Safer Saws part 2 — Dale Hamstra

1. Manufacturer – “A low percentage of the 30,000 annual table saw injuries (in the U.S.) are due to contact with the blade”

This would be an evaluation claim. Bosch is saying that very few of the annual table saw injuries actually result from touching the blade. The majority end up resulting from kickback. This is a strong claim because it is saying that the SafeSaw will not prevent the majority of injuries

2. Customers – “Current table saw safety standards have proven ineffective in protecting consumers” — National Consumers League

This is an evaluation claim. They are saying that the current safety measures are not enough. on its own it is not a very persuasive claim, but with more support it becomes a very strong point.

3. Industry spokes people – “Every commercial job site and institutional shop should be equipped with this type of saw” — Larry Okrend

This is a proposal claim. He believes that every shop should have this technology. It is a strong claim, that makes sense. However, it is not convincing enough on its own.

4. Consumer Safety advocates – “The benefits of improving table saw safety clearly outweigh the costs” — National Consumer League

This would be a proposal claim. They are saying that the benefit outweighs the cost. This is not a strong  claim because it is not necessarily true that the benefit will outweigh the costs.

5. Injured Plaintiffs – “Wec said his permanent and traumatic injury could have been prevented”

This would be a consequential claim because he is saying his injury is because of the fact he was not using a safe saw. This claim is not very strong on its own. He is not being very specific about why it could have been prevented. However, it would make a good argument with more support.

6. Personal Injury Lawyers – “The manufacturers have refused to adopt it”

This is a evaluation claim because he is trying to say that the SawStop is out there and the manufacturer refuses to use it. This is a weak claim because there is more behind it than the manufacturer saying no. There could be very good reasons why the manufacturer does not want it.

7. Government Officials – “Consumers suffered approximately 67,300 medically treated blade contact injuries annually in 2007 and 2008”

This would be a consequential claim because she is saying that 67,300 people had blade contact injuries because there was not SawStop in place. If there was SawStop in place many of these injuries would not have happened. This is a strong claim because it gives solid numbers and facts, and clearly portrays that SawStop would prevent many of these injuries.

8. News Reporters – “Gass’ saw uses an electrical sensor to detect when the blade touches flesh instead of wood. ”

This is a definitional claim. He is defining how the safe saw works. It is a strong claim that makes sense and provides a persuasive argument.

 

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Safer Saws (2) ~ Tony Shilling

  1. Manufacturers:  “The system can tell the difference between your hand and wood.  So, if you’re cutting wood and you accidentally run your hand into the blade, it will stop it so quickly you just get a little nick instead of maybe taking some fingers off.”  Gass’s claim is definitional, as it only tells us what the SawStop is supposed to do.  However, that is the problem; he only provides “supposed” information, and not anything to the contrary or even suggesting that the technology will falsely trip (i.e. it is not a 100% guarantee).
  2. Customers: “Even so, I know that technology alone can’t eliminate risk. There’s no substitute for staying alert and focused and strictly adhering to safe work practices.”  This is a resemblance and proposal claim, with the handyman Larry Okrend comparing the SawStop with other means of safety, namely paying attention, and proposing that instead of investing money, customers should be focusing more on personal responsibility and knowing what they are doing.  The claim is quite effective in that it is practically attacking without naming anyone specific; Okrend is right in suggesting that stupidity is a greater source of injury than the saws themselves.
  3. Industry Spokespeople:  “SawStop is currently available in the marketplace to any consumer who chooses to purchase it,” ~Susan Young.  Young’s statement is direct and to the point, an evaluational claim on the market and a definitional claim to customers, as SawStop is readily available.  However, Young’s language allows her to suggest that while, or since, it is available for public purchase there is no need for it to be adopted into mass-produced saws.  This is very clever on her part, as she maintains her people’s stance while not denoting the ability of the SawStop.
  4. Consumer Safety Advocates: “Approximately 40,000 Americans go to hospital emergency rooms every year with injuries sustained while operating table saws.  About 4,000 of those injuries – or more than 10 every day – are amputations.  Table saw injuries cost the United States approximately $2 billion every year.”  This is a definitional claim made for background of the table-saw-injury field.  The National Consumers League uses accurate data in order to state how many saw injuries occur in America and what the overall cost is for the nation.  Not only is this a fair analysis, it provides numerical data for accuracy.
  5. Injured Plaintiffs: “The plaintiff claims that ‘flesh detection and braking technology’ and ‘user friendly blade guard(s)’ have been available for years. The flesh detection technology stops a blade instantly when it is touched by human flesh.” This is a definitional claim; it is no secret that SawStop has been on the market for nearly a decade, nor what it is “supposed” to do.  As merely describing the SawStop, it is quite effective while still being vague towards whether or not the technology actually works and the issues Gass has faced with the market.
  6. Personal Injury Lawyers: “By agreeing not [to] employ such safer alternatives, defendant and its competitors attempted to assure that those alternatives would not become ‘state of the art,’ thereby attempting to insulate themselves from liability for placing a defective product on the market.”  The claim here is causal, stating that the reasoning for not putting out saws with SawStop technology is merely to avoid any impending lawsuits for injury.  However, it completely neglects the gigantic royalty settlement that Gass is looking for, the cost of implementing the tech, and the faults of StopSaw itself.  The goal here, rightfully so as they are lawyers, is to merely dehumanize saw manufacturers.
  7. Government Officials:  “Based on the injury data obtained in the 2007 and 2008 CPSC special study, our staff’s injury cost model projected that consumers suffered approximately 67,300 medically treated blade contact injuries annually in 2007 and 2008—with an associated injury cost of $2.36 billion dollars in each of those two years.” This claim seems definitional, while the bit at the end gives it an evaluational feel, as Chairman Inez Tenenbaum provides insight to 2007-2008 table-saw injuries data, while having an insinuating tone that it may not be the fault of the consumer and could have been prevented.
  8. News Reporters: “No offense, but I don’t think this is a move by Bosch (or any other tool manufacturer for that matter) to prevent safety devices, but simply a move to prevent the unintended consequences of adding mandatory safety devices that would, in some instances, double the price of entry level power saws.”  This is an evaluational claim, analyzing what the saw manufacturer, in this case Bosch, meant against what was alleged by the injury lawyers.  The claim is much more effective and fair to Bosch, as it takes into account the other factors involved in their decision, rather than merely insinuating avoiding lawsuits.
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Safer Saws pt. 2 – Jonathan Otero

  1. Manufactures:

According to the Power Tool Institute, “A low percentage of the 30,000 annual (U.S.) table saw injuries are due to contact with the blade.“

This is a definitional claim which argues that adopting the SawStop technology would not yield in a significant decrease of table saw injuries. I think this is a very interesting and strong argument for the manufacturers. What good would come of mandating an expensive technology promising safety if it would marginally decrease injuries?

 

Customers:

Larry Okrend states, “The greatly reduced risk of injury (and the associated medical costs) more than justifies the saw’s higher price.”

This is a proposal claim. It states that the higher cost is definitely worth it because it’s buying added safety for the user. It’s a very effective claim because it secretively raises a valid question: Can a price be put on safety?

 

Industry Spokespeople:

The Power Tool Institute, an industry group that represents Black & Decker and Bosch, said that the price of their table saws with the safety devices would “increase dramatically,”

This is a consequential claim made by the Power Tool institute. It’s a bold claim and they wish to point out that adding this patented technology to the saws would cause the prices of all saws to rise to such a point that it would be very difficult for an individual to purchase saws meeting industry standards.

 

Consumer Safety Advocates:

The NCL says, “The benefits of improving table saw safety clearly outweigh the costs”

This is a proposal claim that the National Consumer’s League argues against saw manufacturers. With this, they claim that the price of mandating SawStop is well worth the safety of consumers. However, I don’t see why this should make SawStop mandatory. I do agree that the safety is great to have and is definitely worth the price. My question is, does that make it right to raise the price of every single saw? I’m sure certain individuals, scarce on income, would go for a cheaper saw and just be sure they operated the saw safely. For consumers liable for themselves, I don’t think saws should have to have this safety measure mandated. This is more appropriate in a work setting in which company owners are responsible for their employees.

 

Injured Plantiffs

Wec says his permanent and “traumatic injury” could have been prevented if Bosch and its competitors had not rejected and fought against the safety technology.

This is a consequential claim. He claims if Bosch Industries had adopted the safer technology, his injury could have been prevented. I don’t think his claim is strong enough because by using the word “could” instead of “would”, a level of certainty is removed from the claim. Thus, the strength of the claim is decreased.

 

Personal Injury Lawyers:

“Table saws cause more injuries than any other woodworking tool”

This is a definition claim that sets Table saws as the most dangerous woodworking tool. It’s a very strong claim and I find it very effective. If table saws are the most dangerous tools, then every step should be taken to make them safer. They’re too dangerous and cause too many injuries that could be prevented if only they were safer.

 

Government Officials:

CHAIRMAN INEZ M. TENENBAU states, “Very serious injuries, including fractures and avulsions, as well as amputations, have changed the lives of tens of thousands of consumers and impacted their families forever.”

This is a consequential claim. It’s a very relevant point in this controversial matter because the injuries left behind by these dangerous machines are indeed permanent. The claim also points out how the tool’s capacity to damage goes beyond that of the body of the consumer; it also reaches to the consumer’s families.

 

New Reporters:

Everett Synder stated, “kickbacks are certainly more dangerous”.

This is a definition claim defining kickbacks as more dangerous than the blade of the saw. This is a very important claim because it challenges the productivity of all of this controversy over a technology that wouldn’t even be tackling the larger danger. Adding SawStop wouldn’t make these saws that much safer except to those individuals careless enough to come into contact with a high-speed sharp blade.

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Can a Cheeseburger Be a Placebo?

This is really hard to believe. You’re all familiar with the placebo effect, I imagine. Patients engaged as subjects in a study to test the effectiveness of a new medication routinely receive one of two regimens: half get the actual medicine; half get a placebo that looks like the real thing but contains no medication. If the medicine is effective, of course, the half that got it get better. But just as often, the half that took the placebo also achieve some improvement in their condition because they believed they were taking medication that could cure them.

It has always been assumed that the patients’ belief that they were receiving curative doses contributed to their healing. But a new study suggests that even patients who are told they’re receiving the placebo can be cured. Let me say that again. Study participants who are told they’re taking useless pills nonetheless gain a therapeutic benefit from participating in the study.

Which prompts me to ask, if participation is the key and the pill is useless, couldn’t I swallow a button instead of a pill and still be cured? Or better yet, couldn’t I eat a cheeseburger each time I was supposed to take a pill?

Here’s the story from the December 27, 2010 New York Times.

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Snake Eater ~ Cynthia Harrell

Because, who doesn’t like Cold-War Spy music?

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Saw Stop 2 Aime Lonsdorf

1. Who: Steve Gass

Claim: “The blade has a sensor that detects electrical conductivity. A piece of wood is not very conductive, so the saw goes right through it. A salty, wet finger is conductive… that triggers the system.”

This is an effective definitional claim. It is effective because it concisely states what makes the saw different from other saws: the electrical conductivity sensor and, what the product is is meant to do: cut through low conductive products such as wood, but not highly conductive fingers.

From: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=cTUOhYcw4ZY&feature=g-vrec&context=G2e80c12RVAAAAAAAACw

2. Who: Injured Plaintiffs

Claim: “..flesh detection brake offered Bosch a licensing agreement in 2000 during a Power Tool Institute meeting, but Bosch rejected the offer.”

This is an evaluation claim. The plaintiff blames Bosh Tools for “rejecting” the product; according to him, the tool company was offered the SawStop technology and declined to use it. One of the major reasons the company denied the offer was because the SawStop would raise costs of their saws in comparison to other companies. This claim is effective because it states when the flesh detecting brake was offered during a meeting to get the product licensed and on the market and when the idea was “rejected.” The use of the word rejected gives the saw company’s decision to decline the offer a negative connotation. On the other hand, Bosh Tools could refute this claim by saying that the declined the offer for the time being until cheaper alternatives become available and the technology is 100 percent proven.

From: http://www.nclnet.org/health/99-safety/567-facts-at-a-glance-the-inherent-danger-of-table-saws

3. Who: Government Officials

Claim: “Today’s unanimous vote by the Commission to approve an advance notice of proposed rulemaking (ANPR) on table saw blade contact injuries should send a clear signal to consumers and the industry that the Consumer Product Safety Commission is determined to be part of the solution to reduce the serious number of preventable table saw injuries that occur each year.”

The casual claim states that the table saw contact  blade will be the solution to reducing the number of serious and often fatal table saw injuries that occur each year. The claim is very effective. The “unanimous” decision by the Commission to approve an advance notice of rule making (ANRP) gives the claim credibility. Because the organization is also “determined” to be apart of the “solution” to reduce the amount of “serious” injuries, the claim could easily persuade consumers that without the SawStop technology, a table saw is very dangerous and that there needs to be a stronger push to follow through with getting the product licensed.

From: http://www.cpsc.gov/PR/tenenbaum10052011.pdf

4. Who: Manufacturers

Claim: “A low percentage of the 30,000 annual (U.S.) table saw injuries are due to contact with the blade – most are from kickback.”

This consequential claim is relevant and highly effective to the manufacturer’s arguments because it clearly states that a very low percentage of table saw injuries occur as a result of contact with the blade. Because there are very few injuries that are flesh related, the flesh recognizing technology would be an extra cost to both consumer and manufacturers that would not result in much protection. Although kickbacks might be a large percent of table saw injuries, Steve Grass argues that, with the use of his product, the injuries from the blade could be prevented.

From: http://www.protoolreviews.com/news/editorials/bosch-tools-sawstop-lawsuit

5. Who: Media

Claim: “Um… no doubt”

This is a definitional claim. Here, the author of the article inserted their opinion of the subject matter, claiming that there is no doubt that Bosh Tool and various other power saw manufactures have been avoiding adding the SawStop technology to their items as an extra safety procedure. The claim is neither effective nor ineffective because it is subtly serves as a gateway between two separate statements.

From: http://www.protoolreviews.com/news/editorials/bosch-tools-sawstop-lawsuit

6.Who: Consumers

Claim:“Almost any tool can cause a serious injury when used improperly.”

The claim is made by the editor of Chief HANDY, a hardware magazine. The editor is a reliable and credible source because it is assumed he and the other writers of the magazine have an extensive understanding of power tools. The evaluation claim is effective because it makes the argument that the SawStop technology is worth installing based on the fact that many other power tools can cause an injury to people, as well. Steve Gass and the editor make the argument that by enabling the flesh detecting product, there will be a decrease in the amount of injuries caused by power tools. He states that the product is there to prevent power saw injuries and he hopes that in the future this technology will be used to innovate various other tools.

From:http://www.handymanclub.com/projects/blogs/articletype/articleview/articleid/5879/taking-table-saw-safety-seriously

7. Who: SawStop Advocate

Claim: “They came back and said..’Well, we’ve looked at it, but we’re not interested because safety doesn’t sell,’ ” Gass says.”

The above quote was given by Steve Gass to the author of “If Table Saws Can be Safer, Why Aren’t They?” The author was first introduced to the SawStop technology on a plane ride and has since then been a strong supporter of the product. His editorial piece in favor of the product takes a strong turn when Gass says the above, quoted, evaluational claim. The claim states that the benefits of having safer power saws are not comparable with the possible decline in revenue from the product. The connotation of the quote, and the claim itself contradicts the argument it is trying to make. It was included purposefully by the author to enrage people and make them believe that the companies do not have the public’s best interest at hand.

From: http://www.npr.org/2011/06/18/137258370/if-table-saws-can-be-safer-why-arent-they

8. Who: Industry Lawyers

Claim: “…the price of their table saws with the safety devices would ‘increase dramatically’…”

The casual claim from The Scmidt Law Firm shows a possible problem with the SawStop technology. One effect of using Steve Gass’ product would be the possible price rise, resulting in a dramatic change in consumer tastes. Since prices will rise, the law firm is claiming that there will be a decrease in power saw buyers, decreasing the profits of power tool companies, causing a serious economic problem. The economic issue will only increase as Steve Gass and the SawStop company will have a monopoly on the flesh detecting manufacturing industry.

 

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Why We Still Have Polio

White Paper: Why We Still Have Polio

PROFESSOR’S NOTE: Later in the course, you’ll be asked to produce a White Paper on your chosen research topic. Today, for our fourth reading, I offer you this model of what I hope your own White Papers will be. Like this one, yours will be work-in-progress toward an actual paper, and will organize your thinking for your own benefit and the benefit of early reviewers such as me.

When you’ve read it, and perhaps after some classroom discussion about it, choose a subtopic or small claim in the White Paper you’d like to research and find one strong source using Google, Academic Search Premier, or any web-searching database or engine you’re comfortable using. Publish a new post to identify that source and how what it contains either supports or refutes a claim, or how it contributes to a thesis you find worthwhile.

THE TOPIC BACKGROUND: POLIO
Polio (short for poliomyelitis) is an infectious disease that rarely kills but cripples about 1 in 200 of its victims. The virus invades the nervous system and can lead to irreversible paralysis in just hours. Adults fight off the infection more effectively than children, most often children younger than five. There is no cure, but there have been safe and effective vaccines for more than 50 years. By their nature, vaccines need only be administered once to be effective for a lifetime, so the strategy to eliminate polio once and for all from the planet is to vaccinate every child until transmission stops. If the world can be made polio-free for a moment, it will remain polio-free forever.

The virus enters the body through the mouth, multiplies in the intestine, and is passed to others through the feces; therefore, it ravages particularly countries with poor sanitation and hygiene. Children not well toilet-trained are a danger, but even flies can passively pass the virus from feces to food. A single case of polio, if it fails to migrate to other vulnerable children, can die out in that community forever. Complicating matters, most infected individuals show no symptoms and can silently pass the virus on unwittingly until it dies out in their bodies naturally. Therefore, a single reported case is usually taken as evidence of an epidemic.

EFFECTIVENESS OF VACCINATION
A simple, inexpensive, oral vaccination developed in 1961, admininsterable by non-physician volunteers, is the primary method of preventing polio among children. The vaccination produces antibodies in the blood to all three types of poliovirus which prevent the virus from spreading to the nervous system. A single dose costs less than a dime. In a community where the polio virus would be spread through feces contact, so can the immunization be passively spread through the same mechanism. A single dose protects most recipients. Three doses protects 95% of recipients, probably for life. 100% immunity, while ideal, is not necessary to eradicate the virus, which will naturally die out if it cannot spread through a population.

COUNTERINTUTIVITY NOTE
In about 1 case per 3 million, the vaccine virus can itself cause paralysis. (A current theory is that paralysis results in recipients with existing immune deficiencies.) This risk, while devastating, is “accepted” by administering agencies as a necessary cost of saving “hundreds of thousands” of children each year from crippling.

ERADICATION EFFORTS
Polio was a most feared disease in industrialized countries, paralyzing thousands of children every year, until the development of vaccines in the 1960s and the beginning of routine immunization in countries around the world. From the Global Polio Eradication Initiative website:

In 1988, when the Global Polio Eradication Initiative began, polio paralysed more than 1000 children worldwide every day. Since then, 2.5 billion children have been immunized against polio thanks to the cooperation of more than 200 countries and 20 million volunteers, backed by an international investment of more than US$ 8 billion. Today, polio has been eliminated from most of the world and only four countries remain endemic. In 2009, fewer than 2000 cases were reported for the entire year.

What bad news does that terse report hide? The four endemic countries are Afghanistan, India, Nigeria, and Pakistan. But four other countries no longer on the endemic list have re-established active and persistent transmissions following an importation: Angola, Chad, Democratic Republic of Congo, and Sudan. Add to that the countries currently experiencing outbreaks due to importation (Congo, Kazakhstan, Liberia, Mali, Mauritania, and 8 others including Russia) and the challenge of containing the virus long enough to eradicate it becomes obvious.

SUITABILITY OF POLIO FOR ERADICATION
Polio is a perfect candidate for eradication because the virus infects only humans, is carried in the body for a short period of time, and has an effective intervention. “We have great vaccines against polio,” says Harry Hull, chief of the World Health Organization’s (WHO’s) Polio Eradication Program. The WHO-led campaign uses the oral “Sabin” vaccine because it is cheap–8 cents a dose–can be easily administered by mouth by an untrained volunteer, and produces high levels of intestinal immunity.

IMPEDIMENTS TO ERADICATION
An editorial in the journal Lancet, SEP 2006, indicates that polio vaccination campaigns have met with distrust in communities over the years. Incorrect but understandable fears that mass vaccination is a conspiracy by the developing world against poor countries complicate the efforts of volunteers to conduct one-day mass immunization efforts which have been the most effective part of the WHO plan for years. Just as important as funding, volunteers, and sufficient doses, is building trust among poor and often suspicious people through sustained efforts.

STARTLINGLY EFFECTIVE SINGLE-DAY EFFORTS FROM THE JOURNAL SCIENCE
One early morning, millions of people across India, from the snow-peaked Himalayas to the deserts of Radjastan, set off by foot, camel, bike, car, or helicopter to run polio vaccination posts in 650,000 Indian villages. By the time this army of volunteers arrived home at the end of the day, 127 million children under the age of 5 had been immunized against this crippling disease. “Everybody said it just couldn’t happen. And, yet it does,” says Harry Hull, chief of the World Health Organization’s (WHO’s) Polio Eradication Program. Initiatives such as the Polio Eradication Program show that WHO’s foot soldiers can make a huge difference to the majority of the world’s population without adequate health care.

At first, the campaign to rid the world of a disease that has left some 10 million to 20 million people paralyzed did not seem to be making an impact. But in 1995, WHO and its partner, the United Nations Children’s Fund (UNICEF), adopted the new strategy of blitzing the entire child population of a country in a single day. In 1996, such National Immunization Days vaccinated more than 420 million children–almost two-thirds of the world’s children under five–against polio. These dramatic campaigns captured the imagination of the world and have even persuaded hardened fighters in war-torn countries such as Afghanistan, Sudan, and Sri Lanka to stop fighting for a day so that their children can be immunized.

TERRIBLE SETBACKS: NIGERIA 2003.
By the end of 2003, international effort had eliminated polio from all but 6 countries in the world. In the 6 remaining countries, the disease was highly localized. But a series of misunderstandings about the safety and intentions of the vaccinators shut down the campaign, caused a nationwide epidemic, and led to reinfection of many polio-free countries. For the first time in history, more countries suffered importations of polio than were actually endemic for the disease, putting the entire eradication initiative at risk.

In Kano, northern Nigeria, local leaders began theories that the vaccine contained HIV and anti-fertility agents. Very soon, the local media were reporting the popular conspiracy theory that the polio campaign was an effort to depopulate the north of the country. Within months, political leaders in Kano and adjoining states had suspended the polio campaigns; almost immediately, hundreds of children had been paralyzed as epidemic polio returned. The virus rapidly spread from Kano to the megacity of Lagos and beyond, reinfecting polio-free countries, costing over US $100 million in emergency response activities. One of Africa’s most impressive achievements in health and international cooperation was undone by a rumor.

On January 15, 2004, the leaders of the World Health Organization and UNICEF met with the health ministers of the 6 remaining polio-infected countries and 3 of the recently reinfected countries to issue the Geneva Declaration on the Eradication of Poliomyelitis, stating that 2004 presented the best, and possibly last, chance to achieve this global public good. The declaration introduced an aggressive plan to immunize a total of 250 million children during door-to-door polio immunization campaigns in each country within the next 12 months. The Nigerian minister outlined an extensive program of joint work with Kano state authorities to resolve the remaining doubts about the safety of the polio vaccine and then allow the resumption of the polio immunization campaigns. In 2011, polio still exists in the world. Is now, once again, our “best, perhaps last, chance” to eradicate the disease?

THE NAGGING AUTISM CASE
From JSPN (Journal for Specialists in Pediatric Nursing) A decade ago, a British researcher and 12 coauthors published a paper describing abnormal gastrointestinal features among 12 children who had been referred to their clinic. All children had some type of developmental disorder, and in 9 of the children, a diagnosis of autism had been made. In 6 of the 9 autistic children, either the parent or a physician had linked the onset of developmental regression with the receipt of the MMR vaccine for measles, mumps and rubella (Wakefield et al., 1998). In 2000, a second paper was published, in which measles virus RNA fragments were found in 3 of the 9 children. (Kawashima et al., 2000). This odd, tiny, substantially anecdotal evidentiary link is the basis for fears persisting until today that somehow measles vaccinations cause autism.

In 2004, 10 of the 11 coauthors of Wakefield’s original paper asked to “formally retract the interpretation placed upon these findings . . .” However, these initial reports of a possible relationship between the MMR vaccine and the onset of autism received significant attention, and in England, measles vaccinations dropped considerably.

IS ERADICATION EVEN POSSIBLE? THE SMALLPOX EXAMPLE:
A brief query of Rowan’s MEDLINE database yields 232 results for a simple search “smallpox eradication.” I suspect I’ll be able to find adequate historical information to support the theory that if any infectious disease can be eradicated from the planet (as smallpox was), then polio can be.

TOPICS FOR SMALLER PAPERS:
If there’s a class difference between polio and smallpox that interferes with this conclusion, I may be able to devote one of my smaller papers to detailing that difference, either to minimize it or to recommend a different approach for eradicating polio than was successful for smallpox.

WILL COMPULSORY VACCINATION BE REQUIRED?
Regarding the successful eradication of smallpox from the planet, an article in the May 8, 2010 Lancet offers insight I may need to use.

Force was, of course, sometimes used to achieve immunisation targets…. Organised and violent resistance during epidemics could provoke ferocious responses from vaccination teams…. Opposition to vaccination was widely regarded as being dangerous to communities in regions that had been freed from the scourge, and this was seen as sufficient justification for the use of compulsion. Compulsory vaccination schemes were implemented with the assistance of police and paramilitary forces which had considerable societal support.

CURRENT STATE OF THE RESEARCH PAPER
The thrust of my research continues to convince me that the effort to once and for all eradicate polio from the planet is a worthwhile and achievable global good. Despite excellent arguments to the contrary (1. that the money could be used to alleviate more suffering more immediately by attacking less recalcitrant diseases; 2. that human beings will never universally accept the necessity and efficacy of the effort and will therefore sabotage the effort; 3. that eradication is a myth since new strains will always replace the old before the old dies out), I will propose continued and even stepped-up efforts to eliminate this virus from the planet once and for all.

I feel strongly that the tiny risk of transmitted paralysis to one child in 3 million is “acceptable,” God forgive me for saying so. I also insist that it might be necessary to compel the reluctant last however-many-thousands to submit to vaccination against their wishes. I recognize the moral dilemma, but think it might be forgivable to lie about that tiny risk if to do so put a rumor to rest that threatened the entire program.

There is much reading yet to do. Topics I’ll be investigating include the success rates of various vaccines (there are four); more opinions on the origins of the Nigerian rumor (there are many); details of the life-cycle of the poliomyelitis virus (when will we know it’s really, really gone for good?); ancillary techniques for immunization (can we use bad sanitation to our advantage?). I love the counterintuitive result that immunization can be spread accidentally the same way the virus is spread!

AFTERWORD:
Understand that my White Paper today is a snapshot of a work-in-progress and entirely acceptable on those terms. It’s not aimless by any means; there’s a good bit of rigor in the categories and the details of my report so far; but it’s not at all complete. And that’s OK. And it will be OK for yours too when it’s time for you to write one (so long as I see some rigor, and very little aimlessness).

ASSIGNMENT SPECIFICS

  • Read the above White Paper.
  • Follow a lead from any section to do an internet search for additional information on any aspect of the topic that intrigues you.
  • Identify the search technique you used.
  • Provide a link to your source.
  • Quote, summarize, or paraphrase the material you found useful.
  • Briefly describe what claim or argument your source material supports.

GRADE DETAILS

  • DUE TUE FEB 07 before class.
  • Customary late penalties. (0-24 hours 10%) (24-48 hours 20%) (48+ hours, 0 grade)
  • Process Writing category (15%)
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StopSaw – Tabitha Corrao

1. Manufacturers- Steve Gass stated, “The system can tell the difference between your finger and the wood.” This claim is a proposal claim. I find this very persuasive because it amazes me that technology has become so advanced that it can lessen your chance of getting injured from a saw.

2. Customers- Larry Okrend stated “I think mandating SawStop’s technology across the board is unnecessary and counterproductive.” This is an evaluation claim. I don’t think Okrend’s claim is persuasive because he does give solid proof as to why SawStop’s technology is “unnecessary and counterproductive.”

3.Industry Spokespeople- Power Tool Industry (PTI) says “The requirement would be too costly.” This is a consequential claim. I think PTI is not thinking about how the requirements could potentially save industry companies from being sued for not having the newest safety technology.

4. Consumer Safety Advocates- The National Consumers League claims “Table saw injuries cost the United States approximately $2 billion every year” This is a definitional claim. I believe the claim is weak by itself but a little evidence or proof it’d be good to help prove why StopSaw’s technology should be adopted into the tooling industry.

5. Injured Plaintiffs-Ryszard Wec claims “By agreeing not [to] employ such safer alternatives, defendant and its competitors attempted to assure that those alternatives would not become ‘state of the art,’ thereby attempting to insulate themselves from liability for placing a defective product on the market.” This is an evaluation claim. I believe this claim is true because saw companies should be held reliable for not taking advantage of the not so new safety technology.

6. Personal Injury Lawyers- The Schmidt Firm said “manufacturers are facing dozens of lawsuits brought forth by people whose injuries could have been prevented had SawStop or similar safety mechanisms been in place.” This is a consequential claim. Manufacturers are being sued for not taking advantage of the technology.

7. Government Officials- Chairman Inez M. Tenenbaum U.S. Consumer Product Safety Commissions said “…the injury statistics and disturbing natures of these life-altering, yet preventable injuries were unacceptable. They are even more unacceptable now” This is a evaluation claim.  I believe government officials were so disturbed by the statistics because there is a solution to lower the statistics and the tooling industry aren’t taking that opportunity

8.News Reporters-NPR said “Let consumers decide.” This is a proposal claim. NPR’s proposal depending on concumers decision would help or not help regulate the safety technology. Assuming that the greater the demand the greater it becomes regulated.

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Grade Conference Schedule

I have produced a Google Doc you can view and edit to make or check your grade conference appointments. Conferences are not required, but grades are only delivered at conferences. You may make as many appointments as you like.

Some half-hour appointments are available on the schedule. If you need more time, put your name in more than one block.

Follow this link to the document.

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Safer Saws Part 2 – Marty Bell

1. Manufacturer:

From: Ask me how I made this link, Marty..

“A low percentage of the 30,000 annual (U.S.) table saw injuries are due to contact with the blade – most are from kickback. ” This type of claim is a evaluation claim. This claim is relevant to the overall argument that the SawStop technology should not be mandatory. If most of the injuries do not even include contact with the blade it should not be mandatory to implement the SawStop technique that will just cause manufacturers and customers more money. They should be more focused on finding a way to reduce kickback rather than focusing on injuries involving the blade. This claim is shows that the SawStop technology is not necessary by stating that it is only a low percentage of the annual table saw injuries .

2. Customers:

From:http://www.handymanclub.com/projects/blogs/articletype/articleview/articleid/5879/taking-table-saw-safety-seriously

Larry Okrend, editor in Chief of HANDY magazine, made the following claim. “Almost any tool can cause a serious injury when used improperly.” This claim is a evaluation claim. This helps his argument that mandating SawStop’s technology across the board is unnecessary by claiming that any tool can cause serious injury. But, Steve Gass never claims that you can not be seriously injured by any tool. This claim is not effective because no one is arguing that you can not be injured by other tools. Steve Gass is only trying to make table saws safer he is not claiming anything about the other tools. Larry’s claim is not helpful and he should focus more on table saw’s specifically when trying to prove his point.

3. Industry Spokespeople:

From:http://www.protoolreviews.com/news/editorials/bosch-tools-sawstop-lawsuit

“Consumer choice can dictate whether this technology, and its associated potential issues and added cost, will gain widespread acceptance by consumers.” This is a proposal claim. This is saying that the customer can decide wether or not they want to pay the added cost for the SawStop technology. This claim backs up the major issue that it should not be mandatory by leaving the choice up to the individual consumer. This is extremely relevant and effective because if someone believes the technology is necessary they will be willing to pay more. If not, someone should not be made to pay the extra cost for the SawStop technology if they do not want to.

4. Consumer Safety Advocates:

From:http://www.nclnet.org/health/99-safety/567-facts-at-a-glance-the-inherent-danger-of-table-saws

“Approximately 40,000 Americans go to hospital emergency rooms every year with injuries sustained while operating table saws.” This is a definitional claim that states a fact about injuries caused by table saws. Showing how large the number of Americans that go to the emergency room because of table saws makes this claim appealing. It helps emphasize how dangerous table saws are. By showing how dangerous they are it is proving why the SawStop technology is needed.

5. Injured Plaintiffs:

From:http://www.courthousenews.com/2009/12/10/Injured_Man_Says_Bosch_Tool_Lobbied_Feds_to_Keep_Safer_Power_Saws_off_the_Market.htm

Ryszard Wec claims “the technology could have prevented his 2007 injury from a Bosch miter saw.”  This is a evaluation claim. Wec blames Bosch for his injury because they were offered the SawStop technology and did not use it. This claim is effected because it provides a specific example of a serious injury that could have been prevented by the SawStop technology. This allows you to feel for Wec and helps persuade people to believe the technology should be mandatory. It also makes it apparent that not having the technology could cause legal issues for manufacturers, which may cause them to implement the SawStop technology.

6. Personal Injury Lawyers:

From:http://www.schmidtlaw.com/table-saw-injury-lawyer/

“Unfortunately, the manufacturers have refused to adopt it.” This is both a proposal claim and Categorical claim. It is a proposal claim by saying that it is unfortunate that manufacturers have refused to adopt it. It is categorical by stating  that the manufacturers have refused to adopt the technology. This claim is not relevant or effective. By just saying that it is unfortunate does nothing for anyone. Without any proof or reason to why it is unfortunate the argument is not effective. This claim is very dull and does not bring stand out or bring anything in particular to your attention. The table saw injury lawyer is just stating and opinion with no support. It is not unfortunate for careful people or people who can not afford to pay extra for the SawStop technology.

7. Government Officials:

From:http://www.cpsc.gov/PR/tenenbaum10052011.pdf

Chairman Inez M. Tenenbaum says “Very serious injuries, including fractures and avulsions, as well as amputations, have changed the lives of tens of thousands of consumers and impacted their families forever.” This is a definitional claim becuase it is stating what serious injuries can be caused by table saws. It is also consequential claim by claiming that table saws impact those that are injured and their families forever. This claim plays to your emotions and allows you to feel how table saw injuries have negatively impacted consumers lives. This kind of claim is very effective because people are easly persuaded by their emotions. It is also very relevant by stating how serious the injuries that can be caused by table saws without the SawStop technology are.

8. News Reporters:

From:http://www.npr.org/2011/06/18/137258370/if-table-saws-can-be-safer-why-arent-they

This claim is from NPR’s Chris Arnold. ” It turned out he had a pretty amazing story to tell.” This is a proposal claim. He is saying that how Steve Gass came up with the SawStop technology is amazing. This is not very relevant in proving why the technology needs to be mandatory. This claim is completely off topic and not compelling. It assumes that everyone thinks the story is amazing. This claim does not persuade anyone or make anyone realize why SawStop needs to be on all table saws.

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