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Casual- Sonnypetro

I feel like I am doing good right now but I definitely could use another person for some help. I’d like to get another view point on my research. I feel like I have a good cause and effect with … Continue reading

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Open Strong- gabythefujoshi

Working Opening 1: Americans need to stop talking about mental health. The mental health advocates and practitioners that have educated to many the importance of mental illnesses are predominately White Americans. Looking at Ted talks and television, there are mainly … Continue reading

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Causal – PardonmyFrench

I am having a little trouble deciding the right topic for my essay. What I have so far is I could say social media decreases self-esteem in college students and therefor increases the risk of suicide. I could also link … Continue reading

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Causal-rowanstudent24

I’m not 100% sure where I want to start but I am researching how broken homes can be the cause of animal abuse. I have also found that there are several other causes as well that really convey the animal … Continue reading

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Safer Saws Tcarter101

The inventor “In 2015, 4,700 people in the US lost a finger or other body part to table-saw incidents. Most of those injuries didn’t have to happen, thanks to technology invented in 1999 by entrepreneur Stephen Gass.”  Reluctant Manufacturers:-” the … Continue reading

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Visual Rhetoric- PardonmyFrench

00:00-00:02 In the first second of the video you see a beaten-up van pull into the driveway. The van is blue, has a tree through the back window, broken taillights, a mirror that is falling off, multiple dents and many … Continue reading

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Visual Rhetoric- gabythefujoshi

0:00-0:01 From the first frame we see red puppet that resembles Elmo, but with a brown bread and hair. Their wearing a blue, button down shirt with gold-colored stripes. The shirt reminds me of a typical dad shirt which I … Continue reading

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