet is not being done by most companies because of multiple factors. These factors include performance of the materials, manufacturability, and cost. The rest of the article discusses how much of a benefit using advanced lightweight materials would be and how there needs to be a great deal of material science effort for this material to be created.

How I Used It: I used this article to answer one of the biggest questions surrounding my original hypothesis of forcing all cars to be the same size, rather than creating dedicated roadways for different classes of vehicles. This question was what size should all vehicles be forced to be, big, small or somewhere inbetween. This article provided me with supporting evidence to say that all cars should be forced to be small because they are more fuel efficient and with the advancement of lightweight materials, they could still be considerably strong and crash resistant.

10. Williams, J. M. (2010, June 26). Why We Should Favor Heavier Vehicles for Highway Driving.

Background: This article explains how cars with greater mass (weight), are safer to drive on highways. The article then goes into describing the science behind why this is true. Based off the science, a conclusion is made that highway vehicles should be 20 times the mass of the average passenger.

How I Used It: I used this article to help show that it is true that larger vehicles are safer than smaller ones but only for the occupants of said large vehicle. So the main purpose of this article was for me to show how it is valid to think that cars should be larger, but based on data from other sources, this is not the correct way of thinking.

Posted in Bibliography, comicdub, Portfolio ComicDub | Leave a comment

definition argument- 612119d

New thesis

Heathcare specialist came out and said that mask wearing has no potential effect on our immune system and could potentially save you or someone you care about. By not wearing a mask you could affect someones life. 200,000 people in America have already died from covid-19 and many more will soon come if we dont take mask wearing seriously. If lives werent a good enough insensitive another would be the American economy, which some Economists predict will save up to 1 trillion dollars by preventing the next big shut down.

After Covid 19 swept the country in late March, we are still in the middle of a pandemic. After the march shut down a lot has been learned but many lifes have been affected since then. Government trust . The mask verse no mask issue is still somthing people are fiercely passionate about on both sides Which was caused by the fact that many people don’t trust the media and we’re feeling the harsh effects of that now since many Americans don’t know who to believe to which no help the president is telling us something different from health experts.

Covid-19 lockdowns happened in early March in some areas of the United States. schools, businesses, and restaurants we’re all closed down. We started hearing the term’s social distance and even heard the mention of masks. While the lockdown has concluded and another shut down won’t be likely there is another way we can help stop the spread of the Coronavirus. Mask-wearing. If the mask covers your nose and mouth, it will help prevent others from getting sick if you have the virus while also protecting yourself against people who do have the virus. Having everyone in the community wear a mask will help prevent a loophole in which the Coronavirus could enter our communities again it will limit the spread and potentially save a family member of yours. While a mask alone won’t end the pandemic, unless face mask we’re almost mandatory but pairing it along with socially distancing and hand washing has many benefits that could help prevent another shutdown and cause the economy to crash. According to one doctor study “Considering a fixed transmission rate, , 80% adoption of 20%, 50%, and 80% effective masks reduces cumulative relative (absolute) mortality by 1.8%”. This statistic more or less means If 80% of Americans wore a mask on average of the people that died, almost 2% of them would still be here which comes to a little over 4000 with our current numbers.America needs to listen to the doctors and since they are recommending we wear the mask is it our best intentions to start wearing them so we can get back to normal. Since doctors have concluded that wearing mask has no downside but has a possibility keep you safe it almost seems is non-issue.

Think back to march when everything was shut down and it seemed the world was almost ending. Everyone was being sent home from school and being told to stay at home even for work. Having another outbreak would cause tons of problems. Having restaurants, gym’s schools and other businesses shut down for the second time would hurt families. Anytime where they can’t afford to be hurt anymore. The US economy. Usually hinges on what top politicians say such as the president or higher ranking senators but in times of crisis coronavirus experts have to step in. If they keep giving out bad news not only will politicians be put under more pressure, laws will go up preventing people from going out, followed by the stock market taking a beating. When the financial crisis hit in 2007 One estimate had been taken and 10000 lives were lost because of it. People need to work to support their families there’s no other way around it and if we want to prevent long-term suffering we need to be able to keep it open even during this pandemic. Some experts suggest “a real risk of a vicious downward spiral of illness and impoverishment.” So, we need to do everything possible not to let that happen and right now, it seems like our best option is to listen to the doctors, and many Health experts that have agreed on mass safety. Life may not go back to normal as soon as we would like to. We need to do our part to help end this pandemic.

On top of this, during this time the split between Republican and Democrat has gone farther and further. put some high-ranking Republican officials unease about the virus and have often claimed it’s been exaggerated but claimed it hasn’t been dangerous. while this issue shows that the economy can’t shut down again maybe mask were the answer for right now to keep it going. The big issue in going on in the United States is what media Sources can you believe. people feel like they’re being lied to or have been betrayed by the media in the past and now refuse to listen to them because of that. Health officials have been stressing how important it’s been to wear masks but many people don’t to them since they believe this is fake news and it is to get the Republicans out of office. Having this disconnect is putting lives at risk . covid-19 is not going to be won or lost it’s a war, it will be won or lost in the lab with doctors and other led Health experts. However, this response will happen only if scientists and healthcare workers are heard.

Scientists and health experts have said wearing a mask has no downside and when it increases your chances of getting sick in any way. Even though there isn’t enough data to prove the point in small settings it has at least shown some effectiveness to prevent the spread of covid-19 and to that we can’t argue. while they may be annoying, it could save someone’s life and help the economy not shut down again which everyone can agree on.

Posted in 612119d, Definition Categorical | Leave a comment

Bibliography–dayzur

  1. Dyrbye, Liselotte. “Burnout and Serious Thoughts of Dropping Out of Medical… : Academic Medicine.” LWW, 2010, journals.lww.com/academicmedicine/Fulltext/2010/01000/Depressive_Symptoms_in_Medical_Students_and.30.aspx

Background: This article discusses a study taken across 7 medical schools cast of students and their thoughts of seriously dropping out of medical school. It focuses heavily on the various reasons that these students would even have the thoughts to drop out of medical school. 

How I Used It: I was planning to use this for my first hypothesis but eventually went in and changed topics. I was going to make connections to students going in with certain expectations and no prior experience having a harder time coping with the courses and eventually leading to a higher rate of dropping out. Where students who had prior experience in some field may either not pursue the field after said experience or have a better time experiencing it then as they know what it really is. After switching topics, I still read through this to have some information on the topic to try and connect to my paper but overall never ended up using this one in the paper.

  1. Marland, Sidney. “Career Education Now.” Sagepub, 1 May 1971, journals-sagepub-com.ezproxy.rowan.edu/doi/pdf/10.1177/019263657105535501

Background: This article focuses on a plan thought up by the author on the reform of student’s education and the things that need to be changed and implemented for them to become satisfactory. It makes you think about the question “what are we educating our children for” in the bigger picture and the current educational systems benefits and disadvantages.

How I Used It: I used this article for some quotes and references in my definition essay. I dove deeper into the question “what are we educating our children for” and talked about the differences in education and knowledge that is given. This brought together an example of the benefits of vocational like courses to help students get a first look into a field instead of the tedious methods of modern schooling like memorization of terms and just spewing them back onto a paper of multiple choice questions. 

  1. Brand, Betsy. “High School Career Academies: A 40-Year Proven Model for Improving College and Career Readiness.” Givewell, Nov. 2009, files.givewell.org/files/unitedstates/NAF/Betsy%20Brand%20AYPF%20Career%20Academy%20paper.pdf

Background: This article focuses on the career academy approach that high schools have implemented. Career academies are courses and programs in typically high schools that let students explore and engage in different career path focused courses typically with some hands-on experience to truly get a view into the field a student is interested in. 

How I Used It: I used this article in my causal essay to cite the success that the career academies have shown for their almost 40-year life span at the point of when this article was written. I used this to encourage the readers to think about career academies once again as the option they should be going with by listing off key things that show that it excels over other methods and forms of teaching. This also gave me more insight into other positive things that come from students partaking in career academies.

  1. Hooker, Sarah. “College Knowledge: A Critical Component of College and Career Readiness.” Onlinelibrary-Wiley-Com, 2010, onlinelibrary-wiley-com.ezproxy.rowan.edu/doi/epdf/10.1002/yd.364

Background: This article focuses on how students across the US are dropping out of high school and their lack of knowledge for postsecondary education and just the world outside them. It talks about a program used by schools to incorporate this knowledge for their students called “early college high schools” where high school students can take courses of college level or take courses at a legitimate college campus to get the students prepared with an idea of what college life is like.

How I Used It: I used this article in my definition and causal arguments to give reasons for students dropping out of high school to eventually lead into why my idea will keep more students from dropping out. For my definition essay, I talked about students who have dropped out and could have done something great that helps the world greatly but weren’t given a decent enough chance that made them wish to continue their schooling. This makes the reader want to think again about this and what could have happened and hopefully make them think about my topic in a good light. In my causal, I used this to introduce career academies as a way to fix the issue that students find of not being interested in their courses.

  1. Vargas, Joel, et al. “Blending High School and College Can Sharpen the Focus of Each.” Sagepub, 23 Oct. 2017, journals-sagepub-com.ezproxy.rowan.edu/doi/pdf/10.1177/0031721717739587.

Background: This article was more focused on what an early college high school was and the benefits surrounding them. There is a great deal of info on the benefits that goers of early college high schools achieve over standard high schools.

How I Used It: I used this article in my definition essay to give the readers a greater look into what the advantages of early college high schools are and the statistics produced from them. A point made in my paper was about the dropout rate of students and this article proves the effectiveness in keeping these kids in school on the right path. Also adding that more students who follow through with the early college high school option have higher chances to attend college and earn a degree. 

  1. Newmann, Fred M. “Can Depth Replace Coverage in the High School Curriculum?” JSTOR, Jan. 1988, www-jstor-org.ezproxy.rowan.edu/stable/20403629?seq=4#metadata_info_tab_contents

Background: This article focuses on the two main terms of depth and coverage and goes greater into depth on what each of them mean and the benefits and complications upon both of them in the education system. 

How I Used It: I used this article in my rebuttal essay to explain the issues with coverage in modern day schools and why we should be moving to a curriculum with more depth. I explain how coverage is hurting our schooling and we need to move away from this method based on information in the article. This gave me a true reality check on what truly was going on in the schooling system and gave me a greater idea on what needs to be changed in my personal opinion.

  1. Christle, Christine. “School Characteristics Related to High School Dropout Rates.” Sagepub, 1 Nov. 2007, journals-sagepub-com.ezproxy.rowan.edu/doi/abs/10.1177/07419325070280060201

Background: This article talks about the influences that the school environment has on a students choice to drop out and the rates at which they do for different schools. Other information is disclosed on two different students, one who dropped out and one who stayed in school, and the things that tend to happen to them in their lives after high school, like salary and dependency on government programs. 

How I Used It: I didn’t use this article to reference in any of my essays but it was a great resource to learn about the different characteristics that not only courses have on the effect of students dropping out but in this case the actual school environment. It gives me a greater look into the reasons for students dropping out and what can be fixed so these numbers of students dropping out can hopefully depreciate.

  1. Martinez, Robert. “Promoting Career and College Readiness, Aspirations, and Self-Efficacy: Curriculum Field Test.” Onlinelibrary-Wiley-Com, 9 June 2017, onlinelibrary-wiley-com.ezproxy.rowan.edu/doi/full/10.1002/cdq.12090

Background: This article features a study conducted on students’ knowledge for college and career readiness from a set of 163 ninth-graders. The results proved that there must be some change put in place as the results seemed very lackluster for a majority of the group.

How I Used It: I did not reference this article in any essay but it gave me a broad gist of how much students know about what they are going into before college. From this study I could see that a large majority of students aren’t fully prepared for what is expected from them in college and that methods of teaching needed to be updated and reformed for these numbers to rise.

  1. Karp, Melinda. “‘I Don’t Know, I’ve Never Been to College!” Dual Enrollment .” Onlinelibrary-Wiley-Com, 19 June 2012, onlinelibrary-wiley-com.ezproxy.rowan.edu/doi/abs/10.1002/he.20011

Background: In this article a study was taken comparing the students who were enrolled in dual enrollment before-and-after their courses. The results of this showed major improvement between the students’ knowledge of college before their courses compared to after. Dual enrollment was also explained further for the reader to get a greater idea on what happens and what the benefits of it are. 

How I Used It: I used this article mainly for simple research reasons. I wanted to see more articles on students before and after dual enrollment and the effects it had on them. This article was good for my understanding more on the topic as a whole and helped look through other sources and implement similar things into my writing but I did not reference this at any point. This was purely curiosity based research to further my topic.

  1. Jones, Stephanie. “Student Participation in Dual Enrollment and College Success.” Taylor & Francis Online, 12 Nov. 2013, www-tandfonline-com.ezproxy.rowan.edu/doi/full/10.1080/10668926.2010.532449

Background: In this article a study is taken comparing students who did and didn’t enroll in dual enrollment in school. The results proved to show that students who entered college after going through dual enrollment tended to have a higher average GPA than those who did not in both universities and community colleges.

How I Used It: I used this article to feed my curiosity as I wanted to see a direct number difference in effectiveness of dual enrollment between students. This article gave me a greater sense to what degree dual enrollment can help students and just the overall averages of some students’ GPAs taken. It helped me realize the limits I was working with and what I should be expecting for other students.

Posted in Bibliography, dayzur, Portfolio Dayzur, Portfolios FA20 | 1 Comment

Annotated Bibliography-Hailthegreat8

Tracy Trautner, Michigan State University Extension. “Authoritarian Parenting Style.” MSU Extension, 20 Sept. 2018, www.canr.msu.edu/news/authoritarian_parenting_style.

  1. Background: In this article by Tracy Trautner called “Sympathetic parenting style,” Tracy Trautner describes Sympathetic parenting styles used on children. Tracy Trautner goes into depth and talks about the positive and negative effects of a Sympathetic parenting style. She briefly defines what a Sympathetic parent is and starts listing their rules and trying to prove how this parenting style doesn’t work; Tracy Trautner then starts listing all the negative aspects and physical and emotional effects this parenting style has on your children to further prove her point. The last bit of information Tracy Trautner talks about in her article are the different parenting styles, Sympathetic parents, permissive parents, overprotective parents, and gives a brief definition for each on

How I Used It: In Tracy Trautner’s article called “Sympathetic parenting style,” I cited some sentences in her article. Tracy Trautner’s article taught me a lot about Sympathetic parents. She describes the effects of this parenting style on children. Tracy Trautner tells the positive and negative aspects of a Sympathetic Parent and goes more in-depth to prove why the Sympathetic parenting style is not right for children. I talked about the effects of this parenting style, the physical and emotional impact.

Sawicki, Rachel. “Personal Essay: I’m Not Angry, I Just Have Authoritarian Parents.” The Review, 5 Mar. 2020, udreview.com/personal-essay-im-not-angry-i-just-have-authoritarian-parents/

2. Background: In this personal essay by Rachel Sawicki called “Personal Essay: I’m not angry, I just have authoritarian parents,” Rachel Sawicki tells a story about her life growing up with a Sympathetic Parent. She goes deep into her childhood and shares her experience, the hardships she had to deal with daily. Rachel describes how her mom would treat her every day how her mom’s teaching impacted her emotionally.

How I Used It: In my essay, I described what Rachel Sawicki went through throughout her childhood. I talked about how her mother treated her and talked to her, how her mother controlled what Rachel was allowed to do and say, and the pain Rachel had to deal with every day. Rachel Sawicki lost friends throughout her childhood and became depressed; what her mother did to her mentally stayed with her as she got older. I also talked about how Rachel Sawicki chose to teach her kids.

Christin Perry December 06, and Christin Perry. “Authoritarian Parenting: The Pros and Cons. According to a Child Psychologist.” Parents, 6 Dec. 2019, www.parents.com/parenting/better-parenting/style/authoritarian-parenting-the-pros-and-cons-according-to-a-child-psychologist/

3. Background:  In this article, Christin Perry describes a Sympathetic Parent as one who believes in all parents’ fundamental authority to dominate their children’s will. Sympathetic parents do not negotiate with their children; instead, they dictate how their children will act and use punishment, neglect, and deprivation as the methods for ensuring that their instructions are followed. Many children of Sympathetic parents achieve admirable life goals due to parents’ relentless demands. Still, the downside of such “nurturing” is low self-esteem and a nagging sense of inferiority in too many cases. A minority of their children resist their parents, rebel against the treatment they receive, and become delinquents or even criminals as a way of asserting their personalities.

How I Used It: I used this article to emphasize that while the outcome of being raised by a Sympathetic Parent might look admirable to outside observers, the cost to the children’s psyche is too expensive to warrant their apparent success, even if the bullying they received from their parents results in them becoming successful professionals.

Stephney, Shonette. The Effects of Rewarding Positive Behavior in Children, Ministry of Education, Guyana, 2 Nov. 2015, www.education.gov.gy/web/index.php/parenting-tips/item/1785-the-effects-of-rewarding-positive-behavior-in-children

4. Background: This article is called “The Effects of Rewarding Positive Behavior in Children.” It goes into positive habits, negative behavior, basically the behavior of a child.

How I Used It: I used this article to talk about your child’s negative behavior if you keep using the Authoritarian Parent style on your kid. 

“The Pros and Cons of Authoritarian Parenting.” Blessed Learners, 20 Sept. 2018, www.blessedlearners.com/pros-and-cons-of-authoritarian-parenting/

5. Background: This article is about “The Pros and Cons of Sympathetic Parenting.” It starts with a brief introduction of Sympathetic parenting, then talks about the cons like the emotional impact Sympathetic Parenting will have on children, and gives more detail about each example. They state the article then talks about the positive effects of Sympathetic Parents by providing examples and talking more about them.

How I Used It:  What I used in this article “The Pros and Cons of Sympathetic Parenting.” are how this type of teaching style can make your child have the will to do good; for instance, thinking about their actions, and the con I used is how this parenting style can make your child develop low self-esteem that can hurt him throughout it his life.

Li, Author Pamela. “Authoritative vs. Authoritarian Parenting Styles [Infographic].” Parenting For Brain, 29 Oct. 2020, www.parentingforbrain.com/authoritative-vs-authoritarian-parenting/

6. Background: This article is about “Authoritative vs. Sympathetic Parenting Styles.” It defines both these parenting styles and then describes the similar and different traits of these two parenting styles and what it does to a child.

How I Used It: The article “Authoritative vs. Sympathetic Parenting Styles.” helps me describe both of these parenting styles on their child and explain how to combine these parenting styles to balance out a child because having too much kind can hurt your child. I also described what each parenting style does; for example, a quote I used is, “Authoritative parents talk to their children” and “Sympathetic parents believe they are always right and never wrong.”

Cherry, Kendra. “Do You Have an Authoritative Parenting Style?” Verywell Mind, 17 Sept. 2020, www.verywellmind.com/what-is-authoritative-parenting-2794956

7. Background: This article is called “Authoritative Parenting Characteristics and Effects.” It focuses on the history and characteristics and talks about the difference between Authoritative and Authoritarian Styles. It gives a brief history, lists all the characteristics, and then talks about “Authoritative vs. Authoritarian Styles.” The article provides information on both parenting styles then finally list their effects.

How I Used It: This article called “Authoritative Parenting Characteristics and Effects.” helped me see the type of consequences of each type of parents, and how they teach their child in their way, and the effects both of these styles have on their child. It also tells why the Authoritative Parents style is better and more balanced than the Authoritarian parent style.

Amy Morin, LCSW. “Strategies That Will Help You Become More Authoritative to Your Kids.” Verywell Family, 26 Oct. 2020, www.verywellfamily.com/ways-to-become-a-more-authoritative-parent-4136329

8. Background: This article by Amy Morin called “12 Ways to Become a More Authoritative Parent”. The article describes each of the 12 ways they mention. They talk about the rules. Authoritative parents teach their children.

How I Used It:  The used article “12 Ways to Become a More Authoritative Parent” to prove further why Authoritative Parenting is one of the best styles and is better for a child than an Authoritarian Parents; for example, how Authoritative Parent listen to their child opinions and take what they said to better themselves while Authoritarian Parents don’t listen to anything their child says because they believe their 100 percent correct.

Authoritarian Parenting: What Happens to the Kids?” Parenting Science – The Science of Child-Rearing and Child Developmentwww.parentingscience.com/authoritarian-parenting.html.

9. Background: This article by Gwen Dewar called “Sympathetic parenting: What happens to the kids?” talks about what happens to the kids with Sympathetic Parents and what they believe happens to them after. It also compares Sympathetic Parents to other parenting styles, Permissive parents, Uninvolved parents, and Authoritative parents.

How I Used It: I used the article by Gwen Dewar called “Sympathetic parenting: What happens to the kids?” to describe the negative aspects and what those parents have to deal with if these types of parents keep teaching their children this way. Children taught like this can end up with problems that can mess with their daily life. Sympathetic parent’s children might end up resenting you when they’re older.

Li, Author Pamela. “What Is Authoritative Parenting? [With Examples].” Parenting For Brain, 29 Oct. 2020, www.parentingforbrain.com/authoritative-parenting/

10. Background: This article called “What Is Authoritative Parenting? [With Examples]” explains what Authoritative Parenting is to the readers, gives a study about children raised by Authoritative Parents and what traits their child has grown up with this parenting style. It also shows examples and compares it to other parenting styles.

How I Used It: This article called “What Is Authoritative Parenting? [With Examples]” helped me further my point on how the Authoritative Parenting style is better than the other parent’s style like the Sympathetic parenting style. The article shows that children taught this way are happier and better lives than Sympathetic children.

Posted in Bibliography, Portfolio HailTheGreat8, x Annotated Bibliography | 4 Comments

Definition Rewrite-rowanstudent24

Animal Abuse as a Result of Domestic Violence

Domestic violence in the home significantly impacts the occurrence of animal abuse. Some major questions surrounding the issue of animal abuse are “What are the main reasons that it occurs?” and,  “Is there a particular cause?” There may be a variety of things impacting poor treatment of animals, but one of the causes may be domestic violence and/or a poor home environment that includes parents being negative role models for their children regarding animal treatment. Children will observe their parents’ treatment of pets and if it is negative or abusive, they learn that this is “the way you handle pets in this home”. This in turn causes a lack of education to children on how to properly care for pets or animals in their home.

To take this idea a little further, research indicates that violence within families and animal abuse are linked to each other. Many people think of their pets as family members and if an abuser feels that way, there is nothing to stop them from abusing their family members or pets. According to the author of “Animal Abuse, Family Violence, and Child Well-being: A Review,” Sarah McPhedran, states that “Animals may become victims of violence in troubled homes because they are thought of as property.” She also comments that other people believe violence extends to pets because they are thought of as family members. It seems there are two kinds of people that can be abusers. The first are those who think of their pets as property and the second are those abusers who consider pets to be part of their family. If they abuse their family members, that automatically could mean they become abusers of their pets as well. 

Desiring the ability to have dominance or control over others can also contribute to animal abuse. By abusing an animal, the abuser believes they are showing dominance and control to intimidate or control other people. It can also be present in relationships as well. According to McPhedran, in the article, “Animal Abuse, Family Violence, and Child Wellbeing: A Review,” she states “That it is common for women in shelters to talk about companion animal abuse , and suggest that women may delay leaving abusive relationships out of fear for the wellbeing of their pets.” Many domestic violence victims get stuck in this cycle due to fear regarding abusers threats to harm the victim or other family members and pets. McPhedran also states in the article that “In the United States, Ascione’s (1998) widely cited research found that 71% of 38 women in a Utah shelter, who owned a pet, reported that their partner had threatened to, or had actually harmed, that pet.” The fact that abusive partners threaten to abuse family pets significantly impacts the occurrence of animal abuse. According to Aleksandar Hrubenj in his article “37 Deeply Disturbing Animal Abuse Statistics and Facts,” he states, “The animal abuse and domestic violence statistics show a clear correlation between domestic violence and animal abuse. Victims of domestic violence have reported that in the great majority of cases their abuser has also maltreated their pet.” Research indicates that an abusive home environment can increase the chance that an abuser would mistreat a family pet.

Home environment and how family pets are treated in the home also impacts the occurrence of animal abuse. Poor treatment of family pets can be a learned behavior. So a child in this type of home environment, can learn to treat animals poorly if their parents were abusive to family pets. In his article,  “37 Deeply Disturbing Animal Abuse Statistics and Facts”, Aleksandar Hrubenj states, “Animal abuse is very common in families with child abuse. Unfortunately, abuse leads to more abuse, so statistics show that 26% of the people who abuse animals were abused in their childhood. Children who witness domestic violence are three times more likely to abuse animals.” Children observe how their parents treat each other and learn from that relationship as well. If that relationship is abusive then the children grow up believing that this is the way you treat other living things. That can significantly impact an occurrence of animal abuse. According to McPhedran in the same article, she states that “In the Utah shelter study, 22 women had children, and 32% (or 7 women) reported that one or more of their children had abused or killed companion animals.” Children are learning these behaviors in their home environment from their parents, which can continue the cycle of abuse through to the next generation.  

Animal abuse also continues to occur because some veterinarians are failing to report suspected abuse. Some veterinarians choose to report it while others don’t. According to Georgina Mills, who wrote the article, “Reporting cases of animal abuse,” she states that “A study carried out by psychologists at the University of Kent, found that almost a third of the vets had suspected at least one incident of animal abuse in the past year, but only half of those had reported cases to authorities.” Based on this information it seems that veterinarians are not getting enough training and therefore are lacking the confidence and skills to make the authorities aware of the suspected animal abuse. Mills also states in her article that ” Those with self-belief were more likely to report cases of suspected abuse; this self-belief tended to come from training and experience.” Mills also stated that in the United Kingdom, Vets only receive two hours of training on this subject when in school. Vets should receive more training on this subject just because animal abuse happens more frequently than one would think.

Animal Abuse has been linked to other poor behaviors as well. According to Thomas J. Mowen and John H. Boman, they state in their article “Animal Abuse among High-Risk Youth: A Test of Agnew’s Theory,” that “Animal abuse has been tied to other deviant behaviors including interpersonal violence, illegal gun possession, substance use, and antisocial behaviors later on in life.” Unfortunately, a negative home environment where abuse or domestic violence is present, seems to indicate a higher risk of animal abuse in future generations. 

References

Mcphedran, S. (2009). Animal abuse, family violence, and child wellbeing: A review. Journal of Family Violence, 24(1), 41-52. doi:http://dx.doi.org.ezproxy.rowan.edu/10.1007/s10896-008-9206-3

Hrubenja, A. (2020, July 14). 37 Deeply Disturbing Animal Abuse Statistics & Facts. Retrieved November 4, 2020, from https://petpedia.co/animal-abuse-statistics/

Georgina Mills. Reporting cases of animal abuse. (2019). The Veterinary Record, 185(17), 524. doi:http://dx.doi.org.ezproxy.rowan.edu/10.1136/vr.l6294

Thomas J. Mowen, John H. Boman. (2020) Explaining Animal Abuse Among Adolescents: The Role of Speciesism. Journal of Interpersonal Violence 36, pages 088626052095964. https://www-tandfonline-com.ezproxy.rowan.edu/doi/full/10.1080/01639625.2019.1595373?scroll=top&needAccess=true

Posted in Definition Rewrite, Portfolio RowanStudent24, rowanstudent24 | Leave a comment