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Rebuttal Rewrite- MysteryLimbo

Why we need to stop mass incarceration before it’s too late. The United States is the developed, richest, and sophisticated nation in the world and is what the rest of the world views as a role model even though mass … Continue reading

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Casual Rewrite- MysteryLimbo

The Prison Loophole The justice system and prison sentencing date back to ancient civilizations keeping prisoners in work camps or prisons, or even to execute them. Most forms of those previous incarceration/confinement methods are now unjust in most countries including … Continue reading

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