Enough About You–Daphneblake

Original:

Money seems to have a big role in our society; you can’t do much or get far if you don’t have any. Money is valuable in different ways, even when you don’t see it physically. In today’s society you must have faith in the government and in the banking system that your money is being handled in the proper manner; if not, then you would have to hide all of your money under your mattress or around your house. I have no clue what happens in the banks, or how they take care of your money. I always thought money was simple; you either have some or you don’t—that’s it. However, being introduced to this assignment, the Yap Fei, US gold, French francs, Brazilian cruzeros, and debit accounts now seem similar. You don’t actually see your money being transferred. When you get paid, you aren’t handed cash, you don’t receive a physical check, the money’s all directly transferred to your bank account, and you just have to trust that you got more money.

Revised:

Money seems to have a big role in our society; people can’t do much or get far if they don’t have any. Money is valuable in different ways, even when it can’t be seen physically. In today’s society, citizens must have faith in the government and in the banking system that their money is being handled in the proper manner; if not, then they would have to hide all of their money under their mattress or around their house. I have no clue what happens in the banks, or how they take care of money. I always thought money was simple; people either have some or they don’t—that’s it. However, being introduced to this assignment, the Yap Fei, US gold, French francs, Brazilian cruzeros, and debit accounts now seem similar. No one actually sees their money being transferred. When getting paid, the person isn’t handed cash, they don’t receive a physical check, the money’s all directly transferred to their bank account, and they just have to trust that they got more money.

This entry was posted in daphneblake, Enough About You. Bookmark the permalink.

1 Response to Enough About You–Daphneblake

  1. davidbdale says:

    Your last two sentences have a single remnant of 2nd Person language AND some confusion about whether one or more people are being paid.

Leave a Reply to davidbdale Cancel reply

Fill in your details below or click an icon to log in:

WordPress.com Logo

You are commenting using your WordPress.com account. Log Out /  Change )

Google photo

You are commenting using your Google account. Log Out /  Change )

Twitter picture

You are commenting using your Twitter account. Log Out /  Change )

Facebook photo

You are commenting using your Facebook account. Log Out /  Change )

Connecting to %s